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Chavi Gupta

@Irishlily-7795

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

O.M.G.
Yaar its freaking amazing 😉
Plz do write more.Aisa lag raha h jaise parth naam k suraj k hamare tv screens jalane k baad sandhir ki baarish ho rahi h 😆

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Sweta Paul

@SwetaRocking123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: IheartDramione
Oh.My.Freaking.God.
*speechless* Uh. Wow. This is really beautiful! You definitely have a way with your words! Imperfectly perfect. Feels like you poured out all your love and passion into the OS. Oh...I desperately await the day when she confesses this!
Dil khush kar diya! You are totally awesome!

P.S: I just loved the OS! Love love loved it! *bombards Sweta with chocolate*
P.P.S: Keep rocking!

Sanchi! Baby, Do You Have Any Idea How Much I Love You Doll?

You Liked It So Much? Aww...I am Really Touched cutipie!

LoL. So Many Chocolates? *Stuffs Them Into Mouth*

Love You Loads!

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Sweta Paul

@SwetaRocking123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: BrunoMars
You girl, are so amazing, so rocking it actually hurts. It was so beautiful to read, so perfectly well intertwined, so perfectly flowing and the perfect use of every word, you almost, no you can't imagine another word, you can't replace anything, because it's all a part of a whole. It's so beautiful.
the one so exceedingly flawed, so agonizingly damaged, so ecstatically imperfect, that he turned out to be just perfect for me.
That part was the most beautiful of it all. It just, ah! It's perfect. I can't tell you how much I love it. I just reread it from time to time. It's inspirationally good.

I am So Glad You Liked it Menika. I am very touched by your review. I was actually having so many self doubts about posting it, but now that you guys are actually liking it, it feels great. Thank You

Lots Of Love

Sweta

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Sweta Paul

@SwetaRocking123

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Irishlily-7795
O.M.G.
Yaar its freaking amazing 😉
Plz do write more.Aisa lag raha h jaise parth naam k suraj k hamare tv screens jalane k baad sandhir ki baarish ho rahi h 😆

Parth Naam Ka Suraj? Sandhir Ki Baarish? 🤣 OMG I already love you!😳 Thank u!😃

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Hey! I have read this. Can't believe I did not leave a comment. Shahosh'eu kuloyeni maybe. :P

"You are the Perfect Guy. Just Not The Perfect Guy For Me."

Said it all. Seriously. A quotation this apt has never been used before. :D
I love this OS. God knows why I did not comment. :P

I thought long back ki je I'll write from Sanyukta's prospect. But I seriously, couldn't make her mind out. you have done it with grace. If perfection was an objective truth, I'd call this perfect. :)

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Bojhena she bojhena! Bojhena she bojhena!

I want this song to have a hindi version as it is apt of such plots.

You call this to be your first time? It is much much much beyond that. Such a verse of hardly two-hundred words, yet all emotions and pain has been SO well described. Randhir is the lead without any diologue or presence, this is what makes this work SO beautiful. Wonderful work Miss Wetty! I am really glad to read this!

Diary ka ek panna! I had a chapter in literature after this name. I so wish you had written that my duhling! Absolutely brilliant. Ordinary story made extraordinary, which makes me love this piece more and more and more!

Stay blessed, be calm and live life to the fullest...Keep writing!

Regards

Iptisha!

Edited by BeyondWords - 11 years ago