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Shreyasi Ganguly

@123456me

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

ahhaaa super... @ 1st i thought it was Sarth,... bt after reading... i m tooo happyyy thnnxxx😛

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sandhir.candy

@sandhir.candy

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow sweta u r really good writer...!!

i m speechless it was just perfect

short & simple

u described all the emotions perfectly

your os remind me of some lessons i have teach in my life

too much perfection is also one imperfection...& very dangerous

if u r perfect ur life will be so boring bcz there will be nothing left to learn in your life & it some how stops ur life where the truth is life goes on...so we are...perfection somewhere puts full stop to ur growth & it's important to grow at every stage & every day of ur life...

& there is a hidden perfection in ur imperfection...as it allows u to learn those lessons which perfection won't allow u...

in short,imperfection leads u to perfection & perfection leads u nowhere & if lead it leads u only to imperfection...😛

& when it comes to love according to me it's not love if u need reasons to love someone...

kafi lambi speech ho gayi in short ur os is that much good that it turned my mind on & my thoughts r now on the rocket speed😆

very beautiful os & title suites perfectly loved it😳

u must write more...if this is ur first os then must say if u try u can become a very good writter

your cafe sis

chandni😊

Edited by sandhir.candy - 11 years ago

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Mayuri

@xxMaYxx

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

OMG! 😲

All I can say is WOW! Just wow! 👏

I love your writing style! 😊

This story is absolutely captivating!

The first line itself pulls in a reader and makes them want to keep going!

One of the best OS! 😉

Keep up the good work! 👍🏼

Love,

mayuri

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just call me lil.

@ournewboyfriend

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

That was beautiful. Words described very well and I love how she thinks Parth is too perfect for her. Flawed personalities :)

- that came 'straight from my heart'

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arshifan2012

@arshifan2012

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Sweta! Thank God ur back! Missed u so much! 🤗 u dedicated this to me too? Kya baat hai! Im getting all phamous nowadays! 🤣 cafe sisters ke sangat ka asar! 🤣 okay now coming back to the OS! OMG! 😲 u wrote such a beautiful piece , i loved it re! Especially fevicol's part! 😈 and the way u described Randhir through sanyu's emotion was mindblowing! "imperfectly perfect" is the phrase! I loved it! Wish it was longer though! 😔 u know me right? What my gutter mind was expecting? *coughs* 🤣 and this was the best drabble i've ever read! It was simple yet effective re! Darun! 🤗 and i love u too re...u stay the way u r too! And thanks u sooo much for the dedication! Means a lot to me! 😃

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tiara888

@tiara888

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

this is beautiful sweta...truly straight from the heart ❤️
your writing is really good . keep writing more...

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Piyu

@100littledevils

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

This is soo beautiful. Short but impactful ! Imperfection is all she needs to excel in life. Sanyukta needs her Randhir becoz he excites her, challenges her, completes her <3

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luvsandhir

@luvsandhir

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Its beautiful...
It's just perfect..I'm short of words! Simply fab!
Lovely OS!❤️ pls keep writing!

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--Kkkhushiii--

@--Kkkhushiii--

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

This was so beautiful

One of the best I've read

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duskykaaya

@duskykaaya

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

it is awesome Sweta...I am in love with this OS...This truly defines Randhir Singh Shekhawat..I really hope that the show makes this OS true...Keep writing..PM me whenever you write your next OS,SS,FF or article...
Love
Kaaya

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