'Straight From The Heart' - My First OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: Sarunforeva

I'm excited *Yaay *

You're writing?

Brilliant .

Res .. Reading it now :D

UNRES ---

Wow!

I'm actually out of words to describe this OS.

You should definitely write more.. I was so absorbed in your story, your writing is stunningly perfect.

The magic? I felt that write between the lines, there is so much more you can infer, and it leaves such a sweet taste.

Also, something that I loved and absolutely admired was the flow of writing and thoughts , it brought out the OS beautifully.

Your Vocab ! <3

Due to a lack of time and words , just Wow! Is all I can saw!

-Nidhi :)

Originally posted by: 123456me

ahhaaa super... @ 1st i thought it was Sarth,... bt after reading... i m tooo happyyy thnnxxx😛

Originally posted by: sandhir.candy

wow sweta u r really good writer...!!

i m speechless it was just perfect

short & simple

u described all the emotions perfectly

your os remind me of some lessons i have teach in my life

too much perfection is also one imperfection...& very dangerous

if u r perfect ur life will be so boring bcz there will be nothing left to learn in your life & it some how stops ur life where the truth is life goes on...so we are...perfection somewhere puts full stop to ur growth & it's important to grow at every stage & every day of ur life...

& there is a hidden perfection in ur imperfection...as it allows u to learn those lessons which perfection won't allow u...

in short,imperfection leads u to perfection & perfection leads u nowhere & if lead it leads u only to imperfection...😛

& when it comes to love according to me it's not love if u need reasons to love someone...

kafi lambi speech ho gayi in short ur os is that much good that it turned my mind on & my thoughts r now on the rocket speed😆

very beautiful os & title suites perfectly loved it😳

u must write more...if this is ur first os then must say if u try u can become a very good writter

your cafe sis

chandni😊

Originally posted by: aciddaisies

That was beautiful. Words described very well and I love how she thinks Parth is too perfect for her. Flawed personalities :)

- that came 'straight from my heart'

Originally posted by: xxMaYxx

OMG! 😲

All I can say is WOW! Just wow! 👏

I love your writing style! 😊

This story is absolutely captivating!

The first line itself pulls in a reader and makes them want to keep going!

One of the best OS! 😉

Keep up the good work! 👍🏼

Love,

mayuri

Originally posted by: arshifan2012

Sweta! Thank God ur back! Missed u so much! 🤗 u dedicated this to me too? Kya baat hai! Im getting all phamous nowadays! 🤣 cafe sisters ke sangat ka asar! 🤣 okay now coming back to the OS! OMG! 😲 u wrote such a beautiful piece , i loved it re! Especially fevicol's part! 😈 and the way u described Randhir through sanyu's emotion was mindblowing! "imperfectly perfect" is the phrase! I loved it! Wish it was longer though! 😔 u know me right? What my gutter mind was expecting? *coughs* 🤣 and this was the best drabble i've ever read! It was simple yet effective re! Darun! 🤗 and i love u too re...u stay the way u r too! And thanks u sooo much for the dedication! Means a lot to me! 😃

Originally posted by: tiara888

this is beautiful sweta...truly straight from the heart ❤️
your writing is really good . keep writing more...

Originally posted by: 100littledevils

This is soo beautiful. Short but impactful ! Imperfection is all she needs to excel in life. Sanyukta needs her Randhir becoz he excites her, challenges her, completes her <3