SANDHIR SS--BANKS OF RIVER-chapter8 on pg18 - Page 2

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Awesome update. Please continue soon.
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super awesome update dear 👍🏼
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Great start...ss has a lot of potential...they both dnt know that the person, they r thinking about, is just in frnt of em...would love to read d future updates, so plz plz pm me wen u update!! Dnt dorget!! Will b waiting!!😳
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awesome
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HEY i am back with the second part hope you enjoy and thank you for such lovely feedback.


chapter 2


it is night time sanyukta and kaustuki are in their room sitting silently.sanyukta got a call from her mom her mom told her that her father and brother was mad at her.sanyukta chatted about her college with her mom and kept the phone.

"hey sanyukta you look tensed is there any problem???"asked kaustuki

"voh kaustuki avtually dad and bhai don't want me to do mechanical engineering but it is my dream my passion.i can't leave it so I ran from my house and came here but now dad is very angry on me.i don't know what he will do now ??"said sanyukta

"it's ok everything will be fine no one will stop you from completing your studies"said kaustuki with assuring smile

"let's sleep or else we will be late for class"said sanyukta and went to sleep

And they went off to sleep

Meanwhile in randhir's room he was punching her punching bag

"how dare she talk like that??kuch toh karma padega"he said

"kya randhir bhai itni raat ho chuki hai pls sleep na"jiggy said

"agar tumhe sona hai to so jao I will sleep when I want"randhir said

After some time randhir went to sleep

Flashback in dream

Bang!

Sanyukta woke up with a start. What was that? Was it the monster under her bed? She closed her eyes, too scared to look.

Bang!

There it was again. What was it? She quickly switched her lamp on and the whole room flooded with light. There, much better! She hated the dark.

Bang!

This time the sound made her glance towards the window. The sound was coming from there wasn't it? She tiptoed towards it, afraid that her father would wake up in the next room and shout at her again for waking him up. As she glanced out of the window, she could make out the rough outline of mr.attitude standing below her window - hunting for a...rock? She quickly glanced at her clock - 2.10 am. What was he doing here so late?

"Psssht! Kya hai?" she whispered as loud as she could.

"Neeche aa!"

"Itni raat ko? Papa ghar se nikaal denge. Pagal ho gaye ho kya?"

"Main upar aata hoon phir!"

Just as he began to climb the tree that grew right outside her window, she panicked and shouted again as low as she could, "Nahiii mr.attitude gir jaoge. Main aati hoon."

Not understanding what he wanted at this time of the night, she crept down the stairs making sure her father doesn't wake up. Quietly she exited the house and shut the door behind her.

He was standing there, a wide grin on his face.

"Tum marwaoge mujhe!"

"Chal mere saath!"

He grabbed her hand and started running. Confused as to what was happening, she tagged along, angry and sleepy.

"Kahaaan?"

"are wahi jahaan aaj jana chahiye it's Christmas chal church"said randhir

"church is waqt are you mad??"asked sanyukta

"kyun?hum har baar too church jaate hai"said randhir

"haan jate hain but it is midnight.dad ko pata chala ki main bahar hunt oh I wiil be dead "sanyukta said

"but I was feeling alone toh maine socha .."said a sad and equally angry randhir

"ok sorry mr.attitude ab maan jao mr attitude"

"sanyukta pls get up it is the fifth call"said kaustuki

Sanyukta get up with a jerk "mr attitude"

"hey kya hua are you ok??"asked kaustuki

"ya I am ok"said sanyu

"waise who is mr attitude tum neend mein uska naam le rhe the"kaustuki asked

Sanykta cut her short "kaustuki I have to get ready fast warna late ho jayenge"and went to washroom

In randhir's room

Randhir and jiggy were ready.

"randhir bhai ek baat puchoon??"asked jiggy

"bolo"said randhir

"voh meethi kaun hai??"asked jiggy

"tumhe janne ki zarurat nhi hai apne kaam se kaam rakho.don't mess up with me"said a fuming randhir and he went from there

"inke jhamelon mein na hi padoon to it's better"jiggy said and went


hey guys how was it??plss lesve your feedback.pls suggest how should i proceed the story.

thank you😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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this 1 is damn good yaar!!! m really loving it
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a meeti and mr.attitude are kon i cant understand yar tell me na pls...
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So it was a childhood dream. Nice and sweet. Meethi. I hope that Sanyukta knows about it 1st. Randhir should do something really bad and later came to know about it

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