SANDHIR SS--BANKS OF RIVER-chapter8 on pg18

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hi frnds i am starting a new ss. what will happen if this hate-love relation of sandhir is from there child hood days so here is a new ss.hope you like it.here is the prologue...😛


Prologue

Sanyukta was in her dream place---F.I.T.E campus. a place she wanted to go.Though she had struggled a lot to reach here and she used to curse her luck but now she was there ,she was happy she was there in her dream place.It looked that all her struggles, her fights to come in FITE from her parents all things were worth it. now she can prove her father that she can gain a respectful place in this world on her merits.she was happy.


Randhir singh shikhawat was away from his mother and that house which haunted him.the place where his mother left him many times ignoring his need for care,love from her.now he was away from that place.after his mother he started hating every women,every girl in this world exept her.


His meethi. But now she was also not here. he has noone in this world who care for him though she was with him,but her family came in between.her father got transferred .



how was it???should i continue plss leave ur feedbacks


chapter 1-page 2

chapter 2-page 4

chapter 3-page 6

chapter 4 -page 7

chapter 5-page 10

chapter 6-page 12

chapter 7_page 15

chapter8--page 18

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it was great start, like the concept. Pls do continue!!!😊
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The prologue's great start soon
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Originally posted by: nawshi

it was great start, like the concept. Pls do continue!!!😊


thank you
will continue soon
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Originally posted by: nampi

The prologue's great start soon


thank you 😊
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will continue soon 😊
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I really like your concept! continue soon!
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very niceee dear 😊 continue
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hi everyone thank you for lovely feedback .i am here with a chapter 1 of the ss .hope you like it!!!


Chapter 1

First day in college

Sanyukta went in her room

"yeh bag kiska hai??lagta hai meri roomie ka hoga."thought sanyukta

"hi"she heard a voice from her back.she saw a girl standing there.she was cute and looked pretty too.she was wearing specs

"hi I am kaustuki and you??"she asked

"hi I am sanyukta.kaunse department mein ho tum??"asked sanyukta

"mechanical and tum IIT ya koi aur"asked kaustuki


"I am in mechanical engineering"sanyukta replied

"really thank god I have a company in mechanical eng. Yahan par iss field mein koi girl nhi hai accept tum aur main"said kaustuki

"oh to tum poora campus dekh kar aayi ho kaustuki"asked sanyu

"yup ab mujhe yahan ki har class ka pata hai "said kaustuki

"chalo we are getting late for the class"said kaustuki

"ya tum chalo main aati hun"sanyu said

Same time in boys hostel

"mein kisi se room share nhi karunga"said randhir actually shouted

"dekhiye apko inke saath room share karna padega, high authorities se orders hai koi bhi first year ka student akela nhi rahega"said peon who was standing with a boy

"done you can shift here" randhir said to the boy

"hi mera naam jignesh hai aapka naam kya hai??"the boy asked

"my name is randhir...randhir singh shikhawat"said randhir

"achha randhir bhai humein class ke liye chalna chahiye "said jiggy

"dekho tumhe room share karne ki permission di that does'nt means that we are frnds.stay away from me"he said and went

"kitne gusse se bol raha hai.bhagwaan mujhe iss randhir bhai se bacha lena"jiggy said and went

In class ,it was vardhan sir's class

All were sitting and then vardhan came and asked everyones introduction

Everyone introduced them and the class started. in middle of class sanyukta was lost somewhere so kaustuki called her

"sanyukta turn the page of the book,sanyukta ??"she said

"ya"she came out of her thoughts

Vardhan turned and saw them talking.

"girls I think so you should stop talking"he shouted diverting all the attention of students towards sanyukta and kaustuki

Then bell rang and he went out

Randhir and jignesh was sitting behind sanyukta and kaustuki.as they stood up to move randhir commented "tumhe pata hai jignesh ki inn ladkiyon ki sabse badi problem kya hoti hai ki wo duniya bhar ki bate karti hai but kaam voh to unhe aata hi nhi hai.that is why I hate girls"

Sanyukta was numb as she heard the comment but soon she came out of trance turned back and said "aur tum ladkon ki problem hai ki tum kaam karo na karo dusron par comment karne ke liye apna muh zaroor kholte ho"she said and went

Randhir had not expected such a reply from a girl.

"how dare she??"he thought and went to his room

At night,sanyukta was sitting outside on bench.she was thinking about him,her mr attitude.

FLASHBACK

sanyukta and mr.attitude was given a joint project to to complete so they were searching for books in library. sanyukta was non-stop blabbering and mr.attitude was now frustrated

"sanyukta 5 min chup nhi baith sakti.tum ladkiyon ki sabse badi problem hoti hai ki tum duniya bhar ki bate karti ho but kaam voh to tumhe aata hi nhi hai.that is why I hate girls "said mr.attitude

After that sanyukta remain silent and did not utter a word.after submitting there project sanyukta started ignoring him

When sanyukta was going out of the school,she heard someone calling her from behind .she turned and saw him

"hey tum mujhe ignore kyun kar rhi ho"said mr.attitude

"tumhi ne to kaha tha you hate girls jo zyada bate karti hai so I am ignoring as you hate me"she said and was going when he held her wrist

"oye wo to baaki girls ke liye tha u to exeption hai and I love to listen your sweet talks.ab chal CCD chalte hai"he said and took her

Her trance was broken by ringing of her phone. it was his brother's call.she was already too frustrated so she did not attended it.

"mr.attitude you know aaj main tumhe baaki din se zyaada miss kar rhi hun.see I am back in delhi aur apne dream college mein hun.i know tum mere aas paas hi ho aur abhi aakar mujhse fight karna shuru kar doge"she was interrupted by a sound

"tum yahan kya kar rhi ho?"

She turned around to find randhir standing there.sanyukta was irritated by his question so she retorted

"tumhe isse kya?atleast yumhari shaadi mein to nhi aayi"she said

"sidhe sidhe jawab nhi de sakti. waise bhi tum jaison ko mein apni shaadi mein nhi bulaunga"randhir said

"acha tumhari shadi mein aane se pehale I will die"she said and went

"mujhse aaj tak aise kisi ne baat nhi ki .tumhara naam to meethi se similar hai but tum wo kabhi nahi ho sakti.mujhse aise baat karne ke liye tumhe bhuktaan karna padega miss sanyukta aggarwal"he said to himself

how was it??pls leave your feed back😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update
Plz plz continue soon
Tanx for the pm

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