SS: Realising what he has done. Scene 5-Page 19

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kafa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Wow just loved it. Beautiful update, please continue

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sweet cherry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Loved da update it was amazing
Plzzz do continue soon
Thank u for da pm

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JJ15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Aish,

Just caught up with your SS. Loved all the parts. Ahem's like a lost child now without his Gopi. She has to take care of him and bring him back to what he was before.

Update soon please. 😃

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Aish3003

@Aish3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: Joicej
Aish,
Just caught up with your SS. Loved all the parts. Ahem's like a lost child now without his Gopi. She has to take care of him and bring him back to what he was before.

Update soon please. 😃

Thanks Joice!

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suk19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

wow more plse loved it all the emotions poor aham

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Nandita / Tina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Aish, you are a wonderful story teller 👏
What a beautiful, incredibly heart wrenching, angsty piece of writing😭☺️❤️...it tore my heart into many pieces ...I could feel Ahem's suffocation, angst, the way you have made him choke silently and violently hope you'll stitch it back again with another fabulous piece.
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Aish3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: 5cents
Aish, you are a wonderful story teller 👏
What a beautiful, incredibly heart wrenching, angsty piece of writing😭☺️❤️...it tore my heart into many pieces ...I could feel Ahem's suffocation, angst, the way you have made him choke silently and violently hope you'll stitch it back again with another fabulous piece.
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Thank you so much Tina!! Means a lot to me. 😳