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Angela

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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing I love how he is acting insecure and a bit childish. I cannot wait to read more.

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FlowerHater

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow wow wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!! Loved it aish!!!!! plzplzzplzz update the next part soon as well!!!!!! thanks for the pm!!!

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Parvathy_sns

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hmmm... I dnt kno wt to say... U've left me speechles onc mor... Dis ws a long pst bt it had every minute reaction in detail... N dat too in a lovely way... I lovd it frm d btm f ma heart... Lovely... Lovely... Lovely... I ws picturing each n every scene... Nw dats donly option we hv left for d tym being... N it ws sooo beautiful... U've gt a nyc style f writin... Keep it up... God bless... N for this lovely post... Muaaah... Waitin fr d nxt update...n thanx again for d pm...

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ritika

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Posted: 13 years ago

Oh, it was so emotional. loved it .thanks for pm.

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sravz23

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Posted: 13 years ago

u do have a gift of penning down emotions in a nice way that makes

me feel them

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Aish3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks all you guys!!

I am so happy you all read it! Cheers to all of you!

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Savi_S

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was awesome. I was totally engrossed in it. U have Beautifully written ahems pain. Plz update soon n thanx for pm.

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Aish3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: svtsns
That was awesome. I was totally engrossed in it. U have Beautifully written ahems pain. Plz update soon n thanx for pm.

Thanks a lot!! 😳

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lovv

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Posted: 13 years ago

really i dnt hav words 2 explain... its superb...i like d way u r expressing their feelings, (pain, sadness., happiness)... thanks 4 d update...

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yhm_craze

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Posted: 13 years ago

omg...that was super brilliant! 👏

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