SS: Realising what he has done. Scene 5-Page 19

Vinder90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

I am running out of words to say tho awesome this is. . . every moment of him thinking is spot on. . . exactly how he wud raelyl be if this happened in real SNS. .

you are a genius. . absolutely epic SS. . 👏

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GiNa_kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Aish 🤗 🤗
and *a standing ovation*👏 👏 👏
I read all the 5 scenes in a row.Woww! what a story!!!⭐️
I wanted Ahem to suffer for Gopi too. But for some reason I was having tears. Well written. I could find no words to express. Loved it to the core😳 Can't wait for the next scene😊

Edited by gohem_ka - 13 years ago

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jazz54321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

an excellent update ⭐️

- Really love how your portraying Ahem - all his dreams/flashbacks/recalls and Gopi also hurting with him but being firm and making him listen to her 👍🏼

- waiting for the next scene.. 😊

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Aish3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: snsaufan
an excellent update ⭐️
- Really love how your portraying Ahem - all his dreams/flashbacks/recalls and Gopi also hurting with him but being firm and making him listen to her 👍🏼
- waiting for the next scene.. 😊

Thanks a lot... Glad you liked it!

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sweety

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Awww ...why did the scene have to end ...Beautiful update aish ...very very very well written...the last few lines were my fav starting from where Kokila left the room ...awesome update Aish ...enjoyed reading and yeh dil maange more .

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Tahira

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

fantastic aish👏👏👏👏 frighten to the core of losing gopi ... loved the bangle scene in his feverish state he could not even hear her bangles 😲😲😲 scared and so he should be ..but why do i feel sorry for him 😕😕😕😕

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Aish3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: tamzin43
fantastic aish👏 frighten to the core of losing gopi ... loved the bangle scene in his feverish state he could not even hear her bangles 😲😲😲 scared and so he should be ..but why do i feel sorry for him 😕

You do? Don't hate me... but it might increase in a way in the next few scenes...

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Vinder90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Aish3003

You do? Don't hate me... but it might increase in a way in the next few scenes...

i am growing restless now. . .cant wait for next update. .

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Aish3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Vinder90

i am growing restless now. . .cant wait for next update. .

He doesn't get Gopi just like that... 😉

On a serious note... like I have always said... I picturize most of the stuff through Ahem... only some parts through Gopi... Its only when the track on the show becomes murky like the current one, that I lose that connect with Ahem...

But am going to stick to the Ahem who is like me... And make him suffer. <Evil Laugh> I hope you guys enjoy it... It is still half baked in my head... Hope it comes out well. 😊

Thanks again for all the encouragement.

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Tahira

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Posted: 13 years ago

#170