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Xarina

@Xarina

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Aish this was very touching. somehow i missed the last update and managed to catch up. Very, very touching. Pretty soon I shall be giving you a 21 tear salute coupled with a 21 hug. Thank you for two lovely updates.

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doc4ever

@doc4ever

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

It was a beautiful update Aish! 👏 Ahem and Gopi are both suffering in pain silently and yet the love between them is growing stronger and stronger day by day, and Ahem's regret and sadness for hs past behaviour is coming to the fore now and he wants everything to be the way it was and make it better...

Cannot wait for the next update..This was again, just brilliant! ⭐️

Thank you! 😛

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

nice start . loved it.wow. really loved it

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varshu27

@varshu27

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Wow aish...that was some update ...loved it...the scenes that ahem remembered of the past are all that we want him think in sns...could feel both ahem and gopis pain...ahem finally understands that gopis love is his strength...cant wait for the next update...thanks for the pm...

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A2ZVictory

@A2ZVictory

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Aish, Aish, Aish. It was an excellent update. Pls update soon. Eagerly waiting

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

That was a wonderful update Aish.

The length had met its purpose.

Ahem had experienced very deep and dark moments of realisation of his life with Gopi. Now he is hanging on a thin thread of hope.

Looking forward to the next update.

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Hetal

@Hetp

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Aish I'm speechless...indeed it was a heart touching...
You have potrayed ahem pains...feelings to get back gopi very well...loved it alot...
thank u so much for the pm

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Nihira-fan

@Nihira-fan

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

oh such a heart wrenching,superb update!!!i had teary eyes while reading it!!brilliantly written!thanks so much for the pm!

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Wow aish that was so beautifully done , so emotional and u described his turmoil so vividly . His dialogues and actions are so well portrayed and conveyed as to how desperate he feels ,he seems like a man in a desert whose oasis is Gopi , I absolutely adored reading this.thanks for the pm

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Rope_of_Hope

@Rope_of_Hope

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#150

wow...!aish excellent .👏.!heart wrenching...!reallly he has to repent in this way in sns too...!loved to the core..!thanks for the wonderful update aish...!👏thanks for the PM...!

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