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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: navyab

waiting for the next part !!!



thanks, expect it on Thursday. . 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tamzin43

first of all very good os👍🏼 second.. brilliant update👏👏 ..third it was hilarious😆 the way you've put it on paper like i was watching a movie too good👏👏👏 really i was laughing so much 😆because you where funny with your comments well done 👏 keep it up 👍🏼 can,t wait for the next instalment 😉



THanks for the very very very encouraging Comment

If u had the view of me writing it, i was multitasking over the whole hour, but kept coming back to add more. . . and that led to teh rather big size drag of the search process. . (I honestly felt dumb founded myself as to where to look for GOpi lol, ) AND yeah , the commericial break idea also made me go biserk lol, but I tried to control myself ::: Need the funny comments there lol to also keep myself in momentum lol. . . I will make up for all missed opportunities in next part. . Thursday
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshu27

lovely update vinder...o love ur sense of humour...glad to see ahem suffering...cant wait for the next update...



😃 I tried to throw in my personal feelings lol and turned out to be rather funny lol, it kept me going thru to finish that part lol, THat will be the only heavy draggy part in this OS, i will be sure to make the next ones Dhamakedaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rsk16

very nicely done.gr8 update


thanks :) I will make next one cover for all the drag in this one, Once I have found my mood thats right for writing that part will try to make that a lot better than part 2
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidishaa

You write really well


thanks 😃 , but really, i have a lot of hard work to do to improve and be up to standards lol , thanks for the modest comment though 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: snsaufan

⭐️a fantastic update..👍🏼 .. loving how you have the whole family and especially Ahem all shattered with her leave and can;t wait to read Ahem and Gopis reaction on bumping at each other as well as what Ahem is going to do about the letter that he supposedly wrote to her..




You, as the title of the os says, Worst Nightmare in Reality, I am gonna be making as many characters face their worst nightmares::: AHem currently going thru One, and I will . .. well just wait for next part lol. . 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks 😃 I will make part 3 more worth it. . 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arnisha

lovely waiting 4 the nxt part..



that will be written and completed Thursday 😊 , Hope you will like it. . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃 😃 😃

THanks for all the great comments guys, really appreciate it. . .

Part 2 was not as Hmmm, good in my pov as part 1, coz when i was writing part 1, I cud feel heat coming out of my brainz. . .

ANd my comments in between part 2, hopefully shud have given you an indication as to how i was feeling while writing it :::

Hmmm::: I felt wierd Bringin TEJAS into this lol. . . So tried to keep him at bay by indrodcing him back with his mother::: and as a person who raelly respects GOpi. . .like sister. . . and well-wisher. . . Its wont be the last of him . . . 😊

ALSO, sorry for the drag on part 2, :: I am sure most of you also did not like a still dumb founded Ahem ::::: BUT dont worry, Part 3 will give him such a Jhatka (I hope:: Thats if I get inspired and go beserk then i will be to convery that mood in my writing) ) That will pull him out of that state. . .

WIll do my best to keep this in momentum. . . Part 2 will be the most draggy and more boring parts for most readers i believed, and even me:::: PART 3 will make up for all the shortcomings. .

OMG OMG OMG:: No one noticed. . AHem first time went to Kahna Ji's madir to talk. . .how cud I forget to include SD memories. . .. . . OOO NOOO

hmm, not to despair::; I will drag that PARt in as well. . . when i see its right to be brought back in. . but will surely ocme in, coz I am desperate that in real SNS his memory comes back, so till then i will take out all my wishes in this OS lol

AND thanks again for all the encouragement, makes my day and gives me a lot of encouragement . .. I am in debt now to give yuo all readers, better quality stuff to read. . . So PART 3, hopefully will do that trick. . 😊 AND again, thanks for reading, and all support, 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was one super update.

You had high drama. Intense numbness from Ahem, the wickedness from Urmila and Rashi's selfish behaviour.

Great to know that Anita no inclinations of anything but to help out Ahem to realise his love for Gopi.

Good luck for your exams.

Thanks for the precap. Now looking forward to your next update.

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