Guys:: This may not be as good as first Part. . coz I wrote the first part in a fit of Rage and mild humour personally. . SO last 2 days GOhem have melted me. . . But latest promo has set me on Fire of exxiteement. . BUt as I said , I never thought of this to be a OS, just a prediction long shot lol, but it evolved into an OS. . . .
I got exams, but have a half day break 2moro, and need a break, so decided to catch Up on updating this. . . I hope you like it. . . 😊 (WarningL this is rather draggy , mostly dwells on Mm family search, but leads on to Gopi being found by someone else, and paves way for part 3, which I will precap at the end of this part 2)
PART 2: THE SEARCH BEGINS::
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Ahem was no all lost , he could sense no one around him. All he was concerned about was Gopi, who was nowhere to be seen, and it was apaprent from the information she wrote in that book, that Gopi had left MM, because she felt that she had come between Ahem Anita. . . she had really left
Ahem made a dash for the book Gopi wrote : : he cud remember how easily Gopicould get emotionally entangled. . and most specifically remembered. . the moemnt when she wrote 2mum Dad" whil in the education track, she did not tell enyone what was bothering her, but her heart hiden feelings reciprocated on paper. .. . Tears were still flowing freely and he had no idea what was going on around him . . . he looked as confused as hell as to what has happened. . .it was his worst nightmre.. . he could not evey breath easily with GOpi not by his side. . . things were getting out of control . . . .
Meanwhile, MM members were recuperating, and Anita was getting her head together after that mega-slap that Ahem had landed on her. . .
Suddenly, Ahem could feela grip tightening around his arm . . . he got back to reality of those around him and his eyes popped when he say his mom holdnig his hand in a very very ANDGRY mode. . .
Kokile yells at ahem::: Ab kya but ban ke khal'e raho ge??? (Now will you just stand there like a idiot????
Kuck karo, meri Gopi vahu ko dhoondo. . .kahan hogi kaisi haalat mein hogil Dhoondo use??? (What state and where she might be in!!!!!!!?? FIND HER
Jigar remembered that gopi told him that whenever she was hurt or felt bad she would always go to her Kahna Ji for ocnsolation. . . so just as his bhabhi , who he really respected, had predicted before about Jigar being at mandir during Raji seperation build up. . Jigar quickly pointed out the possibility that she might be with her Kahna Ji at the colony Mandir. . .
Jigar then turned to AHem who was al silent in deep thought, and asked him to go to the mandir. . .. . Jigar was like 🤢 he thought"What the hell is Ahem bhai up to now??? " and then told everyone that he was alone going to go and search for Gopi bhabhi at the mandirs, and at as many places as she could. . .
Chirag rushed forward while AHem was upstairs and proclaimed he was gonna call his police commisioner friend and get him to organise a search party all around the vicinity , RN, and Rajkot, and at all public transport links. . and the commisioner told him that some inspector would come to Mm to inquire more ?? chirag said no problem, jsut make it FAST!!!!
now this was getting odd>>> Ahem had totally ignored Jigarand went running like Usian Bolt, back to his room, and found that Gopi belongings, her clothes, jewelerry, Kahna Ji, everything that belonged to her, was all there in the room. ... so he thought where could she be, has she really left???? she never leaves her Kahna Ji behind , what is this. . .. . I have been in the room all this time , where could GOpi be. . . he checked cup board again and saw Gopi's secret stuff collection:: and went thru the whole thing. . . . what he saw shocked the core out of him, THE LETTER , 😲😲😲 He now understood that this cud have also played a part in getting Gopi discouraged , and his treatment of her too, Flashbacks of the slap came by him and he felt absolutely shaterred. . . He pocketed the LETTER for the time coz finding Gopi was priority 1, but he was still dumb struck as to where ???? He had just realized his undtyng Long term developed love for her, and all this past was buzzing past him. YELLING at him, !!!!
he then did a lap of the entire Modi house, and while in the garden, he found Gopi's broken Payal .. . . and some blood . . blood coming out of a Rose Flower lying on the ground. . . the blood stain was on some thorns that the rose flower had, and immediately Ahem had flashbacks of the moment at Valentines whe he had first iem willingly given Gopi a red rose::
Gopi had treasured that Rose flower by always keeping it under Kahna Ji's feet at the mandir. .
" He cursed himself for not saying those 3 words to Gopithen" He regretted why just didnt hug her after being apart from her for just 2 days. . .He remembered the agony and pain he went through in just the 2 days that Gopi had left him unwillingly. .. and then quickly realised that GOpi had left Mm through the back garden whose one entrance was by the Mandir. . .
AHem then quickly walked back in the house, and noticed everyone runnig around with His kaka, talking to some police guy that arrived, and askin for Gopi's picture and then leaving off for the search. . .. Parag was also in a very shocked and worried state trying to console Koki.. .
He then rushed intot he room, thinking more and more about Gopi , just Gopi who was on his mind. . and remembered how much he had wanted to Color her on holi, but could never do. . . and then turned back and went to Kahna ji's mandir just behind him
Meanwhile Parag just had another search location, at her mami's house, he quickly ran up tothe phone and called Urmi's house, only to be answered after making calls over 5 imes, and talking to a half asleep Urmi. . Parag asked her if Gopi had come to their house, and Urmi says "Why the hell wud that gawar dcome to my house??? Parage" went, what, WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY????,,, Urmi then quickly got up and saidn, 2Hmm, Gopi, nahi who to yaha nahi aaai" Listening to how loudly Urmi had spoken, Jeetu bhai woke up just as if 5 o clock early cock had woken him up . . and asked what the matter is??/ Urmi tells him that Gopi had left Mm, and was missing since the last 2-3 hours. .. . Jeetu snatched the phone from Urmi, leaving a few scratch marks on Urmi's hand, and Urmi went baakc to bed, thinking it was great that Gopi gawar had left, now at least Rashi could rest in peace and rule in Mm. . .
Jeetu then tells Parag that even he and Dhawal wil also try to find Gopi and then gets up hurriedly and wakes up Dhwal, and makes list of all the places Gopi cuold possible go to, based on her pre0marriage life::: and came up with, yeah, RN Mandir cose to Urmi house,
Panna's house, the Rajpal Nagar community well where Gopi would like to spend time alone when Urmi used to beat her up, . . .. (sorry cud not think of any more):: ANd Jeetu and Dhawal search party head off to those locations. .
Meanwhile Anita whois alive now and more charged, walks up to koki and says "Dont worry aunty, everything will be fine" , Koki just grabs her hand and crys more, . . and also thanks Anita for getting Ahem out of his trance. . Anita:: "Aunti ji, I know I have unwillingly and willingly been a caouse of all this, but believe me, i have no intention to come between Ahem and Gopi, I already married to Nilesh and I love him. . if my and AHem's love was true we would have both fought for it till death, and wuodl have been together now, God makes the Jodis, and I founf my perfect life partner in nilesh. . .
AHem meanwhile as kahna ji mandir was thinking :::: Kahna Ji, all my time with Gopi i have given her nothing but pain. . . Why kahna ji why. . . I have given her so much pain et she kept bearing me each time i insulted her, demeaned her, and even hirt her feelings, Kanha Ji i dont deserve her. . and slowly Ahem breaks down to tears and fels a hand touch his back. . .
It was Koki, she told Ahem everything would be all right . .. Ahem then goes, Mom she has nothing with her, nothing at all, she just left without any belongings and no sign .. .
Koki then noticed blood coming out of Ahem's hand. . she quickly grabbed hold of it, AHem wasstill carrying the Rose flower... .. Koki asks Ahem where he found that, and Ahem answers "in the garden" . . In other hand ahem had GOpi's payal and claimed to be found in the garden. . . Koki the shouts at Ahem::::: "Ahem tumhari biwi laapata hui hai, aur tum aise gum sum hookar Ghuum rahe ho.. ... jaaago, aur Kuch kaaro . . . "
Just as koki finished her line, Jigar arrived with a very sad face, depicting he had not found Gopi yet. . . Chirag and Parag lloked more worried but they honestly had no place to search .. . totally dumbfounded. . . Ahem got out of his trance and immediately called to Jigar, and asked him to come out tothe garden, and at end of garden the was a back road, and they decided to split up and look for Gopi. . .
Gopi had been unfound for over 5 hours now and the search and patience was heavily taking a toll on all Modi members. . . Jeetu bhai and Dhawal also reported back that GOpi was still not found. . .
AND NOW TO the continuity PART. . .
Gopi/ / / / . . . . / / / / . . . . / / / /
had been walking in an absolutely dumb founded way absolutely lost and no clue as to where she was headed, . . . she was just following some road , and did not know where it was leading too. all she did was just kep walking forward. . . . Her tears were all dried up now . .
SUDDENLY:::: some car got very close to hitting her. . . got within a metre close Blinding her, coz the DAMn Driver also had FOG LIGHT ON, LOL . . .
Back to the boring bit. . . .
SUSPENSE. . .
Meanwhile, in Mm, the cops called back. . . first to answer the call was Rashi, standing just by the phone. . . and was very fast to ask if they found GOpi or not. . .. . . The cops said something that made the phone fall out of Rashi's hands. . . . Everyone noticed that this might be D-DAy. . . .and ran toward the phone like mad. . . Chirag picked up the phone, and asked ina reserved tone:: 2 yes inspector , please tell me , have you found her???/
inspector: no, but we have received reports that three ladies , looked in their twenties had been just admitted to hospital . . . All three were unconscious, . . . . one was in critical condition at hospital after a car accident, another had a pregnancy issue, so was admitted , and was all alone, and the third one , nothing was known about her but she was admitted to hospital as well. . . . . . . 😕::: That worried chirag, coz any of those 3 cud be GOpi,
COMMERCIAL BREAK( but the pregnant one . . . hmm most likely not. . . )😉 (I hate pregnancy track so it wont be in my OS either lol. . so dont worry, I will le tu all know its not this one. . . ) 😃 I am trying to patch it all up sensible, spend about 30 minutes so far. . . up to this point
BACK TO Gopi, yay
Gopi was shocked to the core, and collapsed. . . simple, just fainted at an unknown road. . . few food stalls were around her . . . some pple noticed.. and at taht time of the night a very small crowd of about 4 😭 (too small) people had formed. . . . our of the car
Tejas and his mother. . . and imediately recognised that it was Gopi Ahem Modi Ji that he had nearly hit and ran over but was saved at last moment. . .
Tejas's mom asked if he knew her, and Tejas told her mom that it was Gopi Ji, due to who his saree designer success sky rocketed. Gopi had made such a design on the mended Lehng a that Tejas applied that design, permuted it and created the most uniques design set of clothing collections and been sooo sucessfu::: he was already sucessful befoer his enounter with the Modis, but after that little incidenet last Navratri at Modi house, Tejas design collection had expanded infinietly, and he had also began making a name for himself abroad. . .
They then put Gopi in their car and went to hospital . . . . . . .
MM family now Chirag relayed all the information back to family and all were dumbstruck, and then decided to let Ahem, Jigar know, so that they cud come home with the caars, and then go to hospital. . .
Hetal then just realised Baa was still asleep. . .and indeed found her to be sleeping thru al of this, and decided not to awke her/ tell her, because it would just make it worse for her, and at this age it will not be right to give shocks to anyone. . .
She went back and told Rashi to stay back till they came back. . . Rashiinsisted she wanted to Go, but Hetal firmy siad "Rashi YOU STAY BACK NOW. . " Please take care of BAA, while we are away"""
Ahem, Jigar had returned and goten family packed in cars , and headed to hospital all with shocked faces. . .Ahem was absoluteyly LOST. . .
Modi family reached hospital and rushed inside to look for GOpi. . .. Ahem sensed Gopi as never before , sensed that she was close to him in a way. . . .being at hospital. .. he withdrew as all his family settled in, he waited outside. . . DUMBSTRUCK . . . .
Meanwhile,
Tejas and his mom had admitted Gopi to hospital and were now by her side for the time being , doctors were givin her a normal check up, and reported back that there were no issues at all. . . . she was very stressed, and looked as if she hadnt eaten for days. . .
Then tejas and mom were called away for a while to fill in some form . . . (oh God i hate form filling)
bu yeah. / / / . . . . Gopi regained consciousness and realised where she was and wondered what happened::; flashbacks of car scene hit her, and then TO HER SHOCK:::: SHe heard Modi family rushing past her hospital room to . .
Umm why did they not look to her room??? Why were they in hospital??? WEll they were there to find her, but she did not know, and they were concerned with only checking for confirmation that none of the 3 accident /hospicatl cases were Gopi. . . ..
Gopi knew she had to get away, becaus she couldnot see Ahem ji in hospital. . . and thought that he was still angry with her, and she did not want to make it any worse for him . . .. she felt very guilty about having to do this, but thought this to be best option for her Ahem ji's hapiness. . .
Gopi quickly got up. . .no strings attacked to her, thank God, she reall dreaded injections, imagine the pain of her having to see and injection and take it out herself from her ,,, the very though(gave me the writer, funny cute thoughts) :: SHe was already in her normal clothes, and made a run for it. . .she remembered it was same hospital as she was during accident time, and had remmbered way out roughly. . .and decided to makea RUN FOR IT. . she did not want to be found, coz if that happend she wud have to go to MM , adn that wud make AHem ji sad, and more unhappy and angrier, . . .so she decided she;d better bolt. . .
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Very very very very sorry guys, its just my first OS, and i rarely plan things out... . . SO u might have experienced many boring moments. . .
But donw worry:: I have woken up from my dream::: what my base 2 minute thought plan was a SS,, but coz of exams i wont be able to update, and I am a mood-based writer. . . I can write without relyin on mood, but I love writing things when my mood and half mind and hald heart do the writing. .
I deviated from my 5 minute thought of plan, about Gopi location revelation in part 3, but did it sooner)
BUT I WILL LEAVE A HOPEFULLY PROMISING PRECAP
PRECAPModi family dashes into Tejas
Gopi dashes into Ahem . . . . Gopi tantrums start . . (Xarina inspired me via OS Gopi Tantrums but I will try to make this one different. in my own way hopefully)
Anita gets her Marriage DVD in the morning next day. . .(Hmm, inspired by today's episode)
PLans so far:: WEll after this:: I might dedicate some parts +sections to Kk revelations, ANd by end of it i will be giving Gopi a career. . .
Overall:: I hope i did not bore yuo much< i have been clouded by exams, but I will stick to my promise, I needed a break, and i fulfilled my promise of doing part 2 by end of Tuesday (UK time)
So hope you like it, sorry for any mistakes. . AND sorry for any erors, I have to get back to revision now. . . spent like an hour on this Part now, hmmm this OS was mood drive, and I am not in a rage mood/ hyper lol so its not as TOUGH as the first one, but the next one surely will be I will draw my MOOD from the SBB segment from today (1st Apr)😃
Edited by Vinder90 - 13 years ago
