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I have been quiet about it. .
WHY do I keep havnig nightmares for Gohem while I am awake.. . . . . . . .
I have been really hit hard by dumbfounded Ahem. . . . :: SO BEFORE EXAMS KICK OFF THIS WEEK< I BEGIN MY FIRST RATHER MORE SERIOUS OS. . .
Ad now Koki knowing is good but gave me a bad dream last night. . . . dont know how to say it, but I have exams coming up this week so want to let this load off me. . .
What i could absolutely not help stopping of thinking was
Ahem in a dumb founded lost state worries me a lot. . . he potentiall has talked rather harshly to Gopi once after seeing Anita, then apologised straight afterwards which was good. . a relief. .
But Koki knowing may bash up Ahem with a burst of his past and bad treatment of Gopi. . and mostly strikes him about his pre wedding Affair with Anita, and tells Ahem, that he has broken her(Koki's) heart by doing that. . .. Also Koki tells Anita. . . and that shocks Anita to the core. that Ahem was Nilesh and that her wedding had broken . . . she is unconsolable. . .
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PART 1 (AHEM GET OUT OF YOUR TRANCE RIGHT NOW< OR ELSE)
Ahem comes back to MM from outside. . in a very very lost, more lost than ever before, way. . absolutely dumbstruck over 10 times more than when he had seen Anita and during wedding. .
Gopi enquires his issues. . . he totally ignores her. . but Gopi never gives up , and tries to make him speak out. . . .
In his mind he is going thru the torment he had during Gohem marriage. . . and as Gopi interupts his lost state::: HE EXPLODES BIG TIME ON GOPI. . . tells her again about Anita. . tells Gopi why she stayed with him after knowing that Anita was the one he loved, Yells at GOpi for lying to him before wedding by not telling him about her gawarness. . (Coz Ahem even now does not know that pre wedding Gopi had told him all the truth but he was lost in Anita trauma) , Yells at Gopi loads more. . ..
by this time, Gopi is in tears. . .. she totally cracks up. . . DAMn bloody nightmare for me. . . And shoots off. . . Ahem collapses on bed, and just thinks what he has done. . .. . right after that, he regrets what he has just done to Gopi. . . and begins his repentance of all the pain he also made Gopi go through.. his main concern becomes GOpi. . and rushes out to console her. . .
But she again withdraws completely. . from him 😭😭😭 , and he tries to calm things down by also backing off and waiting for things to cool down then talk later on . . .
Gopiis now convinced after all AHem said that Ahem was just living in a compromising situation . . with her, and that AHem still has Anita in his heart. . .
Ahem on the other hand was waiting for Gopi in room . .. absolutely shattered at what he had done. . .when Gopi did not come back after a few hours, he decided to go down. . .
Gopi was nowhere to be found.. . .
his eyes lay on the Mandir coz he normally found Gopi there. . . what he say there was a book, similar to books that GOpi used to take to school . . during education track . .
what he sees in that sucks the very life out of him . . .
Gopi writes all her heart feelings out, she had flashbacks of Ahem's slap scene, and also remembered the aftermath of it when she was relentlesslyey shattered claiming that she had told Ahem the truth. . Gopi also writes how she told AHem the truth pre-wedding. .
Furthermore. . . she also declares her undying love for Ahem, and pronounces that she had taken all her marriage vows back to make him freed from the marriage as he had always wanted, but had for gotten that, and she now remembered that she had take n back her vows. .
She then also states in her book that she wishes Ahem and Anita to come back together. . . and that she considers it a sin to come between 2 lovers. . . and also Finally reveals that she has left Ahem and modis once and for all . . . . . . . . . .
The book falls off Ahem's hands, and he collapses at the stairs of the mandir , in a absolutely shattered state. . . . . . .😭😭😭 Hetal overnight comes downstairs to get some water coz was thirst,y and notices the completely destroyed Ahem . . . . . and rushes to his rescue. . . .
Ahem does not answer back. . . . . .Hetal tries her best to revive him . . .he slowly begins to respond . . . then hetal sees the fallen book. and also reads the whole pain story from Gopi's side. . . She also reads further that Gopi wants Ahem to be freed of all ties with her, and that she cannot see Ahem life a suffocated life because of her . . . .
hetal, BECOMES ANGRY she feels Ahem has something to do with Gopi taking this kind of action . . . She BLASTS Ahem with a flash FULL FLASHBACK from the past, , , telling him everything that Gopi went thru because of him . . she tells Ahem how Gopi was in a terrified state after Ahem slapped her and went away . . .she tells Ahem how Gopi had ovbserved a fast for him, and yet he never rspected that, and did not even feel bad when Koki locked Gopi in the store room as punishment. . . . She then says that "This is what you always wanted Ahem. . . .You made her leave this house once. . . never to come back again, and she only came back because of nani. . .and then she was made to stay back because Koki made her take her vows back . . ." you Monster HETAL YELLED AT THE TOP OF HER VOICE. . . . .
That was enough to get all the Modi members down . . . . everyone at shock at what has happened. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . Hetal tells everyone what has happened. . . .
Ahem is now free flowing with tears sitting at steps infront of mandir. . uncontrolably weeping. . . . absolutely shattered. . . . . . . . . Koki starts blasting Gopi who is not even there and blames her for taking such a bad step . . . . HETAL KNOW GOES OVERBOARD. . . "Kokila, chup, ek dham chup!!!... Koki shuts up. . . Hetal blasts Koki that whenever she got close to Gopi, Koki woud never let her, and Koki would always enforce her views and punishments on Gopi first without ever realising her son's MIstake. . . . Hetal points out evey punishment Koki made Gopi do: like when Gopi made a small mistake in making Dhokla, Koki made Gopi make over 3 diferent variesties all at once in form of punishment. . never thinking in a more natural human way. . .
Hetal realises what gotten over her eventually and calms down . . . . . . . She goes over to Koki and apologises deeply, and begs for mercy at hands of Koki. . .Both start crying. . . . Parag, Chirag. . .jigar Rashi. . . all have tears in their eyes. . . .
Koki recovers, remembering all the gud times they had with Gopi , and all the emotional times together, specifically drawing out a flashback of Janmashtami, when Gopi saved Kahna Ji's idol from being stolen . . .
Koki then blasts Ahem . . ."Its because of you this has happened". . . She then blames herself that she brought Gopi into her house to becoem the wife of an undeserving mad, she curses the day she did that. . . .
That, now gave ahem the jahtkas he needed he startted to get more attentive. . . . then Koki asked Ahem . . . .. . I was your mother. You could have told me that you wanted to Marry Anita and I would have never forced Gopi upon you. . . You know Ahem i would always want ur happiness, and did not see any positive future of yuors with Anita .. . . .Ahem why , Ahem why . . . now because of you Gopi has had to go through all this, why . . . Koki Looks at Kahna ji, and ask him why God did you have to put Gopi through all this, Why?????
Ahem stands up . . . . and explains what he had done today after Koki blasted him about Anita's past and and also says what he had done to Gopi during the day. . . and how bad he felt. . .
Jigar gets MORTIFIED:: And ANger red eyed: : : : Grabs Ahem by his collar. . . "Sorry bhai, but I have always respected yu, You say you felt bad now, Why did you not feel anything when you were adamant at getting bhabhi out of the house, and did not even pay heed to her questioning eyes at you??" Why bhai why?? Why do you always have to hurt people first the realise their feelings. . . . .
Ahem is looking down depe down, head hiding in shoulders, weeping uncontrolably, he had never wept like that all his entire life. . .
meanwhile the book Gopi wrote is circulation all over the place. . . and it gets to a far away silent listener. . . ANITA:: who woke up to see what the commotion was all about. . .
she was shocked about all this . . . and stepped forward with tears runnig down her cheeks. . . and was able to see Ahem in a very very pitiful state. .
She stopped everyone. . . and said lookin specifically at Koki ""You know what, this was bound to happen, Ahem has always loved me, and will always do. . . It was you Kokila Aunty that came between us and ruined the life of your sone, mine and Gopi. . ." Ahem was always mine and will always be mine. . . " 😡 (READERS: DONT GET ANGRY YET)
Ahem eyes bellowing with ANGER. . . . . . now at Anitas comments:: HE grabs hold of Anita, 😲😲😲
AND THEN: gives ANIta a ⭐️ 5-STAR TIGHT SLAP. . . . Anita falls down on the ground of the reverberations. . . her face is still going left right left right left right . . 🤢
Then Ahem shouts. . . . "I LOVE GOPI" and more "I LOVE GOPI" , "I LOVE GOPI" , "I LOVE GOPI" , "I LOVE GOPI" . . . .and then collapses to the floor. . .
Anita then gets up . . . still head going left right left right. . . oo was a very tight slap (MY TYPING FINGERS CAN FEEL IT)) And gave a wink to every member of the MODI HOUSE. . . . .
What Anita had DONE was that she had CRACKED the SHELL AND INTERNAL FEELINGS OF THE GREAT AHEM MODI. . . .
MEANWHILE:::: The book had gotten to Rashi stage. . . .who was absolutely in shock at what was hapening. . . she just witnessed the big climax to ahems MAD confession to family, and also read Gopi message that Gopi had left the house. . . AND MAkes another SHOUT::::::::::::: Rashi " GOOOPPPIII"""""
Everyone looks back . . . . OMG OMG OMG. . . This loud outcry from Rashi, gets Ahem back TO FULL ON MAD ALERT LEVELS, BACK TO WHERE HE WAS. . . . . where was Gopi??????? WHat NEXt???????????????????????????/
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END OF PART 1
Precap::: I wont reveal much here:: But whats gonna happen is:: Gopi search commences in short(ACtual OS will be bigger than this:: WIll have more DRAMA how search commences and more cohesiveness of characters in serial:). . . but Gopi location will be revealed in part 3. . . . .😉 ) (This is just a prediciton)
So guys. . . here was my first serious OS. . .I had not planned it at all, but had a vague idea. . . I wanted to finish off this , It wasnt meant to be anything like an OS, but while writing i noticed it was taking that shape so I gave it that name. . . . AND i was gonna finish it, but managed to do this part in about 15 minutes. . . HOW I DID THAT:: I thin you all noticed it u read my posts that i was rather biased towards Ahem, i just could not stand him . . Though I respect him for what he is and can see his mental state. . . >>>>>>>>>.. Another way i did that was forcin myself to see some of the dark days episodes, and some of the recent ones
I made use of this to let off all my STEAM and frustration: and to clear my midn before EXAMS start 2moro::: Usualyl when a high point in my academic life kicks in , I always go Hyper and Over the Top, so i may have said wierd things here and there. . . Pardon me. . . thats jsut me in stress. .
ALSO Guys, i think there will be no point me continuing this if not enough pple like it. . . .SO if I get a decent chunk of interested readers, i will be glad to spill my heart out on THIS::: Oh and the more encouragement I get the better the quality I will put down . . . . I believe at the rate of thought now I can pull of a bunch of interesting parts., but its you the readers who decide . . ALSO, I guarantee to relevantly include all SNS characters as I possibly CAN. . . ALSO I will take inspiration from rereading Xarina's Gopi Tantrums OS, and also make my version of Gopi Tantrums in THIS OS. . . .Will be a happy ending at end. . 😃
So just let me know what You think. . . Any improvements/ anything, will be apreciated . . . Sorry for ay errors, and mainly forgive me if any typing errors were there(I feel there are usually loads, coz I do actually make loads of typing mistakes).
i better get back to EXAMS now. . I feel relaxed now. .
Other PARTs:
Page 2,3 :Summarised Comments
Part 2: THE SEARCH Page 3. . .
Page 5 :Summarised Comments
Part 3: THE BARRIER REALIZATION Page 5. . .
Page 6 :Summarised Comments:: Little brag about being related to the real SNS 😊
Part 4: GOPI: Alive YET Lifeless Page 7
Page 8 :Summarised Comments
WHY do I keep havnig nightmares for Gohem while I am awake.. . . . . . . .
I have been really hit hard by dumbfounded Ahem. . . . :: SO BEFORE EXAMS KICK OFF THIS WEEK< I BEGIN MY FIRST RATHER MORE SERIOUS OS. . .
Ad now Koki knowing is good but gave me a bad dream last night. . . . dont know how to say it, but I have exams coming up this week so want to let this load off me. . .
What i could absolutely not help stopping of thinking was
Ahem in a dumb founded lost state worries me a lot. . . he potentiall has talked rather harshly to Gopi once after seeing Anita, then apologised straight afterwards which was good. . a relief. .
But Koki knowing may bash up Ahem with a burst of his past and bad treatment of Gopi. . and mostly strikes him about his pre wedding Affair with Anita, and tells Ahem, that he has broken her(Koki's) heart by doing that. . .. Also Koki tells Anita. . . and that shocks Anita to the core. that Ahem was Nilesh and that her wedding had broken . . . she is unconsolable. . .
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PART 1 (AHEM GET OUT OF YOUR TRANCE RIGHT NOW< OR ELSE)
Ahem comes back to MM from outside. . in a very very lost, more lost than ever before, way. . absolutely dumbstruck over 10 times more than when he had seen Anita and during wedding. .
Gopi enquires his issues. . . he totally ignores her. . but Gopi never gives up , and tries to make him speak out. . . .
In his mind he is going thru the torment he had during Gohem marriage. . . and as Gopi interupts his lost state::: HE EXPLODES BIG TIME ON GOPI. . . tells her again about Anita. . tells Gopi why she stayed with him after knowing that Anita was the one he loved, Yells at GOpi for lying to him before wedding by not telling him about her gawarness. . (Coz Ahem even now does not know that pre wedding Gopi had told him all the truth but he was lost in Anita trauma) , Yells at Gopi loads more. . ..
by this time, Gopi is in tears. . .. she totally cracks up. . . DAMn bloody nightmare for me. . . And shoots off. . . Ahem collapses on bed, and just thinks what he has done. . .. . right after that, he regrets what he has just done to Gopi. . . and begins his repentance of all the pain he also made Gopi go through.. his main concern becomes GOpi. . and rushes out to console her. . .
But she again withdraws completely. . from him 😭😭😭 , and he tries to calm things down by also backing off and waiting for things to cool down then talk later on . . .
Gopiis now convinced after all AHem said that Ahem was just living in a compromising situation . . with her, and that AHem still has Anita in his heart. . .
Ahem on the other hand was waiting for Gopi in room . .. absolutely shattered at what he had done. . .when Gopi did not come back after a few hours, he decided to go down. . .
Gopi was nowhere to be found.. . .
his eyes lay on the Mandir coz he normally found Gopi there. . . what he say there was a book, similar to books that GOpi used to take to school . . during education track . .
what he sees in that sucks the very life out of him . . .
Gopi writes all her heart feelings out, she had flashbacks of Ahem's slap scene, and also remembered the aftermath of it when she was relentlesslyey shattered claiming that she had told Ahem the truth. . Gopi also writes how she told AHem the truth pre-wedding. .
Furthermore. . . she also declares her undying love for Ahem, and pronounces that she had taken all her marriage vows back to make him freed from the marriage as he had always wanted, but had for gotten that, and she now remembered that she had take n back her vows. .
She then also states in her book that she wishes Ahem and Anita to come back together. . . and that she considers it a sin to come between 2 lovers. . . and also Finally reveals that she has left Ahem and modis once and for all . . . . . . . . . .
The book falls off Ahem's hands, and he collapses at the stairs of the mandir , in a absolutely shattered state. . . . . . .😭😭😭 Hetal overnight comes downstairs to get some water coz was thirst,y and notices the completely destroyed Ahem . . . . . and rushes to his rescue. . . .
Ahem does not answer back. . . . . .Hetal tries her best to revive him . . .he slowly begins to respond . . . then hetal sees the fallen book. and also reads the whole pain story from Gopi's side. . . She also reads further that Gopi wants Ahem to be freed of all ties with her, and that she cannot see Ahem life a suffocated life because of her . . . .
hetal, BECOMES ANGRY she feels Ahem has something to do with Gopi taking this kind of action . . . She BLASTS Ahem with a flash FULL FLASHBACK from the past, , , telling him everything that Gopi went thru because of him . . she tells Ahem how Gopi was in a terrified state after Ahem slapped her and went away . . .she tells Ahem how Gopi had ovbserved a fast for him, and yet he never rspected that, and did not even feel bad when Koki locked Gopi in the store room as punishment. . . . She then says that "This is what you always wanted Ahem. . . .You made her leave this house once. . . never to come back again, and she only came back because of nani. . .and then she was made to stay back because Koki made her take her vows back . . ." you Monster HETAL YELLED AT THE TOP OF HER VOICE. . . . .
That was enough to get all the Modi members down . . . . everyone at shock at what has happened. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . Hetal tells everyone what has happened. . . .
Ahem is now free flowing with tears sitting at steps infront of mandir. . uncontrolably weeping. . . . absolutely shattered. . . . . . . . . Koki starts blasting Gopi who is not even there and blames her for taking such a bad step . . . . HETAL KNOW GOES OVERBOARD. . . "Kokila, chup, ek dham chup!!!... Koki shuts up. . . Hetal blasts Koki that whenever she got close to Gopi, Koki woud never let her, and Koki would always enforce her views and punishments on Gopi first without ever realising her son's MIstake. . . . Hetal points out evey punishment Koki made Gopi do: like when Gopi made a small mistake in making Dhokla, Koki made Gopi make over 3 diferent variesties all at once in form of punishment. . never thinking in a more natural human way. . .
Hetal realises what gotten over her eventually and calms down . . . . . . . She goes over to Koki and apologises deeply, and begs for mercy at hands of Koki. . .Both start crying. . . . Parag, Chirag. . .jigar Rashi. . . all have tears in their eyes. . . .
Koki recovers, remembering all the gud times they had with Gopi , and all the emotional times together, specifically drawing out a flashback of Janmashtami, when Gopi saved Kahna Ji's idol from being stolen . . .
Koki then blasts Ahem . . ."Its because of you this has happened". . . She then blames herself that she brought Gopi into her house to becoem the wife of an undeserving mad, she curses the day she did that. . . .
That, now gave ahem the jahtkas he needed he startted to get more attentive. . . . then Koki asked Ahem . . . .. . I was your mother. You could have told me that you wanted to Marry Anita and I would have never forced Gopi upon you. . . You know Ahem i would always want ur happiness, and did not see any positive future of yuors with Anita .. . . .Ahem why , Ahem why . . . now because of you Gopi has had to go through all this, why . . . Koki Looks at Kahna ji, and ask him why God did you have to put Gopi through all this, Why?????
Ahem stands up . . . . and explains what he had done today after Koki blasted him about Anita's past and and also says what he had done to Gopi during the day. . . and how bad he felt. . .
Jigar gets MORTIFIED:: And ANger red eyed: : : : Grabs Ahem by his collar. . . "Sorry bhai, but I have always respected yu, You say you felt bad now, Why did you not feel anything when you were adamant at getting bhabhi out of the house, and did not even pay heed to her questioning eyes at you??" Why bhai why?? Why do you always have to hurt people first the realise their feelings. . . . .
Ahem is looking down depe down, head hiding in shoulders, weeping uncontrolably, he had never wept like that all his entire life. . .
meanwhile the book Gopi wrote is circulation all over the place. . . and it gets to a far away silent listener. . . ANITA:: who woke up to see what the commotion was all about. . .
she was shocked about all this . . . and stepped forward with tears runnig down her cheeks. . . and was able to see Ahem in a very very pitiful state. .
She stopped everyone. . . and said lookin specifically at Koki ""You know what, this was bound to happen, Ahem has always loved me, and will always do. . . It was you Kokila Aunty that came between us and ruined the life of your sone, mine and Gopi. . ." Ahem was always mine and will always be mine. . . " 😡 (READERS: DONT GET ANGRY YET)
Ahem eyes bellowing with ANGER. . . . . . now at Anitas comments:: HE grabs hold of Anita, 😲😲😲
AND THEN: gives ANIta a ⭐️ 5-STAR TIGHT SLAP. . . . Anita falls down on the ground of the reverberations. . . her face is still going left right left right left right . . 🤢
Then Ahem shouts. . . . "I LOVE GOPI" and more "I LOVE GOPI" , "I LOVE GOPI" , "I LOVE GOPI" , "I LOVE GOPI" . . . .and then collapses to the floor. . .
Anita then gets up . . . still head going left right left right. . . oo was a very tight slap (MY TYPING FINGERS CAN FEEL IT)) And gave a wink to every member of the MODI HOUSE. . . . .
What Anita had DONE was that she had CRACKED the SHELL AND INTERNAL FEELINGS OF THE GREAT AHEM MODI. . . .
MEANWHILE:::: The book had gotten to Rashi stage. . . .who was absolutely in shock at what was hapening. . . she just witnessed the big climax to ahems MAD confession to family, and also read Gopi message that Gopi had left the house. . . AND MAkes another SHOUT::::::::::::: Rashi " GOOOPPPIII"""""
Everyone looks back . . . . OMG OMG OMG. . . This loud outcry from Rashi, gets Ahem back TO FULL ON MAD ALERT LEVELS, BACK TO WHERE HE WAS. . . . . where was Gopi??????? WHat NEXt???????????????????????????/
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END OF PART 1
Precap::: I wont reveal much here:: But whats gonna happen is:: Gopi search commences in short(ACtual OS will be bigger than this:: WIll have more DRAMA how search commences and more cohesiveness of characters in serial:). . . but Gopi location will be revealed in part 3. . . . .😉 ) (This is just a prediciton)
So guys. . . here was my first serious OS. . .I had not planned it at all, but had a vague idea. . . I wanted to finish off this , It wasnt meant to be anything like an OS, but while writing i noticed it was taking that shape so I gave it that name. . . . AND i was gonna finish it, but managed to do this part in about 15 minutes. . . HOW I DID THAT:: I thin you all noticed it u read my posts that i was rather biased towards Ahem, i just could not stand him . . Though I respect him for what he is and can see his mental state. . . >>>>>>>>>.. Another way i did that was forcin myself to see some of the dark days episodes, and some of the recent ones
I made use of this to let off all my STEAM and frustration: and to clear my midn before EXAMS start 2moro::: Usualyl when a high point in my academic life kicks in , I always go Hyper and Over the Top, so i may have said wierd things here and there. . . Pardon me. . . thats jsut me in stress. .
ALSO Guys, i think there will be no point me continuing this if not enough pple like it. . . .SO if I get a decent chunk of interested readers, i will be glad to spill my heart out on THIS::: Oh and the more encouragement I get the better the quality I will put down . . . . I believe at the rate of thought now I can pull of a bunch of interesting parts., but its you the readers who decide . . ALSO, I guarantee to relevantly include all SNS characters as I possibly CAN. . . ALSO I will take inspiration from rereading Xarina's Gopi Tantrums OS, and also make my version of Gopi Tantrums in THIS OS. . . .Will be a happy ending at end. . 😃
So just let me know what You think. . . Any improvements/ anything, will be apreciated . . . Sorry for ay errors, and mainly forgive me if any typing errors were there(I feel there are usually loads, coz I do actually make loads of typing mistakes).
i better get back to EXAMS now. . I feel relaxed now. .
Other PARTs:
Page 2,3 :Summarised Comments
Part 2: THE SEARCH Page 3. . .
Page 5 :Summarised Comments
Part 3: THE BARRIER REALIZATION Page 5. . .
Page 6 :Summarised Comments:: Little brag about being related to the real SNS 😊
Part 4: GOPI: Alive YET Lifeless Page 7
Page 8 :Summarised Comments
