OS: The Choice - part II - Page 5 (04/17) - Page 3

brill awesome love cant wait 4 the nxt part...

loved it

⭐️Thanks for making my day with such a brilliant OS Harini. I was in a foul mood after watching evil Urshi kk on the net cause I could not wait for 7pm uk then I came across your wonderful OS and my heart was jumping with joy.

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

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Awww harini🤗 this is what i call a story ...Fantastic👏⭐️

now this is exactly how Ahem reacts or i say i want Ahem to react...

superb ...it started on a gloomy note...but immediately the mood changed to a smile, grin...wider grin and a laughter...😃😆

truly harini...these 2 women in his life say they gave him choice ..but hell no... they are forcing their choice on him...glad ahem reacted and made his choice👏⭐️

in the next part i will be jumping up and down... and i am sure about your targets😳

thank you for this harini😃

🤗 Thank you Munni😃
I always imagine Ahem reacting to every situation in anger.. That is his basic trait and he never ever fails to show that.. Whatever the situation.. 😆 And I imagine him doing the same when Gopi becomes unreasonably sacrificial😉
The point is Munni , when Koki gave him a choice, I feel that she made the choice for him.. It was not a choice at all.. And Gopi, if she leaves MB siting Ahem's happiness will be doing the same. A choice is given if the party has all the options available and he chooses one.. If there is just one option then where is the choice..😕 So yeah.. Ahem had to make his own choices and I am pretty sure he will😊

Originally posted by: varshu27

absolutely brilliant harini 👏...we all knew gopi would sacrifice for her ahem ji...but loved ahem here...the rant of his is so uniquely his personality...loved the ending...wish i was a fly on the wall in urmis house😆...thank u 🤗

Thanks Varshu😛
I am a fan of Ahem's anger and sarcasm.. It is so well done that you can see his mind dripping sarcasm when he speaks😊
Varshu... as much as I am a CBP fan, I dislike the fact that Rashi gets scott free all the time.. Yeah the KKs don't work but then the main person responsible is not punished which does not sit well with me... I want Rashi and Urmi to face the music once😡

Originally posted by: Xarina

As always this is excelllent, Harini. Love the way you have laid it all out with Gopi wanting to leave entwined with Ahem's thoughts. Nice one.

Thanks Xarina..😊 Ahem is more complicated but when it comes to Gopi, his emotions are as clear as an open book..

Originally posted by: stephenie

lovely os..👍🏼

i just want this to exactly happen onscreen..😍

Thanks Stephenie😛
Onscreen will be better.. I am pretty sure..😃

Originally posted by: ShaunSA

No No No No No No No! You left me hanging! That is sooo unfair! The best part was yet to come. Aham faces the witches three! Oof now i wont sleep tonight! Update asap please! Else i will set xarina on you. And we all know What she does to wayward writers! Lmfao

😆 Ashwin.. Let me tell you a secret.. I had no idea of continuing this OS further.. An open ending is always wonderfully imaginative but then I saw this comment and Munni told me that she would also like to read the next part..
So yup.. I will update it tonight.. But don't kill me if it does not satisfy the end you were looking for.. Ahem is too much of a gentleman in my mind to make him do anything drastic with UrShi😊

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Fantastic OS Harini. Yes I agree, he does not have a choice, actually he has already chosen he just needs to announce it to the rest of the world so he can get on with his life with his wife.

Loved it, please tell us how he plans to take care of Urmi mami, Kinjalben and Rashiben.

Aww.. Thanks Shilpa😛
How beautifully said.. He needs no choice as he has already chosen.. Gopi needs to understand that.. That is all😃
Will update today.. 😊

Originally posted by: doc4ever

A mind blowing OS! 👏 U have described Ahem's anguish and frustration to the 'T!' ⭐️

He always has been an obedient son to his family, never questioning their decisions regarding his future, always following his mums orders without a complaint.

Loved the way u have made him use his 'voice' for once! 👏 Cannot wait for the next part when he gets back at Urshi! ⭐️ Thank u for this! 🤗

Thank you😃
Yes.. Ahem has always been obedient to his mom and his family.. The only person he feels he can be himself is Gopi and my opinion is that he loves her too much to let her go..
Her misunderstanding may not always be to his understanding😊 But when he sees the extent she will go for him, he will do the same for her.. Ahem loves her so😃

Originally posted by: Dhabu89

Harini, that was a beautiful OS and I have a feeling that is close to what we are going to see on screen. From your mouth to God's ears...or in this case the CV's eyes 😉

Another fantabulous OS and I will be waiting for another tomorrow...no I am not greedy...just hopeful 😃 Thank you for this much needed mood picker upper...and as always a job well done 👏 👍🏼

Rupal.. Have faith.. The CVs will show it better.. This is just for the time being😃
Will update today..😉 The UrShi and Kinjal confrontation..😛4

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94

lOved it Amazing!👏

Thank you😛

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

An excellent OS!! I expect nothing less from you though!!!

I really cannot wait to read more!!!

Thank you so much Nazma..😛 You are too kind😳
The first part was all I had planned. But decided to write the second part what with Ashwin threatening 😆 So an update coming right up.. Strike that.. In a few more minutes😛

Originally posted by: _Precious_

Fabulous OS Harini. I expect some thing very similar in the show too. It was very Ahemish style, the way he confessed to Gopi. Liked Ahem's inner conversation very much. Pls update next part soon.

Thank you Nisha😛
Ahemish indeed.. I like the way he reacts Nisha and I really hope that he confesses in his frustration and anger to make Gopi see sense.. Angry Ahem is always a sight for sore eyes😉

Originally posted by: taniks

Omg harini that was excellent , both Ahem and Gopi are portrayed exactly as they are in the serial . I only wish ahem in the serial sorts out the three witches who have caused gopi and him endless problems. I am hoping the serial takes shape like ur os . Really well written , pls continue wud 2nd part soon.

Thanks Taniks.. 😛 that was so nice of you..
Ahem sorting the three witches is a big doubt but I do hope he confesses to Gopi before she leaves him completely.. More than him, I am worried for Gopi as I do not want her back in RN... Plus, I do think she will not be able to take the separation😕

Originally posted by: rsk16

really nice update.loved it.

Thanks Raunaka😛

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

that was fanastic os!!loved it!!looking forward to read the next part!!

Thanks Nihira.. Next update in a few minutes😃

Originally posted by: swasthi

Superb update Harini.

Typical of Ahem using his mock anger and sarcasm to win his love.

You took us right back to the same place as at the time she left MM and have converted it to his gain.

Now you cannot stop there and leave us hanging. You have to continue the next part.

Thanks Swasthi.😛
I am glad you liked it..😃
The first time Gopi left MB to go back after Kinjal's marriage is one scene I cannot forget.. The emotions displayed will almost be similar when she leaves him again.. But this time I think Ahem will make up for being silent the previous time..😊
Will update in a few minutes😊

Originally posted by: -neela-

Harini that was wonderful ⭐️ 👏 I was grinning like an idiot when Ahem was letting out his frustration on Gopi, the soul, she is so innocent but glad Ahem made her realise that it is she he loves, and no-one else 😳. May I say, you are very good at cliffhangers! 😆 Would love to know what happened to the 3 witches 😉.

Aww.. Thanks Neela😃
I do cliff hangers and suspense very badly..😊 My FF has its suspense guessed by almost all.. 😆 But thanks😛 Ahem loves Gopi and no one else Neela.. He will tell her that himself.. Maybe in a month😉

Originally posted by: Scarlet28

😃👏Harini a wonderful OS ...done a fabulous job...please continue soon ...hope CVs have somehting similar in mind...👏

Thanks Scarlet😛
I am pretty sure the CVs have it planned better😃

Originally posted by: suk19

love it

Thanks Suk😛

Originally posted by: goody7775

awww that was beautiful harini the way u portrayed ahem in this os was mind blowing ⭐️loved every single part of it 😃

Thank you😊
Ahem is better than this Goody.. Just trust the CVs and they will show us just how much better😛

Originally posted by: navyab

Loved every bit of it Harini...it was fun on how Ahem came to Gopi's level to make her understand what he feels for her...he made her to come to the conclusion that he loves her & its just her that he wants to spend his life with it...he did not do it at home as he needed their own time together to share each other's feelings !!!

The 2 women in his life are the best people but sometimes they forget it is his life & he should be given a choice to make a choice not a choice made & dumped on him !!!

Well Urmi, Kinjle & Rashi...doom awaits you 😉

Thanks Navya.. 😛
Ahem is one person who explains things to Gopi the way she understands it.. It gives him a lot of pride and joy to do that.. He appreciates her simple soul and hence his reaction to it. And yes.. I think Ahem's confession is very private.. He needs to tell Gopi about his love alone.. Just like he told her he can never love her..
As women we have one thing that I am afraid to say we do use often when needed.. Tears.. Gopi uses that a lot and the truth is Ahem hates her tears.. So no wonder she decided that she will 'sacrifice' for him leaving him in a lurch😕

Originally posted by: amalaziz

a wonderful OS

Thank you😃

Originally posted by: snsaufan

Brilliant OS ...👍🏼

so awesomely put out Ahems thoughts and actions...loved it 👏

can't wait to read what his next mission is..

Thank you😛
Next one coming up in a few minutes😛

Originally posted by: Aish3003

👏

Thanks Aish😛

Originally posted by: Deepika94

Loved it

Thanks Deepika😛

Originally posted by: Chammak.Challo

👏

Thank you😛

Originally posted by: tamzin43

yes yes yes you must continue this as shaun say we must find out how these 3 react plz plz plz 👏

Thank you.. Will update in a few minutes😛

Originally posted by: Arnisha

brill awesome love cant wait 4 the nxt part...

Thank you Arnisha😛

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

loved it

plz continue this

waiting for the reactions of rashi and urmila

Thank you😛

Originally posted by: kamjal

⭐️Thanks for making my day with such a brilliant OS Harini. I was in a foul mood after watching evil Urshi kk on the net cause I could not wait for 7pm uk then I came across your wonderful OS and my heart was jumping with joy.

😃Am greedy and therefore requesting to jubilate in the dismantlement of the three evil doers so please quench my desire with the next part😉

Thanks Kamjal😛
I am glad this helped your mood.. You are not evil to want Rashi's downfall.. She is lowering the level that she can go by all her activities.. No wonder people want her dead😕

Originally posted by: sks21

fabulous os harini...love it

Thanks Kavya😃

Originally posted by: vijayarvi

harini excellent..!👏

Thank you😃