OS: The Choice - part II - Page 5 (04/17) - Page 5

wow that was awesome harini👏...very well written

that was wonderful update harini loved the way u ended it👏

awww!!!! its really so sweet and emotional!!! I loved JIGar and obviously Ahem too!!!!! I would love to see Jigar in this avtaar!

wow harini. what an update.thunderous aham is something i really enjoy. the way he made mincemeat of the three witches was just perfect. with the current teary track, your os gave me hope to watch

awesome superb update

the second part is plain AWESOMMMEEE... loved how you composed Ahems secret mission not giving a hint to Gopi and passing the message to Jigar 👏

Harini that was incredible , did u say u didn't like this part as much as the first ,well then u r crazy this was brilliant . Wot a show down , wot is the wild ,wild , west with their guns just overrate compared to ahem parag modi with his sharp mind and sharper words in that lethal quiet voice . I loved how witty he was and how he used words to trap them , harini that was genius of you ,this is wot sns needs a passionate blast of words who better to deliver them than the passionate ahem. Ur os reminded me of. How lucky a girl gopi is , cos ahem in the os is the same in the serial ,ok he is off his game at the moment but soon he will be back and fight for her . I lloved how u highlighted his protectiveness over gopi , I am so excited after reading ur os that everything is coming out as gibberish so I will stop and say this ' harini that was a brilliant piece of writing , too awesome no words can do this piece justice ' thank you for this awesome os .

liked the 2nd part also Harini ...Ahem was 2 good...but somewhere I felt that Ahem should also have showed directly to all the 3 mean women on how much he loves Gopi !!! Yeah he drove the point that she is his wife & is standing by her but when that point of love is also driven it gives so much strength to the relationship !!!

That was beautiful. Thank You