OS: The Choice - part II - Page 5 (04/17)

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_Precious_

@_Precious_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Fabulous OS Harini. I expect some thing very similar in the show too. It was very Ahemish style, the way he confessed to Gopi. Liked Ahem's inner conversation very much. Pls update next part soon.

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Omg harini that was excellent , both Ahem and Gopi are portrayed exactly as they are in the serial . I only wish ahem in the serial sorts out the three witches who have caused gopi and him endless problems. I am hoping the serial takes shape like ur os . Really well written , pls continue wud 2nd part soon.

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Nihira-fan

@Nihira-fan

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

that was fanastic os!!loved it!!looking forward to read the next part!!

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Superb update Harini.

Typical of Ahem using his mock anger and sarcasm to win his love.

You took us right back to the same place as at the time she left MM and have converted it to his gain.

Now you cannot stop there and leave us hanging. You have to continue the next part.

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-neela-

@-neela-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Harini that was wonderful ⭐️ 👏 I was grinning like an idiot when Ahem was letting out his frustration on Gopi, the soul, she is so innocent but glad Ahem made her realise that it is she he loves, and no-one else 😳. May I say, you are very good at cliffhangers! 😆 Would love to know what happened to the 3 witches 😉.

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Scarlet28

@Scarlet28

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

😃👏Harini a wonderful OS ...done a fabulous job...please continue soon ...hope CVs have somehting similar in mind...👏

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scorpian87

@scorpian87

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

awww that was beautiful harini the way u portrayed ahem in this os was mind blowing ⭐️loved every single part of it 😃

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navyab

@navyab

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Loved every bit of it Harini...it was fun on how Ahem came to Gopi's level to make her understand what he feels for her...he made her to come to the conclusion that he loves her & its just her that he wants to spend his life with it...he did not do it at home as he needed their own time together to share each other's feelings !!!

The 2 women in his life are the best people but sometimes they forget it is his life & he should be given a choice to make a choice not a choice made & dumped on him !!!

Well Urmi, Kinjle & Rashi...doom awaits you 😉

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jazz54321

@jazz54321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Brilliant OS ...👍🏼

so awesomely put out Ahems thoughts and actions...loved it 👏

can't wait to read what his next mission is..

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Tahira

@tamzin43

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ShaunSA
No No No No No No No! You left me hanging! That is sooo unfair! The best part was yet to come. Aham faces the witches three! Oof now i wont sleep tonight! Update asap please! Else i will set xarina on you. And we all know What she does to wayward writers! Lmfao

yes yes yes you must continue this as shaun say we must find out how these 3 react plz plz plz 👏👏👏👏