OS: Us - Page 7

Originally posted by: Scarlet28

😉Swasthi what a beautiful OS...this is how I want Ahem to remember his SD and make Gopi understand that it was a beautiful moment for him too...😃

Originally posted by: goody7775

that os was beautiful swasti👏

Originally posted by: Priyakna

lovely yaar

Originally posted by: Arnisha

lovely beautiful...

Originally posted by: bhavya

Wonderful os ...

Originally posted by: shruts18

Hi Swasthi,😊

I read it just now. I had seen it but bookmarked it to read it later.

It was too good and perfect way how it could happen in the show and it would be best if it did happen.

You have brought back the same moments of Holi at the same place just the way CVs made Ahem remember his first flashback in the temple. So what place let their culmination in Holi should now be a witness again to his remembrance and his being able to put everything together.

But I feel it was not love that they made, I still have hopes on it for they just can't ruin their first moments together like that.

Your writing style is very captivating and very effluent. I always enjoy whatever you write. Thank you very much.

Shruti.

Originally posted by: _Precious_

woww Swasthi. An excellent piece of work. Liked the way Ahem tried to investigate what happd on Holi day and ended up repeating the sequence on bed. Well done!

Originally posted by: queenyuks

Wonderful OS Swasthi!
Can I say that I laughed at the moment Ahem tripped? It was such a filmy scene.
I loved how he brought everything back. It needs to come out in the show too.
[And Im personally hoping they didnt make love while he was intoxicated]

Yuks

Originally posted by: tamzin43

aye yay yay major drooling here wish it happens like this 😍