SS - Repentance Part 3 Pg7 12th March 12 - Page 3

Originally posted by: varshu27

wonderful update shruti...glad that ahem is realising how much his actions in the past has pushed gopi away...he has to start wooing her now and replace the bad memories...thanks for the weekend treat...

Shruts that was really really amazing. A heartfelt piece on guilt, repentance and obstacle. He needs closure most of all.

Originally posted by: Dhabu89

Shruts,,,,first of all let me start by saying 👏 that was one superb OS start. I was reading part one and when I reached the last page, part two was already posted...talk about good luck for me😃

The first part where Gopi was so worried for him, that she did not hesitate to get food ready and go to his office. And the whole scenario of her taking care of him and his realization of how he used to treat her and she is still here taking care of him was just awesome...and like many of your readers, the last part just tugged at my heart...How he saw her sleeping on the floor and his reaction of the past as far as how he treated her is concerned...how heart wrenching and beautiful at the same time...

And then the second part where his guilt is so overwhelming that for him to come close to her is marred by memories of his past actions. And then near the end where he finally held her and was going to take action to show her how he felt and her reaction to his touch was another heart wrenching moment. Ahem must have felt so lost and broken. But it is good he knows what his actions have done to Gopi.

I am so loving this whole OS. Thank you Shruts, for making my weekend with this beautiful OS and the way the story is going so far is just amazing. Please continue to update. You are an amazing writer and reading your OS's is like being in lalal land permanently😳

Again this story is A1⭐️👏👍🏼

nice update

Originally posted by: shruts18

OMG Rupal!!!!!!! You made my day. I had been so so skeptical with this story and writing it had been such a challenge for me and I felt so blank many a times how to continue it. But I really wanted to write this one and i am waiting for that day when they would actually show Ahem feeling guilty and repenting for his wife. And how he overcomes his guilt would be the biggest challenge for CVs I feel after attempting to write this story.

But thanks a tonne for appreciating it so much.🤗You all are so wonderful and feels great to have such nice friends.

that was one excellent update shruti.👍🏼
though i love their romance. i always wanted aham to suffer for those things he did to gopi.
his love should not be easy. he has to fight to get her. cry for her.
your story is providing me everything i want aham to experience.
the story is really heart wrenching but i love to see aham suffer for gopi's love.

That was wonderful update.. Ahemji is regretting for past things :(

I loved it

really nice update .loved it.what will aham do now

Just read both parts Shruthi and they are fantastic. Well done.