SS - Repentance Part 3 Pg7 12th March 12

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FlowerHater

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

👏awesome post!!!!!!👍🏼 I soo hope something like this to happen in show rather than jumping into sr directly as the predictions are going on!!!!!!!!!! I sooo really want to be only confession on holi nothing else!!!!!!!!!!! sorry for my despo behaviour but kindly bear it till monday!!!!!!! hehehehehe😆

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Nandita / Tina

@5cents

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Shruti, abs super duper⭐️...very emotional and LOVELY👏. This part is so well described goes with his present state of mind...I just watched fridays episode & it flows so well with it...

He could not help his anger conceal his guilt and frustration at not being able to control the present as he could not change the past.

JUst WOW!!! Your thoughts abt Ahem's feeling and his inner desperation is spot on. Really, the past hurts given by him won't heal so soon😭

The empty bed stood a testimony of their bitter past and he was feeling utterly helpless.

This past brought tears to my eyes...I'm sure in the future we'll get a sc like this...beautiful and very emotional😭

He wanted to hug her and tell her that he was there for her and wanted her to be by his side but the path from his heart to his mouth was too long to be traversed by words easily.

The past is bitter and he just can't go back in time and make it BETTER. The turmoil is so well depicted by you...

All I can say is keep up the good writing *CHEERS*

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Shruti, that was just too perfect for words. It was very emotional and so like what Ahem is feeling now. You are doing an absolutely wonderful job in describing his guilt and at the same time wanting to be close to her. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

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navyab

@navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Shruts...lovely part...

Ahem is looking at the effects of what he did to Gopi & his relationship with love filled heart...& hence it is killing him now...the worriedness on her part, being scared of him , taking care of him was always there but since he did not care for her, it did not bother him then...but he knows he is responsible for what has happened...

I like the Ahem here as he is not looking at the situation & justifying it on it...rather he is only thinking about his behavior towards her & he realised it...

Though hard Ahem needs to go thru this to understand what true love is & how lucky he is for being blessed by a wife who did not give up on him !!!

Waiting for the next part Shruts 😉 !

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Scarlet28

@Scarlet28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Amazing...😍 very emotional and lovely...pls continue soon...

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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Dhabu89

Now here is a weird situation 😳 You are the one giving us this beautiful OS and you are thanking me for appreciating it? 😕 ? No, not allowed. Don't ever doubt yourself, Shruts...you have never disappointed any of us readers. We have always enjoyed your breakdown of a scene of GoEm or an OS or whatever you have posted...Dear, you need to be more confident, if not cocky, about your writing. You are truly A1, and I dare anyone to say otherwise😉
Please continue and if possible another OS also😃
Also we have wonderful friends because we were wonderful friends to someone else...you know...what goes around comes around😉

Thanks a tonne Rupal. You didn't realize what you have said has touched my heart and I will never forget this one and I mean it. I am humbled.

I don't have words to appreciate your friendship.

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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Xarina
Shruts that was really really amazing. A heartfelt piece on guilt, repentance and obstacle. He needs closure most of all.

Thank you Xarina. I want Ahem to see through his past without letting her know the same way she lived her darker days without making him realize anything!

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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: shruthi2010
that was one excellent update shruti.👍🏼
though i love their romance. i always wanted aham to suffer for those things he did to gopi.
his love should not be easy. he has to fight to get her. cry for her.
your story is providing me everything i want aham to experience.
the story is really heart wrenching but i love to see aham suffer for gopi's love.

Thanks so much Shruthi.

I want Ahem to suffer silently but suffer!

It is meant to be his only way to redemption!

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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: swasthi
Just read both parts Shruthi and they are fantastic. Well done.

You have captivated the audiences mind into seeing Ahem's guilt as each and every remembered incident unfolded in his mind, with the most telling one being when she was found sleeping on the floor.

You have defragmented his ego while his heart felt the remorse and attempted to heal him but was surprised with the horrid reaction from Gopi. Ahem was flummoxed by what he had nutured through Gopi.

Now he has to work on undoing this. Update soon.

Thanks so much Swasthi.

Glad that you liked it and your great judgement and ability to think deep into perceptive really is helpful to continue to write the story and improve on it.

I will update soon.

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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: abbay
👏awesome post!!!!!!👍🏼 I soo hope something like this to happen in show rather than jumping into sr directly as the predictions are going on!!!!!!!!!! I sooo really want to be only confession on holi nothing else!!!!!!!!!!! sorry for my despo behaviour but kindly bear it till monday!!!!!!! hehehehehe😆

Thank you abbay! Don't worry they would not have SR so soon. It would take some doing from his side I am pretty sure.