SS - Repentance Part 3 Pg7 12th March 12 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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He was looking amused at her reaction. Gopi I won't let you put yourself in trouble anymore for my or anyone else's sake! This is my promise to you and to me from here on. I am going to be by your side forever and will see to it that you get the best in life. I have done enough to you and now I will do more than enough always to see that what I have done would be undone in your life. Thanks for being there always. Even when I didn't appreciate you, you always stood like a pillar by my side! Now it's my turn to become a foundation on which our pillar of trust and love created by you would stand forever!


Thank you Shruti for the update.

My favorite lines are the paragraph above, this is how I want to see SNS Ahem. Pillar of Gopi's strength. The one to boost her self-confidence and self-esteem. I want him to realizes he has wronged her and continue to make up for it.

Loved how he got her to sleep on the bed.

I am looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Last Chapter was so short! 😔

But love the way this is developing! Beautiful shruti! 😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Read the post today as I was sick for the last one week...Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great update shruthi...loved it
update next part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well done, hope CVs pick out some ideas from your comments at the bottom of part 3. 😃 Hope we get the next update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i have read yor ss its beautiful. How beautifully u have portrayed ahem and his thinking. love it. I always wanted ahemto think about his past. How he had treated her and then she cares for him. love ahem repenting in his own ways. Plz coninue soon. waiting😊

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