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Justlikethat1

@Justlikethat1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#481

Shilpa.. Awesome👏👏.. I cannot bring out any words to say except that... The SS was so gripping till the end and what a heartwarming tale.. Thank you so much..

I loved how the relationship progressed.. between the Modi brothers and between Ahem and Gopi. Wow.. And Gopi's speech to Anitha.. Exactly Gopi.. No taunts just simple plain truth.

Thank you for giving Jigar a happy ending and Kinjal a small reedemption.. That made the story complete.. I will looke forward to your next SS...

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indu_shah

@indu_shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#482

fantastic shilpa, cant be any better..ahem feeling the kick of his angel...that's an amazing feeling for any father..out of this world..and finally ahemji got his angel daughter pari...thats really wonderful...jigar is the same playful guy...love him...more of his relation with divya wud have been better...off late i am liking jiggi..😳..the shaadi and god bharai...finally gopi confessing to ahemji...awesome...cant be any better than this...lovely ending...wish it had gone for some more time..:)...😊

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shruthi2010

@shruthi2010

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#483

what! you ended the ss.
this was so faboulous story i really liked
it belonged to my heart.
i m completely floored by it.
👏👏👏
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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#484

beautiful story..loved d endin..very cute nd emo endin..dis story was one big roller coaster ride :)

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#485

what a beautiful ending ...PERFECT... love the father -daughter part ... this was so beaiful that i think i am going ti read it again... in a couple of weeks ... thank you again for heaven on earth, ... shilpa

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Sandy914

@Sandy914

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#486

Shilpa.. Miss this Gohem, :((( it is really super ending (but l'll rush).. np problem i love the happy ending..!!!

Thanks for the lovely SS dear.. waiting for ur new FF now :)))

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--HANISA--

@--HANISA--

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#487

wow very nice love it the way gopi did to ahem fpr the ice cream the way ahem jigar gopi when they talk i like that i dont have enough words to say just love it 😊 👍🏼 🤗

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#488

RESERVED!👏

NOOO Shilpa,you ended the SS!

This was one of my favourite and your an excellent,talented writer!

Argh. P.S The update was brlliant,awww poor Kinjal,i forgive you dikra!😆 and good for Gopi replying to that Anita,pssht!😉

Brilliant as always!😛

Im willing to forgive you..as long as you continue to write Shilpa!😃

Hope to see you write some more soon,it was a wonderful SS!🤗

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Fahima

@famzii05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#489

WONDERFUL...very beautiful, sorry i cant like th updates because the like button is not worling,

anyways it was fabulous and i really enjoued reading it...from beginning to end you had me hooked onto this story...fabulous, well done!!

Fantabulous work!!! 👏

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Munni

@munnihyderabad

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#490

shilpa first i would love to give u a big 🤗 for coming up with such a beautiful story... it brought back my memories of my pregnancy days,,,, very well executed story...

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- loved the whole wedding sequence and as well as the godhbarai sequence... very well written...

- loved the faluda scene were gopi was craving for it...

- good divya and jigar - finally he found the right girl

-Pari is such a cute name...trust me on this whenever i read ahemji saying angel... i thought her name to be pari... remember gopi in red saree... i said she might have looked like pari in red,😃 lovely name,,...

- second time pregnant with morning sickness ( i never had it)

-kinjal reformed good for her

shilpa will definitely wait for ur next story... loved it all the way