SS: To Belong Part *Note on page 70* - Page 51

Originally posted by: tina_1234

beautiful story..loved d endin..very cute nd emo endin..dis story was one big roller coaster ride :)

Thank you so much Tina. Glad you enjoyed the story.

Originally posted by: ANJ4

what a beautiful ending ...PERFECT... love the father -daughter part ... this was so beaiful that i think i am going ti read it again... in a couple of weeks ... thank you again for heaven on earth, ... shilpa

Thank you so much Anju. Glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for all your wonderful and encouraging comments.

Originally posted by: Sandy914

Shilpa.. Miss this Gohem, :((( it is really super ending (but l'll rush).. np problem i love the happy ending..!!!

Thanks for the lovely SS dear.. waiting for ur new FF now :)))

Thanks so much Sandy, glad you enjoyed the story. I will see what I can come up with next.

Originally posted by: hansa2

wow very nice love it the way gopi did to ahem fpr the ice cream the way ahem jigar gopi when they talk i like that i dont have enough words to say just love it 😊 👍🏼 🤗

Thank you so much Hansa. Glad you enjoyed the whole story. Thanks for all the wonderful comments.

Very well written...a sweet and appropriate end to the story..

Wow!!

Originally posted by: famzii05

WONDERFUL...very beautiful, sorry i cant like th updates because the like button is not worling,

anyways it was fabulous and i really enjoued reading it...from beginning to end you had me hooked onto this story...fabulous, well done!!



Fantabulous work!!! 👏

Thank you so much Fahima, I appreciated all your comments and encouragements. And I glad you enjoyed the story. It did make a great time pass while we waited to see what would happen next.

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

RESERVED!👏

NOOO Shilpa,you ended the SS!

This was one of my favourite and your an excellent,talented writer!

Argh. P.S The update was brlliant,awww poor Kinjal,i forgive you dikra!😆 and good for Gopi replying to that Anita,pssht!😉

Brilliant as always!😛

Im willing to forgive you..as long as you continue to write Shilpa!😃

Hope to see you write some more soon,it was a wonderful SS!🤗

Thanks so much Chikka, Yes unfortunately the end came. In a way I am glad I ended this, because with current track I would not have been able to write about Gohem at all.

Yeah I had to make Kinjal repent, couldn't do anything with Urshi due, no chance, better for Jigar to have a whole new love.

I will write, but I have to warn you my next fic will be far from the SNS story. That's all I am saying for now.

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Thanks so much Chikka, Yes unfortunately the end came. In a way I am glad I ended this, because with current track I would not have been able to write about Gohem at all.

Yeah I had to make Kinjal repent, couldn't do anything with Urshi due, no chance, better for Jigar to have a whole new love.

I will write, but I have to warn you my next fic will be far from the SNS story. That's all I am saying for now.

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

shilpa first i would love to give u a big 🤗 for coming up with such a beautiful story... it brought back my memories of my pregnancy days,,,, very well executed story...

now

- loved the whole wedding sequence and as well as the godhbarai sequence... very well written...

- loved the faluda scene were gopi was craving for it...

- good divya and jigar - finally he found the right girl

-Pari is such a cute name...trust me on this whenever i read ahemji saying angel... i thought her name to be pari... remember gopi in red saree... i said she might have looked like pari in red,😃 lovely name,,...

- second time pregnant with morning sickness ( i never had it)

-kinjal reformed good for her

shilpa will definitely wait for ur next story... loved it all the way

Thanks so much Munni. Right back at you my friend.🤗 I suppose the memories of the pregnancy never goes away, something always help us remember them.

It all worked in the end, and thanks to many of yours and the forum members comments help me tie it up all nice and neat.

I didn't have the morning sickness either.
Yeah it was time for Kinjal to repent.

My next story as I mentioned will be far from SNS.

Originally posted by: ritika-gohem

Nice story.

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: _Precious_

That was a wonderful ending for a wonderful story. Loved the wedding part and Godhbaarai. And I felt realy happy when Gopi finally told Ahem that she loves him which he was longing to hear for a long while. Also, Gopi's craving for faluda ice-cream and how they ended up eating it at midnight, everything was just awesome. After watching the painful episode yesterday, your story helped me to lift my mood. Thanks a lot. And please continue to give us such fabulous stories/ff.

Thank you so much Precious. I am grateful for all your wonderful comments and encouragements. I am glad you enjoyed this different take on Gohem love story. And yes it always helped to write something different after watching so much crappy filler episode. Again thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

I just can't believe that u end it, shilpa ben. I really love it so much. I have no words to express how much i love ur story line, concept and ur writing skill. Everything is just perfect. Thanks so much for this wonderful SS. Hope u will write another one soon

Monyka thank you so much. I hope you enjoyed the food craving scene, and thanks for the idea.
I will see what I can come up with next. Thanks so much for all the encouragements and motivations.

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

Aww was this the last part 😒 its was soo beautiful ! so Ahem won its a daughter ,may be the blue sweater will come in use this time. Finally Kinjal understood who's right and who's wrong and a happy ending for jigar as well 😃. Your a fab story teller shilpa ,really enjoyed the SS and have read ur other fictions also and you only got better with each . I hope you come up with another one soon .

Awe...Thank you Saba, love the flower. Yes I did give Ahem his wish, and Gopi won the next round, so they are even.

Yes everyone got their happy endings, and it was best to end it there.

Next one, will work on it soon.

Next story pl make rashi nice.

Originally posted by: swasthi

Outstanding end to a fantastic Gohem story Shilpa.

You have tied together all the lose ends very well. You left the most important kalakari for the last. You gave the most endearing confession after the ice cream scene. The epilogue spoke for itself - simply brilliant!

I look forward to reading your next quest in the love of Gohem.

Thank you so much Swasthi. Your comments and encouragements kept me moving forward, most especially when you posted your positive A&L posts on most awful filler episode. Every little Gohem scene we discussed helped to keep motivated and kept the story moving forward.

Yes the last closure was needed for Gopi and Ahem and also for Kinjal. Again thanks so much for all the encouragements.

Next one working on it, hope to have something soon. Just not motivated enough right now because of the current track.