SS: To Belong Part *Note on page 70* - Page 48

Originally posted by: Naina2127

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Nooo! You ended this SS! :( This was absolutely one of my favorite stories ever. You write so well, I don't even have words. As always, lovely update, must say was not expecting the story to end, but it concluded beautifully, whether it was the Gopi craving the Faluda ice cream and testing Aham 😆, or how Kinjal found out the truth about Umang, or how Gopi told Aham she loved him at the end, or their remarriage or Divya or just everything. It was really well written and tied everything up very well.

And of course, the epilogue was the icing on the cake.

Pari is an adorable name, and I loved that little scene with Aham and Pari. Gopi's pregnant again! Aham's planning on keeping her barefoot and pregnant? 😆

Overall though, it was a wonderful depiction of Goham's journey, and this Aham was so nice and repenting and patient and lovable. :)

Thanks for this story! 🤗 Hope you come back with another story soon! I shall be waiting.😳

Cheers!
Naina

I know Naina, I felt a little sad ending this one, but usually feel same with all my stories.

Thank you so much for all your wonderful comments and encouragements, it helped alot. I tried to add little bit of everything in this last part.
See I managed to get Ahem blamed for keeping her barefooted and pregnant, but it was Gopi who seduced him, after all she wanted her little boy just like her Ahemji.😉 He managed to teach her many new things, and you know how our Gopi is, quick learner, so hence the second baby.


Next Story...Hmmm...I have to think about this one.

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL

omg!!! u ended it...soo saad right now...ur right...i will also miss this gopi and ahem!!! it was beautiful story and the renewal of vows were sooo perfect!!! their happiness was just leaping out of the screen!!!!! it was just brilliant!!!!! loved how gopi and ahem finally came together and felt they really belonged!!! yayyy ahem won!!! it was girl...lolll wonderful story!!!!!! an emotional roller-coaster w/a perfect ending!!!!

i will be waiting for ur next one!!!! can't wait!!! lolll u must start another sooon!!!! lolll

Thank you so much Anshu. I know it is a little sad to end this, but I think once I had all the knots untangled it was safe to say they had a bright future ahead of them. Yep I granted him his wish of a girl, it just made more sense once he completely changed for the better.

When I don come back with next one, it will be another roller coaster ride be prepared, I seem to can't write any other way.

Thanks again for keeping me motivated thru this journey.

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

awww...that was beautiful!!!!loved the ending!i absolutely loveed this story!i wish you would continue writing it!thanks so much!looking forward to more ff from you!😃

Thank you so much, I am so glad you loved the story. I know it was sad to see the ending, but I didn't want the scenes to become to repetitive so this is why I gave them their happy ending.

Will see about coming up with the next story soon.

There is only one word to describe this whole ff and that is PERFECT , I loved it . This was the perfect end to a perfect love story.this afterall the perfect couple .thank you shilpa for this masterpiece.

shilpa u are a genius...a wonderful end to a wonderful story...loved the vow renewal...loved everything...thanks for this...👏

👏 Wow Shilpa...enjoyed the SS to the core...

lovely end to a lovely FF Shilpa😊

OMG u ended d story ...😭...but i would appreciate u for ur pains to write such an wonderful SS..thank u for the ss...n to say about the last update ...the scene of renewal of vows,7 phera etc was so emotional ..i was about to cry but then reading further where both of them confess their love n then pari is born my emotional aasu turned into khushi ke aasu...😊 further new turn to d story where gopi is second time pregnant...i thought u made a perfect end to ur ss...Keep it up👍🏼 Again thank u and last but not the least i will miss this story a lot... i hope again u come up with an awesome SS in future... God bless u a lot...

very nice