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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

shilpa ben, u never fail to surprise us with ur story...No doubt, it was written beautifully by u..Thanks for the PM...Please continue soon

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Munni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

shilpa really really fabulous story👏... waiting for the next part,...

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navyab

@navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Shilpa excellent SS...waiting eagerly for the next part !!!

The pain of both Gopi & Ahem seems to be unbearable & he does not even know that she is having a child...

One request please make Ahem work very very very hard to getback what he already had in life 😉

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taniks

@taniks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Loved it , it is captivating ,little sad for gopi but amazing how u described ahems inner turmoil . I can't wait for urt update .

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Veena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

it was awesome..held me captivated...

pls continue with the next parts , when u find time..

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rsshree

@rsshree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

waiting 4 next part

nice beginning👏

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@thejazzgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

oye shilpa ben!!!

tussi gr8 ho!
haww!! ahem ne aise kyun kiya?? y did he ignore her after that pleasent night??????
nd gopi ji preg.. wow!
its been six months for now..
waiting to read more..

plzz do cont soonnn...

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Xarina

@Xarina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Wow! This Is really good. Hope you continue.

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