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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

awesome i cannot wait to read more loved it need to know what happens next loved it thank for the pm

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Rafeal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

I wish i belonged somewhere too🤣... Awesome start.. make this more enjoyable than ur prev FFs... I am sure you will do a fab job👏👍🏼

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-Eris-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

am waiting 4the next update

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sweety

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

wow you have got a really lovely storyline to offer ...loved the Ahem and sari scene simply beautiful...gopi probably left kanhaji to take care of her Ahemji ...my god i cant stop imagining wats gonna happen next in ur SS ...Great work!👏...plz plz update soon😳

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: NazmaJ
I love it!!!!

You have me intrigued and I cannot wait to read more!!

You write so beautifully it is easy to picture the scenes!!

I'm especially enjoying Ahem's internal turmoil and love that Gopi will have her own child!!!

Thank you so much Nazma. I am so glad you enjoyed the first part of the SS.

I think Ahem keeps too much to himself, its would be fun to see him tortured by his inner self.

Originally posted by: famzii05
RESERVED!! you have my attention,, wating for more!
aww it was emtional! and realy want to know what had happened! love ahem's inner voice! and that he wants to be with her, he had to inhale her smell from the sari...beautiful! ! loved it!
continue soon!

Thank you Fahima, glad you liked the first part of the SS.

Yeah Ahem has more torture coming his way, this is what he deserves for being too slow. Will update soon,

Originally posted by: ever
I just loved it cant wait til the next part

Thank you so much, will update soon.

Originally posted by: varshu27
incredible...cant wait to read the next part

Thank you so much, glad you liked the SS.

Originally posted by: SNS_fan101
wow this is superb, pls continue soon!

Thank you so much, will update soon

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1
A great start. Its beautifully written.😊

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the SS.

Originally posted by: evad
Shilpa you've got me spellbound waiting for more please

Thank you so much Eva. Good to hear from you. Will update soon, unfortunately I am stuck at work until midnight tonight, but tomorrow for sure.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL
omg!!!! i am sooo hooked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yyippeee...gopi is pregnant!!!! can't wait to see ahem's reaction!!!!! how could he do that???????? i am glad he's missing her and pondering about his decision! but after six months????? oh god!!!!!!

loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls post the next one sooon

Thank you so much Anshu. Yep its time Ahem paid for being a stubborn fool. And Gopi pregnant, I thought the story should move forward now, so why not twisted to my own liking. I hope you enjoy the resrt of the SS.

Will update soon.

Originally posted by: uamaz
Brilliant, can't wait ... Glad Gopi is pregnant... hope koki knows 😆

please PM me when you update 😊

Thank you so much. Glad you liked the SS. Does Koki know? umm...I am not sure, but will let you know soon.

I will PM you when I update.

Originally posted by: CHIKA784
Amazing,loved the update,very emotional!😉

Thank you so much Chika, glad you enjoyed the SS.

Originally posted by: vibz88
Shilpa great start. Waiting eagerly for next part.

Thank you so much Vibz. Glad you liked the SS.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sks21
it is amazing...i loved it
update soon

Thank you so much, glad you liked it. Will continue soon.

Originally posted by: vaasanthi
plz write the next part.plz plz

Thank you so much. Ok I do have the next part written, but am at work so unable to post it now, but will have it up tomorrow.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: queenyuks
You have the perfect recipe for a little bit of mystery, a little bit of intreague, and a lot of heartbreak

But you seem to have pinned Ahem spot on. Control is what the man likes and he's more stubborn than a mule

And really, if there's ever anything we have in this life, its hope.

This was very nice. I cant wait for more

Yuks

Thank you so much Yuks. It seems Ahem is in too much control, I wanted to explore what would make him break, and I think I got it. Let's see how he deals with revealations of his personality.

Will update soon.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Eva456
Very emotional..and the update was amazing..plz continue soon.xx

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: hanaGoHem
wow its very nice reserved it dont come too late with next part please yaar very good

Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it. Will update soon.

Originally posted by: Allbut1
I was so excited to see a new story from you! I love all your other works, and I am sure this one will be no different! Fantastic beginning, can't wait for the next update! :)

Thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed the start of the SS. I am taking the current situation and adding a twist to make it different. Will update soon.

Originally posted by: vinaben
like always never dissapointed, please keep updating

Thank you so much! Will update soon.

Originally posted by: shruthi2010
shilpa, wow again. each one of your stories are my favorite.
this one is also not an exception. it is so griping.
great start.
can you PM me when you update?

Thank you so much Shurti. And ditto to you, as I am a fan of your work also.

Will PM when I update.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

shilpa ben, u never fail to surprise us with ur story...No doubt, it was written beautifully by u..Thanks for the PM...Please continue soon

Awe..Thank you Kaka, I am glad you liked the first part of the SS. Will update soon.

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
shilpa really really fabulous story👏... waiting for the next part,...

Thank you so much, glad you liked the start of the SS. Will update soon.

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
awesome start..

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: navyab
Shilpa excellent SS...waiting eagerly for the next part !!!

The pain of both Gopi & Ahem seems to be unbearable & he does not even know that she is having a child...

One request please make Ahem work very very very hard to getback what he already had in life 😉

Thank you so much Navyab. I will be updating in the morning.

They both have long way to go to realize that they are made for eachother, Ahem loves her, but now he regrets because he hid his feelings, because he was too aftarid.

He will have to work hard to earn Gopi's trust definitely.