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Simibrar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

very Nice lovely !!!!...👏

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

She's working for Tejas Patel right Chika? great longing scene in the update, and Aham so happy to see her, please update soon. 👏

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Korimun Khanom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Liked it, Gopi the buisness woman.

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
She's working for Tejas Patel right Chika? great longing scene in the update, and Aham so happy to see her, please update soon. 👏

omg omg omg Nafisa!,i likeee you,yhhh you got it right 😉

sorry,i get really excited hehe

i just can't forget Tejas!

he was sooo hot!,i want him to give Gopi more designer sari's😆

my names really Priya but i like the name 'Chika' so i use it hehe

Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago

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gopijimodi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Very nice story. Nicely turing out. Thank you.

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Ashwin Maharaj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Great job! Look forward to reading more.

And hopefully CV's read your ff and bring back Tejas. Will be great for Gopi to be independent once she leaves MM.

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

omg omg omg Nafisa!,i likeee you,yhhh you got it right 😉
sorry,i get really excited hehe
i just can't forget Tejas!
he was sooo hot!,i want him to give Gopi more designer sari's😆
my names really Priya but i like the name 'Chika' so i use it hehe

Hi Priya, I will carry on calling you Chika as you like it and it's easier for me to remember... yes Tejas was very cute, and with that remark he made and Gopi's craftsmanship, they just might bring him back if the storyline is going where we are all guessing it's going.

Edited by Nafisa_blossoms - 13 years ago

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Sandy

@sandyuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Great FF! Looking forward to Friday's part. Thank you for the PM! 😃

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Part 3:

"Tejasji voh,Mai abhi aati hoon,aap andar jayeh ye" stutters Gopi.

Tejas see's Ahem and understands,he puts his hand on Gopi's shoulder and smiles reassuringly meanwhile Ahem..

"What the HELL?!." thought Ahem.

Gopi comes closer to Ahem and says

"Jai shri Krishna Ahemji,how is maaa.." she looks down sad.

"Gopi tum yahaan?,what are you doing here?and that to with Tejas?,Awnser me!,where do you live?,are you eating?,look how pale you look and you've gone more skinny!,come back to Modi bhavan with me!"

Ahem never realsed how he just said what he said!,he just asked Gopi to go back to Modi bhavan?,why?Did he actually miss Gopi?

"Ahemji,how can i come back?,i can't,no im sorry,i can't" and with that Gopi walks away.

"Gopi,your not even going to listen to me"

"Ahemji,i can't,its too much,it's too hard" sad Gopi blinking to stop the tears,she needed a hug and she needed one now😭

With that Gopi goes into the sari store to complete her work,she was so upset,she missed her family but she couldn't be apart of them,she had to live like this,torn and depressed.

Ahem to was feeling it,he was feeling life with Gopi and he was not liking it.She's so naive!,how can she just face life all alone with no support,no family to ..arghh i can't!what shall i do???

He decided do go home,he couldn't concentrate!,should he talk to his mum about Gopi?

But when he reached home,he was shocked to discover..

SORRRY FOR THIS SMALL UPDATE 😔

WHAT TO DO?,I NEED TO GO AND EAT SOME JALEBI TO MAKE MY IMAGNATION WORK,JUST LIKE KHUSHI FROM IPKKND?😉

Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago