FF:Kalakari ka pardavash Last part page 10

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Hi there everyone.
i've been readng the posts on the SNS forum and have high hopes for this seriel aswell as all so im making an ff ,the prologue is that Urmila and Rash's truth has been exposed and im continueng from there...😊
Part 1:


"Gopi,Gopi please forgive me, i didn't mean to do all this kalakari with you,it was mummy,please forgive me"..
Gopi hadn't spoken after the whole drama played out,she was shocked,how could her Raashiben do this to her?The whole Modi family was there and everyone was gobsmacked especially Ahem.u
"Chup Raashi,aek dam chup" How dare you,i always knew the truth about you and your disgusting mother,how can you treat Gopi like this?Your disgusting,your no less than an animal" shouted Kokila.
Gopi went up to Raashi and had teary eye's.
"Raashiben,how could you?,you lied to me so much?! and now today because of you,so many lives have been destroyed,Ahemji's,mine,this whole house's and even Anitaji's.
Gopi looks towards the whole house and is crying,she comes up to Ahem and says
"Ahemji,i had no idea about any of this,really,kanhaji ki kasam,but now i have realised what to do,what is right,i will leave this house,yes,i must leave because our relationship had started based on lie's and neither of us are happy in this relationship"
"Maaji,Kakiji,you both have given me the most love i have ever recieved and i am very grateful,thank you both,i will leave this house with the memories of love from everyone but before i leave,i need you to promise me that you will forgive Raashiben and give her one more chance,please"
"Gopibahu,what are you saying?"..says a teary Kokila
"Gopi dikra,how can you have a heart of gold?,this sister of yours has done so much bad and you...chii Raashi,what must you have done to get such an amazing sister?You do not deserve Gopi" shouted Hetal.
Gopi wiped her tears and went towards Jigar,
"Devarji,mujhe vachan do kii aap Raashiben ko maaf kardenge".
"Par bhabhi,yeh aap kya"
"Devarji,maine aaj tak tumhe kuch nahi maanga,please,mere liye"
"Bhabhi,aek devar apni bhabhi killiye Raashi ko maaf karsakta hai liken aek pati Raashi se nah maaf kar sak ta"
Gopi cried and wiped Jigar's tears,she had such a sweet devar,she smiled,said her beloved goodbye's and left the house with everyone in tears and a very confused Ahem.



So how was this part guys?,show me how much you like it by 'like'ing part 1 at the bottom.
thanks guys,hopefully will update daily!
😊





INDEX-
PART 1-PAGE 1
PART 2-PAGE 3
PART 3-PAGE 5
PART 4-PAGE 6
PART 5-PAGE 7
PART 6:PAGE 8 <-- NEW
LAST PART:PAGE 10
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rsk16 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start.do continue soon.will be waiting😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rsk16

Great start.do continue soon.will be waiting😉

Thankk you for your support 😊
glad to know you like it!
Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great fan fic, and it could well happen too, you've tapped into the characters of the serial very well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Great fan fic, and it could well happen too, you've tapped into the characters of the serial very well.

Thank you!,im hoping this really does happen😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A good start!! I look forward to reading more!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NazmaJ

A good start!! I look forward to reading more!!

Me too! hehe have some surprises in store!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A very nice beginning!!!looking forward to read more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I liked it, i imagine Gopi will forgive Rashi, so there is some truth to it.
Don't leave us waiting too long.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thamanna85

I liked it, i imagine Gopi will forgive Rashi, so there is some truth to it.

Don't leave us waiting too long.

yesss yess humari Gopi is to mahaan,we love her don't we😉
she has a heart of gold so she must forgive!😊
Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago

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