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gopijimodi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nice fan fiction. Please do continue. I am looking forward to Ahem's reaction to Gopi's sacrifice.

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vaishali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

very very nice one nice start i loved it

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vaasanthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

👍🏼FANTASTIC👏 ....waiting 4 da continuation😍

update it as soon as possible

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sandyuk
Please continue soon!

will do,thanks for your support!

Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: vaasanthi
👍🏼FANTASTIC👏 ....waiting 4 da continuation😍
update it as soon as possible

Thankkk you very much!😊

Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Part 2:

It had been 3 weeks since Gopi left and MM was gloomy and sad,it felt like there was no happiness left.Kokila was upset and depressed,Hetal was sad and the men craved for Gopi's cooking,Raashi had improved,she was taking the responsibility of the work as Hetal and Kokila were depressed but the person most affected by all of this...Ahem.

Ahem was angry,cross,sad,he was confused,lost,why was he constantly thinking of Gopi?Why did her thought not leave his mind?,How was she?,Where is she?,Does she miss me?,these thoughts were tearing him up inside.He managed to supress his emotions by working overtime.He was working so much his phone was hot and it was on the verge of breaking.He needed a break..and he needed one now.

Ahem was in his car drivng past,his knuckles sqeezing the wheel and in anger,he banged his fists onto the wheel.

"Oh god!,i need to meet Gopi once,just once,i need to see how she is,arghhh why am i so restless to see her?!"

Ahem got out of the car when suddenly he heard a familar voice.

"Arreh,Chiku,you've become really badmaash,theek hai,here"..the pretty,young girl kissed the small boy on the cheek.Who was she?,she was opposite Ahem but she sounded...sounded like...Gopi?!

She looked back,she thought she heard her Ahemji,no it can't be!?

There was Gopi,in her purple sari (MODERN,LIKE RASHI WEARS IT) and her hair unpinned and there was Ahem,staring at Gopi with his mouth opened.Oh how he missed her.

Ahem smiled and Gopi's eye's gleamed,her smile was wide when suddenly she remembered Anita and her eye's went teary.

"Gopi..Gopi,i've missed you soo much"..Ahem whispered.

Gopi wanted to hug Ahem,she walked slowly towards him and he just smiled and held his arms out for her when suddenly..

"Gopiji,aap yahaan?,come we have work to do,we've been given an order for our sari's and we have to make 50,congratiolations,ever since you've joined our company,we have just been profiting,thank you god 😊" said a voice..

So how was it?!

I wonder if you guys can guess the mystery persons voice😉

will be back soon on Friday to update!

Like's and comments welcome😊

Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago