Originally posted by: avivakirk
Great Swasthi!!!!!! I had to break the rule of not coming to this forum for you and Nafi! I don't mind doing it because you guys did an amazing job!!!!!!!! Swasthi,
I liked this Ahem! He's human in your OS unlike the robot porcupine in theshow...Iliked the way u internalised Ahem's inner thoughtsLoved the following parts:She took me by surprise!! After walking through the school gate she turned giving me the sweetest smile, I haven't seen of late, and waved goodbye. I responded automatically. I was engulfed in her beauty and her warmth. I simply adored her...Oh your royal Highness Ahemji...did it take one year to figure out how sweet and loving she is...Loved this part Swasthi!👏If she ran up to me for a hug through the gate I would have succumbed and hugged her back. Just to take in her a bit of her warmth and give her some comfort that today will go well.I did not realise that I had waved back at her. I looked at my hand which confirmed that I did. How foolish was I to do that as she just stood there looking at me until I put on my stern face. She hastily turned and walked away
So SHOOOWEET! Ha! if u would have done that a little bit of ice would have melted😆Great job Swasthi! All the best!