OS: Ahem watches Gopi walking away

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

superb narration and loved the conflicts ahem was facing

Ahem calling himself idiot was hilarious😆

wonderful os.

ur naarration is marvelous. It represents ahem's deep inner thoughts

superb.

Edited by shaina.sharma - 14 years ago

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sbp1971
>sigh< I wish, wish, wish, that's what he was thinking, but with Ahem we never know. I loved your OS, lets hope we get to see him think like this in the futrue.👍🏼

Thanks Shilpa.

Agreeable ... we will never know unless the creative team gives us a verbal reaction from him. Like they did when he questioned himself why he held Gopi's hand all night whilst asleep. This will be a start into knowing what makes him tick.

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

superb narration and loved the conflicts ahem was facing

Ahem calling himself idiot was hilarious😆

wonderful os.

ur naarration is marvelous. It represents ahem's deep inner thoughts

superb.

Thanks Shaina for your kind words.

As I said to Nafisa, this is a wild card entry.

Poor Ahem is having a tough time unpacking his complicated self to accommodate Gopi. Give him time and he will.

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tvmylove

@tvmylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

i read it... I just want to say WOW... It's wonderful.. I enjoying reading it.

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winter30

@winter30

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Really nice concept . Great OS 😊

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shajnaii

@shajnaii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

its a fantastic OS...i hope u r not stopping here...

hopefully Ahem will be thinking like this..but part of him will stay stone hearted...he is in a dilemma i guess...

🤗

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avivakirk

@avivakirk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Great Swasthi!!!!!! I had to break the rule of not coming to this forum for you and Nafi! I don't mind doing it because you guys did an amazing job!!!!!!!! Swasthi,

I liked this Ahem! He's human in your OS unlike the robot porcupine in theshow...Iliked the way u internalised Ahem's inner thoughts

Loved the following parts:

She took me by surprise!! After walking through the school gate she turned giving me the sweetest smile, I haven't seen of late, and waved goodbye. I responded automatically. I was engulfed in her beauty and her warmth. I simply adored her...

Oh your royal Highness Ahemji...did it take one year to figure out how sweet and loving she is...Loved this part Swasthi!👏

If she ran up to me for a hug through the gate I would have succumbed and hugged her back. Just to take in her a bit of her warmth and give her some comfort that today will go well.I did not realise that I had waved back at her. I looked at my hand which confirmed that I did. How foolish was I to do that as she just stood there looking at me until I put on my stern face. She hastily turned and walked away

So SHOOOWEET! Ha! if u would have done that a little bit of ice would have melted😆

Great job Swasthi! All the best!

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: zee10
i read it... I just want to say WOW... It's wonderful.. I enjoying reading it.

Thank you for your comments. It pleases me to note that you enjoyed it very much.

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: winter30
Really nice concept . Great OS 😊

Thanks for you comments. Really pleased that you found the OS a good read.

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: shajnaii
its a fantastic OS...i hope u r not stopping here...

hopefully Ahem will be thinking like this..but part of him will stay stone hearted...he is in a dilemma i guess...

🤗

Thank you so much for your hug. It was most welcoming.

Thanks for your generous comments too. This will remain as an OS.

Agreeably ... Ahem is facing a dilemma and we will be seeing more of this in the coming days.