My life , My love ❤️ ahem and Gopi updated part 9 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: love_vampires



Ayesha from the begging it's kinda similar , I actually had the idea of ahem not living with modi's but didn't knew how to put it together but as my story goes forward I'll be a different story line , I'm again sorry


ok
but its already been reported to the dev team now

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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Part 3:

Ahem was stuck in his office as some stupid employee had created some problems , he was really mad because he wanted to go home as soon as possible.
It was at 11:30 when he finally finished and took a deep breath
He checked his phone that was on silence and saw 7 calls from Gopi.
He knew that she would be worried about him because he usually returns home at 7:00 clock.

Ahem quickly got up and got all of his stuff
And went to his car , he was only 4 minutes away from the office when he saw some goons misbehaving with a young girl , she looked like she was in a collage or something.

Ahem drove really fast and went were te commotion was happening he told the girl to sitin
His car , at first she was scared but her told her not to worry he is not like other guys , she was relieved and went to sit in his car.

Goons that were over there were furious now.
Gunda: aye chore kya re Marne change hai kya, tuney hum se hamari mehbooba chinlee hain ,other goon tired going to his car but was stopped when ahem slapped him really hard that he fell back.

All the other goons were shocked at first but attacked ahem at once ( as you all know how macho men he is so no one could stand up to him) ahem started beating them one by one , but was stopped as one of the goons shot him with a gun , thank god it went to his arm.

The girl inside saw this and was worried and scared she looked around his car and found a phone , she quickly dial the police station.

As the guy shot him the police came and caught all of them , try even insisted to take ahem to hospital but ahem said not to worry.

Ahem went inside his car and saw the girl scared ,
Ahem: what's you name???
Girl: my name is isha pandey.
Ahem: what were you doing alone at this time.
Isha: I was coming from my friends birthday party , as I was on my way these goons started following me ,thank you so much for saving me from them.

As she was talking she saw that his arm was bleeding , she tore her dupatta and rap it around his arms first ahem was kinda shocked but happy.

Isha: what's you name?
Ahem: my name is ahem modi
Isha was totally shocked at her discovery , your ahem modi OMG I can't believe you , you ave inspired me many ways :)
I cannot believe you infront of me.

Ahem smiled and took her to her house
He gave her his number and said if you ever need help just call be and gave some money to her father as they were a poor family.

Ahem then went home , by then his arm was hurting really badly.
He ran the door bell , Gopi inside the house was really worried , when she heard te bell she opene the door and hugged him really tightly , ahem hissed and Gopi hearin this backed away.

She saw that he was hurt , as if he was injured somehow and bleeding , looking at ahem like this she felt pain in her heart , and ahem could clearly see that.

Instead of saying anything to Gopi he went to his room straight.
Gopi closed the door and went to kitchen to get the first aid box and straightly went to Ahem's room.

Gopi came inside and saw that ahem was struggling taking his shirt off and she could see some bruises at the back as well.
She put the first aid in the bed and went behind him and took off his shirt slowly and made him
Sit on the bed.

She then started dressing his wounds , ahem
Could clearly see that she was crying , Gopi stood up and was about to as she was done but was stopped by ahem.

Ahem made her sit on his lap and asked her why she is ignoring him and why is she crying ???
Gopi didn't say anything at first but then spoke: we'll talk about this matter later , you need to rest but ahem didn't let go off
Her until she answered to him.

He tried several times and finally accomplished as Gopi Shouted because I LOVE YOU AHEM jEE , and if something wouldve happen to you I would have died

She got up from his lap and stood up
Infront of the window looking at the moon

I hope you enjoyed it
Some romantic scenes coming up
And an unusual guest as well
Anyone wants to guess your most welcome :)
Please don't forget to comment :)
Edited by love_vampires - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
WOW ! THIS PART IS AMAZING PLZ UPDATE NEXT PART AS SOON AS POSSIBLE PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ ZZZ
ITS MY HUMBLE REQUEST
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
part 4:
ahemm got up from the bed and went behind her and hugged her from the back, at that moment he couldnt believe that this was really happening , he whispered in her ear and said I love You too gopi.
gopi was shocked ahem turned her around and said
i fell in love with you the first moment i saw you ,
i fell in love with that inoccence of yours,
you kindess, and you taunts.
I LOVE YOU GOPI i cant live without you , i cant live without you and started crying.
gopi satrted crying badly and hugged him , ahem hugged her back
they both stood there hugging each other not knowing anything that goes around them.
after some time gopi let go of him and told him to rest and was about to leave when ahem stopped him and said dont leave me , i cant live wihout you any moment , gopi couldnt say anything to him and agreed , ahem picked her up and took her to the bed.
they both slept in eachothers arm peacfully.
next morning :
gopi woke up in the morniing and felt something around her , at first she was confused but then remembered last night and smiled , she got up and saw that ahem was still sleeping , it was about 11:00.
gopi stood up and thought: ahem jee still at home , he has an important meeting, she went beside ahem and shook him a little bit , ahem first frowned but when he felt something he opened his eyes and saw gopi and smiled.
ahem pulled her from her waist and laid her on the bed.
gopi: Ahem jee what are you doing , let me go , you have to go to office.
ahem: i dont want to go to office today , i wanna sleep right now and with you.
gopi: ahem jee you have an imprtant meeting , you have to get up.
ahem was taken back and jumped: omg ii totally forgot about the meeting, as he was about to go his cell phone rang and it was non other then ahem's kaka , chirag.
chirag: ahem where are you the clients are waiting for you.
Ahem: sorry im coming in ten minutes.
(guys dont worry , ahem and his families problems are not over yet, they only talk because of their business and thats when they meet).
sorry guys will update soon , im watching the movie right now .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful update plz plz pl z plz plz plz update soon as soon as possbile
plz plz plz pl z
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
@love_vampires

wooowww... it's so romantic than saath nibhana kalakariya. maybe the CV must learn from you how to make the story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
@love_vampires

plz write the story again. your story is good.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Sorry guys but I will try my best to update early , Ive just been busy sorry again :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
part 5 :
While ahem was getting ready , chirag modi's company employees were nervous as they hadnt seen ahem and had heard that ahem modi , was an arrogant man , he hates mistakes, and constantley shouts even powerfull employees couldnt work with him.
ahem got ready and left without his breakfast , gopi tried to make him stay but he couldnt.
after 10 minutes of drive ahem got to the the building , he was going over there after 3 months.
ahem got out of his car and went inside , and took th eelevator to the upper buliding , after 50 seconds of waiting the elevator opened ( BING)
and ahem walked , all the employees were looking at him, but ahem was too lost in his thoughts to notice them.
but he was brought back to the world by his uncle, jigar saw him , smiled , and said bhae its been so long??
ahem: excuse me im not anyones brother nor son , im here to do the meeting and thats all , and one more thing dont excpet anything from me.
jigar smile faded and became sad , while chirag knew that it was his mistake that took away the heir of modi industries and their loving son.
chirag: ahem beta listen im sorry but before he could finsih ahem interepted him and said the clients are waiting for us mr chirag modi , can we please proceed now.
this interaction between family was seen by all the employees.
it had been 2 hours and ahem was stilll not setisfied with any presentation, everyone were tired and didnt have the power , it was now lunch time and all the partners were hungry.
while on the other side , gopi knew that he wont eat his lunch until she tells him. so she decides to call him.
after two bells ahem picked up the phone and said Hello.
goopi: hello , ahem what are you doing??
ahem: gopi im still in the meeting sorry i'll be home late today.
gopi: still in the meeting , ahem you didnt eat your breakfast , i want you to go eatt right now meaning right now nad please give others a break to wat something.
ahem laughed and said okie baba okie .
everyone in the meetin groom were surprised to see him laugh.
ahem turned off the phone and told everyone to go have lunch .
this was the first time ahem modi had said that to anyone.
ahem went to the cafetaria in the buliding and got something to eat .
gopi called again to check on him
gopi: ahem are you eating ??
Ahem: hain baba hain im eating , why are you so worried about me.
gopi: oh okie , I love you .
ahem was shocked but before she could get embarrased and notice about what she just said he said I LOVE YOU TOO <3
hope you like it and please dont forget to comment:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I have saves your story to my favorites and will read it and give you a feed back soon... I had guests.

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