My life , My love ❤️ ahem and Gopi updated part 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
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<font size="3">Prologue

Aham Modi the heir and future CEO of Modi group of companies was raging mad and nobody in his family had ever seen him so mad before and they did not really know how to control him. . He had always believed that his family loves him alot that they would let him get married to the person he loved, but what he didnt know about was that they mostly cared about the business and nothing else. not even his happiness.

Aham: I told you I did not want to marry and that to anita
Kokila: Please calm down Aham dikra.. it was your kaka's decision



Aham: I told you all I want to marry someone I love and don't want and arranged marriage then what was the need to force me?

Chirag:That's because this alliance would profit us in business Aham and you know it!

Aham: I don't believe you are still thinking about your precious business after what happened today kaka. Well you know what? This is my life and I plan to live it as I want. I'm done listening to you and accepting all the decisions you force upon me. I can't live like this anymore and I'm leaving this house.

Kokila: What do you mean you are leaving this house?





Aham with tears in his eyes: No mom.. I can't live like this anymore.. I feel suffocated here.. I can't breath freely in this house.. You all forced this alliance on me even when I kept refusing..I'll never come back in this house ,Please don't ever try to contact me as I'll always remember my bitter past everytime you'll do so and I want to forget everything..

Saying so Aham took his luggage and left Modi Mansion to start a new life.</font>



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<div>first two chapters are inspried by the ff lovestory , she has done a great job :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pls continue sooon..its great👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1

Ahem modi is proud CEO of his company which he started 6 years ago while getting helping by his kaka.

Morning
Ahem who is known to be ruthless man and always angry, no one knew what he had been through they always judge him and ahem hearing they was used to it.
He was going to one of his employer house , who had resigned today morning and didnt wanted to work with (AM company ) anymore.
ahem was surprised hearing this , because he always thought the rajesh would always support him , he was more then a employer for him , he was a friend.
ahem reaches and parks his car a little bit far from his house as he knew that the road will be crowded with people.
rajesh was from a poor family thats why he lived in a poor place.
ahem gets out of car and starts walking thinkiing what could be the reason he didnt wantd to work with him.
ahem gets lost and looks around to ask for help , he sees a kid walking and goes to him
ahem: excuse me can you help me find this address (its rajesh mehra)
kid: oh rajesh bhai , yeah sure i'll help you.
ahem: thank you
they were both about to leave when they heard a commotion going on at someones house , many people were standing there and cursing someone.
ahem was about to ge check it when the kid stopped him.
kid: leave them sir , this is a routine , bechari gopi always gets beaten up by her mami and doesnt even have the right to go outside and works 24/7
hearing the girls name ahem felt as if he was connected to her somehow
he told the kid to wait here that he'll come back
ahem goes to the place and goes through the whole crowd of people standing there
he sees a girl on the floor bleeding as hell and some which beating her up crutially
ahem: shouldnt you guys be helping that girl??
men: sir we jave tried many times but the which urmila shah always threanths us and we have no choice
ahem was furious after hearing the men and went inside.
he saw another girl sitting there crying and repeating
girl: its not her fault mummy , i shouldnt have asked you , please dont beat her
ahem saw that and started walking to the women
she was about to hit her with a stick on her head
ahem came and stopped her
at first both the girl and the women were shocked
ahem: stop this dont you have a heart that you are beating this girl so much , look at how she is bleeding.
urmila: who are you to tell me what to do and what not to do , she is my neice and i have the right to do anything with her i want.
why doesnt she just get out of my life.
ahem takes his coat of and puts it around the girl and makes her stand up.
ahem: well if that what you want , im taking this girl with me right now and you will never be able to hurt her again.
both the girl and ahem leave , leaving everyone shocked.
ahem takes her to his car and makes her sit on the seat and takes a seat by himself.
i hope you guys enjoyed it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice start cant wait to read more!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2

Ahem and Gopi both leave , the girl was still crying ahem had tried everyway to make her stop cry bhut didn't work so he eventually gave in

After 20 minutes he heard that she was not crying anymore he looked at her and saw that she had fallen asleep
He kept on looking at her face , she looked so innocent and yet so much pain in her eyes , how can some one be some crutial and beat this innocent girl.

After 5 minutes he stopped the car and looked at Gopi she was still asleep , he didn't wanted to wake her up so he got out of the car and opened her door and picked her up

He rang the bell once and some old lady opened the door
Lady : arre ahem dikra you home so early
The she saw a girl in his hands
Ahem: hain Jamna bhai
Ahem saw that she was condused at who this girl was?
ahem: Jamna bua she will stay will us from now on.
Saying this he entered that house and took her to one of the room and layed her on the bed.

Ahem went to go freshen up and told Jamna bua to get the dinner ready.
He came back with a first aid box and saw that the she was awake and seeing him she felt a little relieved

Ahem: oh your awake
Gopi: nodded
Ahem: let me dress your wounds
There were many , at her back and her hands legs ahem couldn't believe it.
At first the girl got scared but ahem secured her she was safe and no one would hurt her
She smiled and nodded
Ahem: oh sorry we haven't introduced each oter yet
Hi my name is ahem modi , CEO ahem modi company
What's your name?

At first she couldnt speak but tried her best
Girl: hi my name is Gopi shah. Thankz for helping me by saving me from my mom ( mami)
ahem: that was your mom who was beating you up , I can't believe it.
Gopi: yeah but no one knows that except my older sister who just found out about it , because of which she was beating me

Ahem started dressing her wounds and gave her a shirt and a shorts to wear as her clothes were messes up with blood all over and told her that she will be staying here and told her to go freshen up.

They both have dinner and go to their rooms to sleep
But for some reason they couldn't , they kept on thinking about each other .

Ahem wakes up in the morning and goes to kitchen
He was shocked to see her in the kitchen as she was still weak an needed rest , he ran to her and stopped her.

Ahem: what are you doing you should be resting , where is Jamna bua?
Gopi: actually Jamna bua called today morning that she wouldn't come as it's her son's wedding so she needed two weeks off and she said sorry. Because of that i thought I should make your breakfast if you don't mind
Ahem: no I dont mind but your still so weak and your working here , I don't want that.
Gopi: don't worry I'm fine :)
After sometime agreed and left Gopi innthe kitchen to get ready.

He was getting late for the office he came running outside and eat half of his breakfast but Gopi made him eat all of it and even gave him his lunch.
Ahem took the lunch and by mistake he kissed her forehead and left Gopi shocked and shy

It had been one week since they Gopi was living with him , they understood each other better and felt really comfortable talking to each other.

It was 12:00 at night ahem still hadn't returned from office , Gopi was getting worried and tried calling him many times but he wouldn't pick up then suddenly she heard the bell and ran toward the room.
When she opened the door she was shocked to see ahem hurt and bleeding.

Ahem came in and saw Gopi was hurt
I hope you enjoyed it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dear...this stroy is really good..

pls update sooon...wat happened to Ahem???😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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my wot hap to ahem plzzz update t
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Great job, please update soon.
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sorry but i have to say this..
this fanfic is a complete copy as i read the 1st two chapters

it been copied
the original copy is below the link:


sorry but.

Mods please see this matter
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayesha_78

sorry but i have to say this..

this fanfic is a complete copy as i read the 1st two chapters

it been copied
the original copy is below the link:


sorry but.

Mods please see this matter



Ayesha from the begging it's kinda similar , I actually had the idea of ahem not living with modi's but didn't knew how to put it together but as my story goes forward I'll be a different story line , I'm again sorry

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