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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Really like your story and Kamna, update soon because I can't wait to read more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This update was so tiny, I mean the font size then I remember you said you are typing from a phone, so that's the reason, your update was good.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I plan on hiding gopi's decision for a while i wanna build some suspense
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Ahhh i am sad ... so when will you update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
awesome...the story is sooo cool...

i love kamna di!! aah...! if only this was fr real!
the "strangling the pota in bed" n "throwing d ass outta d window..."made me go 🤣


yes ahem...it serves u rite!!


lovely...cant wait fr ur next update!!👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok here is the update. sorry for the lateness had exams. thank you to everyone for the lovely comments.

Like I said before I plan to hide Gopi's decision for a while. So lets see how it turns out.

Part 4

It had been 2 weeks ago since Gopi came to Delhi with Kamna and the whole world started to appear in front of her. Gopi became aware of her surroundings and had learnt to trust her instincts and not let anyone use her in anyway. What hurt Gopi the most in these 2 weeks was when the reality of her Rashi ben and Mami came to her. Many of the things that had happened while at Modi Bhavan now came into show; Gopi realized in every moment she had been framed. Yet her heart did not believe that this could be true; she decided to accept this as the truth and be cautious of Rashi and her Mami. Gopi decided no matter what her Mami and Rashi says to her from now on she would think logically before she put it to action.

Ahem had been grumpy for the 2 weeks firstly eating Rashi's tasteless food, having to trouble his mom now and then to help find his things, trying to indulge his mind into his work so that he constantly wouldn't have to think about Gopi losing her luggage. Kokila finally got fed up of Ahem's constant bugging that she handed his phone to him and said "instead of spending all your time calling useless people on your phone, call your wife and ask her where your things are." Ahem never expected that especially from his mom.

Jigar and Rashi's relationship on the outside looked as though it was getting better but in the inside Rashi was just acting away to get sympathy from Jigar so that she wouldn't land into any trouble since Kagdri always kept two eyes on her. Kinjal and Dhaval's relationship got way better than before. Kinjal never realized the good her mom did for her to get married to Dhaval but after Kamna had a one on one with her she started to see Dhaval with caring eyes even though love did not show in their relationship they both did start to feel properly settled in to each other.

Everyone was supposed to leave for Delhi 4 days before Kamna's haldi ceremony. Kamna had said it would take 2 weeks to renovate then 4 days before the haldi they would all be together and have fun before the shaadi stuff began. But then something unexpected happened. Kamna called on the morning of the day before everyone was to leave for Delhi. Everyone was sitting having breakfast and Rashi surprisingly picked up the phone

Rashi: Hello. Jai Shri Krishna'

Kamna: jai shri Krishna. I want to talk to mota mama please...

Rashi: kamna ben its you! How are you? How is everything? How is Delhi? How'

Rashi kept on asking questions and kamna knew better that rashi has a reason for buttering up.

Kamna: rashi I'm fine, I need to talk to mota mama, its urgent'

Rashi: is everything ok? Do you need help? Has gopi caused you problems'

As soon as Ahem heard the name gopi his head shot up and looked towards rashi with concerned eyes thinking "what had that gawar done now?" everyone had now started to look at rashi.

Kamna: Rashi do you gave an ear infection?

Rashi: No why?

Kamna: I have told you twice already that I want to talk to mota mama, so give him the phone will you'

Rashi: Ok ok I am giving...

Rashi gave the phone to Chirag and said it was Kamna

Chirag: Ha Kamna beta what happened?... Is he ok?...ok ok I will ask him, but when is Aditya coming?... ok I'll take care of that, here you can talk to Kokila..

Kokila: mota bhai what happened?

Chirag: Kamna wants to talk to you (he passes the phone to Kokila)

Kokila: Hello Kamna beta jai shri Krishna. What happened?... Hey Krishna Bhagwan why didn't you inform us earlier?...ok I will tell Ahem. Jai Shri Krishna. (cuts the phone)

Hetal: Kokila, Jigar ki papa what happened? Why did Kamna call so early in the morning?

Chirag: Woh Hetal, Shyam had a stroke and he was managing the workers who are renovating Kamna's place. He is in bed rest for a couple of weeks and they need to finish the job. Kamna is at the hospital most of the time these few days before her wedding so she can't manage much. Gopi is there but it is not safe for her to be alone without Shyam to watch the workers. Plus Aditya will not make it to Delhi until the morning before the haldi so she is in a big dilemma.

Kokila: mota bhai there is no need to worry, we will send Ahem over. Ahem Dikra can you go to Delhi earlier?

Ahem: I think I might be able to. (facing Chirag) Kaka can we move up our meeting earlier then I will finish in time and maybe catch tonight's train and get there by the morning.

Chirag: Hmm I think that is a good option. We will have to hurry with that.

Parag: Ahem Dikra I'll get the ticket for you. So that you don't have to rush with things and Kokila will get your things packed for the journey.

Ahem: Ji thank you papa.

With that the men left for work and Parag made his way to get ready to get the ticket.

On his way to work Ahem started to think why he suddenly agreed so fast to go to Kamna's place when he had so much work still pending in the office. Was it because he hated eating Rashi's food that he had to get away from it? Or was it because he suddenly became concerned that Gopi would be alone in the house with many working men? That was not a good idea. In a way he felt that he reacted fast because he had to protect Gopi even though he did not love her.

Edited by samiya315 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
good one dear!!! pls go ahead
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Nice update ...thanks...liked it ..👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry i had more planned was too tired to poaosstt the resti will post again soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Kamna certainly has a plan up her sleeves.
Ahem though confused inwardly, he is going to rescue Gopi so he thinks.
I think he is in for a surprise.
Update soon.

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