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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1

Background: Ranjana Ben's daughter Kamna is a doctor who lives and works in Delhi came to visit Modi Bhavan had her engagement in Rajkot. She has seen Rashi's true nature and how Gopi never gets Ahem's love even though he doesnt behave bad with her, they just behave like a married couple with no love in their life. Ahem is yet to express his true feelings. Kamna knows Gopi is uneducated so she does something to help Gopi without telling anybody. Jigar and Rashi's marriage is on crisis. Kamna convinces everyone that she needs to take Gopi with her to Delhi to redecorate the new home before marriage but does not tell the truth. Urmila doesn't like the idea of Gopi going to Delhi so tells Rashi to convince her Hetal to let her go too.

In the Kokila's room Hetal, Koki and Kamna are talking.

Kamna: Thank you mami. I promise I will take care of Gopi.

Koki: Kamna I trust you and I know Gopi is in safe hands when she is with you. But I worry about how Ahem will feel.

Kamna: I think it is better for the both of them. It will give them time to rethink their lives and I know that it will bring some good to them.

Hetal: Why dont you take Rashi as well. You will get things faster than Gopi would not need to stay for 2 weeks with you? What do you say Kokila?

Kokila: Mota bhabhi that's Kamna's choice, she only wants to take Gopi so...(before she could finish her sentence)

Kamna: Nahi Mota Mami. I think it is better that I don't take Rashi at all. Both Jigar and Rashi have issues in their marriage and I think it is best if they sort it out first. Its for their own good.

Kokila: I think she is right.

Hetal: Ok. I'll tell Rashi.

Both Rashi and Urmila were upset to hear that Rashi cant go so they decided to make a scene on the evening that Gopi was going to Delhi. On the other hand Ahem was worried, he felt like something was being taken away from him but he didn't know what. He just watched Gopi packing her bags with teary eyes and decided to talk to her for a bit so that she knew that she would be back.

Ahem: Are you finished packing?

Gopi: Ji'..almost.

Ahem: Are you sad that you are leaving?

Gopi: Ji'. Maaji is going to be lonely without me...she is going to have a hard time taking care of things and I...

Ahem: So you are just going to miss Mom?

Gopi looked at Ahem: Can you take care of yourself'... without me?

Ahem: Mom is here like always... Anyways I am going to miss'...(he stopped before finishing the sentence). Do something for me, take care of Kamna Di. She means the world to us.

Gopi: I promise.

Kamna started to get worried in the middle of the night she knew that Rashi was up to something because the expression she had over dinner said it all. Rashi was jealous but was going to do something to ruin Kamna's plan. She had to act fast. In the morning after breakfast Chirag mama said that they will be home in time to see Gopi and Kamna to the airport. This brought a light smile to Ahem's face atleast he can see her go.

Rashi told her mom to come in the evening and they will start their drama then. Kamna knew something was up so just before lunch she got her plan working.

Hetal, Koki and Gopi were watching while Rashi was upstairs butttering up her mummy on the phone

Kamna (on the phone): Kya? ...Dr. Mishra did you give he the I.V.? Do it fast '... No no I don't care what she says'... My god, what is going on at... Uuf I cant believe this I am away for some time and'... cant you guys do a single thing without me...look I am coming in this evening's flight, then we can discuss... ok fine lets see what I can do.

Koki: Kamna what happened? Why are you screaming on the phone?

Kamna: Mami, one of my patients is seriously ill and the other doctors cant seem to handle the situation. He is not cooperating with them and we are getting into lots of trouble' I don't know what to do they are telling me to come fast.

Hetal: Then you should go now. You shouldn't delay. If someone's life is in danger then you should hurry. Kem koki?

Koki: yes yes mota bhabhi is right you should go.

Kamna: but mami Jigar and Ahem were supposed to take us to the airport?

Koki: don't worry about that your parag mama is here and he will take you to the aiport. Gopi vau go get ready and come down with your bag fast.

Gopi: ji maaji.

Hetal: I'll get some snacks ready for you and gopi since its almost lunch time.

Kamna: Ok mami.

So Kamna's plan worked she went and got changed and brought her luggage down to see Gopi ready with her things to go. Gopi was now upset that she wont be able to say bye to Ahem. Now Rashi was curious something was happening downstairs and nobody was telling her until she saw Gopi and Kamna by the door ready to go. Both the girls were waiting for Hetal to bring the aarti thaali.

End of part 1

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good start Samiya.. Interesting premise

Cant wait to see what happens next, esp. Aham's reaction when he gets to know Gopi is gone...
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Boy this girl is very smart ...love the way she out smarted rashi. can't waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I really like your story. Excellent! Please update regularly. 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good going ... a great plan from Kamna's part against Rashi.
Looking forward to Ahem's reactions in the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2
Rashi: gopi are you going somewhere?

Gopi: ji rashi ben. I am...

Kamna: why rashi you have a problem now that gopi is leaving. You knew she was leaving with me so why are you surprised now?

Rashi: nahi nahi. Its just that you were leaving this evening but you are suddenly leaving now that's why I was curious.

Koki: oh were you now rashi? Well if you spend most of your time locked in your room with the phone you wont even know if an tonardo went by.

Rashi was upset and angry now that she couldn't make her plan work. Kamna saw the look and was so happy that this had slapped Rashi in the face well. After aarti Kamna and Gopi said their goodbyes and left for the airport. Rashi was called to the kitchen by kokila and hetal to come cook since it was almost lunch time. She couldn't even give her mom the news. On the way to the airport Kamna called Ahem to let him know they were leaving.

Ahem: kya?! Di you are leaving? But I thought you would wait for me.

Kamna: ya I know but one of my stupid patients is going bizerk and I really have to get there soon. I will call you as soon as we get to Delhi. Talk later ok bye.

Ahem: but di (disconnects the phone) ...how can this happen? SHE is leaving without saying a proper goodbye when she is just going temporarily. She said a huge goodbye when I asked her to leave, my god this gopi is something.

Ahem was really upset now that Gopi is leaving. He looked up at the clock and thought there is still time and I can make it to the airport. So he ran out the door and quickly got into the car and spenf off to the airport as fast as he could. Kamna and Gopi just got their boarding passes and were just waiting to go in through security. Gopi was talking to Parag then suddenly Kamna remembered she left something very important in the car.

Kamna: mama where is your car I have left something important in there. It fell out of my bag I need to get it. Gopi take a seat and wait for me and don't go anywhere from here, I don't want you getting lost or Ahem will kill me.

Gopi: Ji, kamna ben please hurry.

Kamna sped off with Parag to the car and within this time Ahem suddenly just entered the airport. He looked around to see if he could see HER but went to ask which gate the flight to Delhi was in. Afterwards he ran to the security area and looked around to see if they had gone through when felt someone touch his shoulders and he turned around.

Gopi: Ahemji... You are here. What happened? Is something wrong?

Ahem: Woh...where is di?

Gopi: oh.. she went to the car with papaji...Kamna ben left something important in the car...I am sorry I know you wanted to say bye to her but we had to rush'...she was yelling on the phone today'...she was trying hard to stay till the evening'....

The whole time Gopi was talking Ahem was just staring at her with the look "please don't go, please don't leave me". He then slowly raised his hand to touch her, gopi got the wrong impression and thought he was going to shut her up and tell her to stop talking too much. So she just went quiet.

Ahem: Woh...if you want'...I can come to Delhi...

Kamna: Ahem? What are you doing here?

Both Ahem and Gopi saw Kamna standing behind them.

Ahem: Woh di...I never got to say bye to you properly so that why I came here to'...

Kamna: Oh I see. (looking from ahem to gopi)... anyway you take care. Gopi lets go we are late come on. See you in 2 weeks Ahem Jai shi Krishna.

Ahem: Jai Shri Krishna.

Ahem just saw Gopi being led by Kamna into the security and just before they got in Gopi just turned and looked at him with tears in her eyes which Ahem did not miss since her has seen those teary eyes many times.

It was 8 in the evening and no phone call came home from Kamna. Kokila and hetal were very worried now. The men came home and enquired about Kamna and gopi.

Hetal: Kamna still hasn't called we have been worried for hours.

Chirag: did you call her home and her mobile?

Koki: mota bhai we called both but her shyamu kaka said she hasn't come home yet. And her phone has been engaged for hours.

Ahem: Mom please don't get worried ...I'm gonna call di's phone now...

Kamna (panting): Hello...

Ahem: di its ahem where are you? You didn't call for hours everyone is worried here. Are you ok?

Kamna: ya I'm...fine. Was just having...trouble with a patient.

Kokila: Ahem dikra ask about Gopi vau.

Ahem: woh.. di mom is asking how is Gopi?

Kamna: Gopi is fine...she is in my cabin. I brought her here to the hospital with me. We had to rush here...Gopi's luggage got lost but it should be here by the next flight. It got shifted to Mumbai instead...I have to take her shopping with me tomorrow, I'll give some of my clothes for her to wear.

Kokila: ahem I want to speak to gopi vau. Please give me the phone.

Ahem: di mom wants to speak to...

Kamna: ahem I cant talk right now I have to rush. I got another crisis at hand. Please tell everyone not to worry and I'll let gopi know I talk to you guys. I'll call you tomorrow. Bye.

Ahem: bye..(thinking- gopi lost her lugguage; what is she going to wear?)

Hetal: Ahem what did kamna say?

Ahem told them everything Kamna had said and everyone was shocked gopi's luggage got lost. When ahem said his di would be taking her shopping they were relieved only rashi was upset that gopi would get new clothes. Ahem was really worried for gopi. She had none of her things so she would be really uncomfortable and upset when he saw his mom worried.

Kokila: Hey Krishna bhagvan please take care of my gopi vau.

Edited by samiya315 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was quick, n I am not complaining...

What is Kamna's plan, what does she intend to do??

Waiting for more...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow!!

A concerned Ahem ... we have yet to see this in the serial!
Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fantastic update... pls continue writing.. waiting for the next update

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very nice dear u r a good writer

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