FF: ~Ek Dujhe Keh Liye~ PART 6 updated page 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
No, no, no...why did you have to stop there? Things were just getting good 😉
Please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks you very much for the english translation.
Part 3 was awesome.
Waiting for part 4.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow awesome!!
juz started reading ur ff- n itsz great!
continue soon plzzz :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments... for a second i thought no one liked it and i should stop 😔 but i shall not stop and will continue... for you all 😳 and all are welcome for the transalations 😃
PART 4-
Ahem- Thank-you nahi kahogi
(won't you say thankyou)

Gopi- Dhunevaad
(thankyou)

Gopi began to take her pillow and quilt when ahem stopped her.

Ahem- Aaj ke baad tumhaari jage mere saath bistar phe hai, zameen phe nai.
( from today onwards your place in on the bed not on the floor anymore.)
Gopi had a big smile on her face. Ahem lifted her in his arms and carried her onto the bed.

Ahem- Vo mein tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon.
(I wanted to say something to you)


Gopi- Ji kahein ?
(yes tell me)

Ahem- jabse humari shaadi huwe hain maine tumhare saath bohot bura barthav kiya hai, mein jaantha hu mein maafi keh layak nai hu. Pur ho sake tho mujhe maaf kardo gopi.
(ever sicne we've been married ive treated you very badly.. I know I don't diserve your forgiveness but if you can please forgive me gopi. )

Gopi- ahemji..apko maafi mangneh ki koi zaroorat nai hai..apne he kaha na abhi keh aap mere pati ho aur apka pura haak hai mujpe.
(Ahem ..you don't have to say sorry.. you just sed it yourself that you're my husband and you have full right on me)

Ahem- Ha lekin iska yeh matlab thori hai keh meh tumhe tapar maaru..tumpe haath uthana mera koi haak nai hai.
(yes but that doesn't mean that .. I have the right to slap you)

Gopi- voh humara guzara huwa kal tha humme use bhula kar ane wale kal ka swagat kar na chahiye. Aap us baat ko bhul jayee.
( that's our past we shud forget that and welcome the future. Please forget that past. )

Ahem- haa shayad tum thik keh rahi ho. Uhm..vo'gopi..mujhe tumhe kuch kehna tha..vo..actually'um..i'
( yeh maybe your right' um' gopi.. I want to sey something to you'actually' i.. )

He noticed that gopi was fast asleep so decided to go to sleep himself..and kissed her forehead.

The next morning'Rashi on the phone..to urmilla.

Rashi- mummy, mujhse yeh saab aur nahi saha jata/ aap kuch kijiye varna mein saach mein paagal ho jaoungi'
(mum I can't take all this anymore'.do something.. or im going to go mad. )

Urmilla- yeh sho bole ja rahi hai..kya huwa?
(what are you talking.. what happen?)

Rashi- saab she phele yeh gawar gopi..jo asmaan seh uther neh ka naam he nahi leh rahi aura b meri mummiji..kaal usne gopi ko ek mehngi saree di tofe mein.. aur mujhe koi sastha necklace aur saath mein yeh kaha..''tumhe abhi he saree kharidi..hai..na isliye yeh necklace tumhare liye'''Uff !!
(first of all this illiterate gopi.. who won't come down.. from the sky'and now my mother-in-law..yesterday she gave gopi a expensive saree and gave me a cheap necklace urgh !

Urmilla ' kyaa !! .. is gopiri ka kuch na kuch karna hi hoga..pur mere samaj mein yeh nahi ah raha keh yeh ajanak gopi asmaan mein kese udne laagi?
(what ?!! we have to do something about this gopi.. I don't get one thing.. how come all of a sudden she is flying so high')

Rashi- yeh tho mujhe nahi pata.
(I don't know myself !!)

Urmilla- tu ek kaam kar gopi phe nazar rak. Khas dor phe ahem and gopi phe'aur baata lagani ki koshish kar keh yeh dono'ki beech mein kya ho raha hai. Tab tak mein is choti kagri ka kuch karthi hoon, bohot zaban chalane laagi hai aaj kaal..huh..chal jay shree Krishna.
(you do one thing.. keep an eye on them and try and find out what is going on between them..
until then..i will sort this kinjal out.. shes answering back a lot these days huh')

Rashi- thik hai..jayshree krishnaa'
(okay..jayshree krishnaa)

Gopi..is in the kitchen and thinking about last night and being shy'

Gopi- kya kaal raa jo bhi huwa tha saach mein huwa..tha yah phir'sapna tha? Aur agar huwa that ho phir iska maatlab yeh hai..keh ahemji'mujhee apna liyaa hai?
(did whateva happened last night.. really happen' or is this a dream..if its true does it mean that ahem has accepted me? )

Gopi noticed ahem and due to last night cannot face him as she is shy and therefore'hides from him.

Kokila- gopi vaoo..gopi vao.. ahem dikhra tumne gopi voa ko kahi dehka kya?
(gopi..gopi' ahem have you seen gopi anywhere ?)

Ahem- (looks around) nai..mom'mein office ha raha hoon..aaj ek meeting hai client ke saath.
(no mom I haven't seen her' im going to the office'I have a meeting with a client today.)

Kokila- aacha jao..(ahem leaves)
(okay go)

Gopi- maaji aap ne bulaya?
(mummmyji did you call me?)

Kokila- kubse awaz deh rahi hoon..kaha thi aap?
(im calling you for so long where were you? )

Gopi- maaji'mein rasoy mein thi.
(I was in the kitchen)

Kokila- thik hai aaj mandir ki puree tarah saaf safay karni hai..aap aur mani yeh kaam kijiye..saabse phele aur phir baadme aap wapas rasoy meh jah sakte hai.
( okay..we need to clean the temple first thoroughly'you and mani do this first thing first and then you can go back to what you were doing.)

Gopi- thik hai maaji
(okay mummyji)

Ahem in the officehas a picture of gopi and place it in a photo frame next to his photo.

Ahem- perfect couple. Gopi jabse aii hai meri zindagi mein sab kuch badal chukka hai bus mujhe hi der huwi use samaj neh mein'. Kyu na mein ek kaam karu..gopi ko kuch dino kehliye kahin bahar gumhane leh jao..kaam keh bahane'is tarah hum ek dusreh ko achi tarah jaan bhi saakenge.

(ever since gopi has come into my life..everything has changed'..it only took me time to understand all this'why don't I do one thing'I'll take gopi out for a few days with the excuse of work..and this way will be able to understand each other better. )
Thats it for now guy.. till next tym byee... hope you all enjoyy 😳😛

Edited by heaven princess - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
loved itt..awesomee :)
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Oooh can't wait for the next chapter, this one was so sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow loved it can't wait for the next part!
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28

lovely update

waiting for the next part eagerly

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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Ahem trying so hard to make all his wrongs right.
Gopi is finding this experience hard to believe.
Looking forward to them spending time together on a short trip.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
thanx 4 da pm n da update
da update was soo sweet n cute totally lovd it
plzz update soon cnt w8 2 da nxt part 😊

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