FF: ~Ek Dujhe Keh Liye~ PART 6 updated page 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it thanks for the translation!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bloem123

loved it thanks for the translation!

Thankyou ..your welcome😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thankyou eveyone.. for your comments and likes😳..im happyy you all enjoyed the story..

The next part is alittle bit long.. then the previous two parts.. i hope its okayy 😳
PART 3
Ahem returned home with the gift for Gopi...and looked around for gopi..but she was nowhere to be seen.
Ahem- Mani...gopi ko kehna mere liye pani..lehkar aaye uper...
(mani..tell gopi to bring me water upstairs)
Mani- Gopi bhabhi..tho ghar phe nai hai..vo aur rashi bhabhi bazaar gai hai kuch saman gharidne.
(gopi is not at home..she adn rashi have gone to the market to buy some stuff)
Ahem- yeh gopi ko abhi jana tha
(did gopi have to go now)
Mani- aap neh kuch kaha kya ahem bhai?
(did yuh say something brother ahem?)
Ahem- Nai kuch nai.
(no nuthing)
Ahem in hiz bedroom.
Ahem- mein yeh gift cupboard meh rakh dehta hoon.. gopi khud samaj jayee gi
(i'll keep this gift in the cupboard and gopi will understand)
in the evening after dinner. gopi was int he mandir getting the puja plate ready for tomorrow..morning..ahem noticed her.
Ahem- mein apko badme phone kartha hoon.(puts the phone down)
kya gopi ne vo tofa dehka hoga ya nai?
( i'll call yuh later on...did gopi see the gift i got her or not ?)
Gopi: Mani ben ap mere liye rasoy se ghee lehke aaygengi...yaha ghee khatam hone jo hai
(maniben can you get melted butter for me from the kitchen... the one here is about to finish)
Mani- ji gopi bhabhi.
ahem took this as a chance and went to approach gopi..when hetal walked in.
hetal- gopi dikhra..puja ki tayari ho gayee kya?
( gopi is the puja plate ready for tomorrow?)
Gopi- haa kaki jee bus ghee rakhna baki hai.
(yeh..just the melted butter is left to be placed)
hetal- acha yeh sab ho jayee tho phir ja keh suo ja na ..tum thak chuki hongi.
(okay after thats done... go to sleep okay..yuh must be tired.)
Gopi: ji kaki jii
(okay aunty)
Ahem was happy so he decided to go back ot the bedroom and wait for her. just when gopi enters kokila calls her for a head massage.
Kokila- gopi vao..mere kamre mein ana zara
(gopi come into my room)
Ahem- aab kya..saab log gopi ko galat waqt phe he kyu bulate hai.
(what now... why does everyone call gopi at the rong time)
Kokila- gopi vao mere sir mein bohot dard hai..aap mujhe thell laga dijiyee
(gopi my head is hurting alot please apply oil for me)
Gopi- jee maaji
(okay)
after applying oil gopi went back to her room and found ahem asleep so she decided to go to sleep as well.
In the morning after the breakfast and puja.
kokila- motabhai..ahem..jigar..aap saab aaj office seh jaldi ah jayee..kyunki.,.humari paros mein jo jayanti ben haina uski..beti ki mehndi ki raat hai..tho usne hum saab ko nimantra diya hai.
(all of you come home early today as we have a mehndi function to go to of jayanti's daughter..tey have invited all of us.)
Ahem was staring at gopi..who noticed and looked down shy.
Chirag- thik hai.jayshreekrishna
All- jay shree krishna
Gopi and rashi went into the kitchen to prepare some sweets for tonight to take... and kokila and hetal were choosing gifts for the function
in the evening everyone returns home from the office and have their tea and a light snack... all of them exit to get ready for the function.
Ahem- Gopi..tumne yeh saree kyun pehni hai... meine jo tumhe kaal di vo pasand nahi aii kya?
(gopi why have you worn this saree..did yuh liek the wun i gifted yuh yesterday?)
Gopi- konsi.. apne tho mujhe kuch nai diya..
ahem goes and take the gift out for gopi...and tells her to wear that one to the function and gopi is happy and shocked at the saem time that ahem bought a gift for her.. and wonders how cum ahem changed so much.. liek this.. what changed him?
Gopi changes into ahems saree.. and walks out the bathroom.. ahems..eyes are fixed on gopi.. gopi had worn the saree in the same style rashi wears it and her hair is left down without pins (same as she was luking after the parlour but wore the saree in the way rashi does.) ahem walks towards her but kokila walks in..
Kokila- gopi vao..aree vah..tame tho bohot sunder laga cho.. ..pur yeh saree..? aaj meine pheli baar dehki hai.. kaha se li?
( gopi..? wow yuh look beautiful..but this saree.. ive seen it for the first tym.. where did yuh buy it from?)
Gopi doesn't say a word and looks down and raises her eyes towards gopi and kokila gets the hint..and walks out.
All of them are at the mehndi function...there is dancing singing and all sorts of fun going on..rashi wanted to dance as well.. but didnt want to go alone..so pulled gopi along with her.. and soon they both were dancing freely...ahem however was standing behind a pillar watching gopi dance and smiling...
Ahem- yeh baar baar mein gopi ki aur kyun khicha ja raha hoon? yeh ho kya raha ha? kahin yeh pyaar tho nahin ? khere aaj raat kisi bhi kimat phe mujhe gopi seh maafi mangi hogi..
(what is thins happening to me? why am i gettin pulled towards gopi so much? is this love? anyways ... i need to sey sorry to her anyhow tonight.)
in the night when everyone returned home..gopi had mehndi applied to her hands and it was still wet and was having difficulty removing her saree..
Gopi- mein rashi ben ko bulati hoon... vo meri madat kar dehngi..
(i'll call rashi..she will help me remove my saree)
Gopi was proceeding towards the door when suddenly the lights were fading away..gopi as getting scared... ahem walked in slowly and closed the door quietly...
Gopi- yeh ajank bathi ko yeh ho gaya hai..rashi ben..rashii b...(bumps into ahem and looses her balance and ahem catches her.. **eyelock**)
(whats happening to the lights..rashi...rashi..)
Ahem- kya huwa..tum chila kyu rahi ho?
(what happen why yuh screaming for)
Gopi- ji..voh..mein..uh.. mehndi..saree.. nai..voo
( um.. me..the henna.. and sare.. uh noo)
Ahem-
kya..ji nai vo mein saree.. ??
(what...no..yes.. saree?)

Ahem looks from her hands to her saree and gets the hint. Ahem proceeds towards the cupboard and gets a yellow night saree out for gopi and walks towards gopi..she gets extremely shyy and looks down.
Gopi- ahemji...yeh aap..mera matlab...
(ahem.. i mean.. what are yuh..)
Ahem- (softly)
shh... kya ahemji..kya.. app..meh tumhara pati hoon.. mera haak hai tumpe..
(shhh.. what ahem..me.. im yur husband i have full right on yuh)
Gopi is gets really happy with ahems words..and eyelock happens. Ahem turns the light off.
Ahem goes behind gopi and puts his arms around her waist and unpins the saree from the top..and pulls her even closer to him.. so she is leaning against him fully..he lets teh pleats fall of gopis shoulder and then.. puts her hair at the front and opens the bow at the back...
Ahem- (whispers in her ear) is saree mein tum aaj bohot khubsurat lag rahi ho.
(yuh look so beautiful in this saree today)
Ahem slowly slides his hand down gopis arm and around the waist.. and pulls out the pleats slowly from her waist.. and the rest of the saree... ..he then raises gopis arms... and takes of the blouse and places it with the matching one for the night saree.. he circled her once wrapping the night saree on her and pleated it and placed it on her in gujrati stylee.. and pinned it in place... and stood staring in her eyes...
gopi became extremely shy..her face had gone red and couldnt stand in front of ahem anymore so decided to escape his eyes...as she walked of he grabbed her arm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
😭Okay..so no one liked this part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
dont cry sweety
love it





waiting waiting
next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
cute and love the goham scene👍🏼 THNKS FOR THE TRANSLATION U ROCK
Edited by ElizaKawa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
enjoyed reading the update... waiting for the next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Wow realy great Update can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
awsome update
relii relii cute plzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
First and foremost, thank you for the translation in english. I'm sure it's much appreciated by many members on the forum.
Secondly, your FF is absolutely wonderful. Great story. Looking forward the your update.

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