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Hii Everyone đ
My Name is Seema... I have been Inspired alot recently seeing everyones FF... they are all amazing đđ.. They inspired me to write my own FF... Please feel free to give your opinions and any suggestions/critisims đł
Hope you all enjoy đł
PART ONE
I decided to start from the Holi scene,, where Gopi had eaten the bhaang Ladoo that urmila gave her, therefore drunk on the bhaang. Also Relations between Gopi & Ahem had become a bit better... he had started to talk to he properly but still did get irritated at her a little at times.
Gopi- Yeh Ahemji kaha jale gayee..abhi tho yahi the..mujhe naa use kuch kehna hai.
(Where did ahem go..he was just here ... i need to tell him sumthing)
Gopi walking tipsy..trying to look for Ahem. Everyone is playing Holi, colours are everywhere. one person playing poured a bucket of coloured water over gopi in which her hair became all wet.
Gopi- Arre mein tho puri tara rang mein rang gayee... aur mere baal bhi kharab hogayee... ab ? ..koi baat nai phele ahemji ko dhund loo phir badal lungi kapre.
(oh no im fully covered in colours... and my ahir is also spoilt...okay not to worry i'll find ahemji first and then go and change)
she carries on her search or Ahem, who is standing in one corner irritated at the colours. Gopi finally notices him and proceeds towards him.
Gopi- Ahemjiii...aap yaha hai..aur mein apkoo hurr jagee dhond rahe thii..
(ahemji yur here and i was looking for yuh everywhere)
(ahemji yur here and i was looking for yuh everywhere)
Ahem- Kyu..ab tumhe kya chahiyee?..ek tho yeh raang waang mujhe pasaand nai hai aur ab tum.
(why? what do yuh want now.. im already irritated with these colurs and now yuh also here)
Gopi- (her smile drops) Main vo apko ek baat puchu?
(can i ask you something)
(can i ask you something)
Ahem- ab kya pooch na hai tumhe?
(what do you want to ask now?)
(what do you want to ask now?)
Gopi- Aap humesha aise ghuse mein kyu rehte hai...aapko muskurana nai aata hai kyaa... mujhe dehkiyee mein kitniii kushh hooo (puts a big smile on her face) ek baar muskurahiyee naa
(why are you always so angry... dnt yuh no how to smile?... look at me...look how happy i look..smile once please)
Ahem- Gopi tum mera dhimak maat khao aur jao yaha se...dafa ho..
(gopi stop annoying me and go away from here.. go )
Gopi- (making a sad puppy face..Ahem stood staring at her cuteness) Bata hai jab aap mere vajhe seh udaas hote hai na tho mujhe bilkul aacha nahi lagta..mein naa apko apko humesha ( about to fall that ahem catches her and holds her around the waist) kush rakhna chahite hoon...Ahemjii vo mein aapse bohoott zyaada pyaar karthi ho..aur apke beena ek pal nahi jee saakthii ...mein humesha aapke saath apki parchai banke rehna chahti hoon...aur mein...mein... (Gopi's eyes are slowly closing and she faints in ahems arms)
(yuh no when yur upset because of me i dnt like it at all... i always want to keep yuh happy..ahem i love you soo much... and can't live without yuh... i want to be yur shadow and always stay with yuh..and ..and..)
(yuh no when yur upset because of me i dnt like it at all... i always want to keep yuh happy..ahem i love you soo much... and can't live without yuh... i want to be yur shadow and always stay with yuh..and ..and..)
Ahem- Gopi..Gopi.. Gopi.. (gentley slapping her checks to wake her up) yeh tho behosh ho gayee
(gopi...gopi...gopi...shes fallen unconcious)
Ahem lifts her up in his arms and takes her to the bedroom . Ahem slwoly puts her down on the bed and in that process Gopi's mangalsutra gets tangled with ahems chain and ahem does not realise and tries to get up but is pulled back towards gopi with hiz arms either side of gopi.
Ahem is lost in gopi...the innocence on her face with a few strands of hair on her face...the cute smile on her face..Ahem moves the hair on covering her face to see Gopis full face. He smiles at her.
PART TWO
Later that during the night.. Gopi is fast asleep..and Ahem is in thinking mode.
Ahem talking to himself.
Ahem: Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai. Aaj pehli baar Gopi ki shabd ho ne mujh pe esa asar ho raha hai...Kyu? yeh ho kya raha hai mere samaj mein tho kuch bhi nai ah raha hai?
(whats thsi happening to me... for the first time.. gopi's words are effecting me...why ?... i don;t understand what is this happening to me)
Gopi turned on her side. Her hand went on Ahems hand. Which took Ahem out of the thinking mode and looked at Gopi and a smile spread on his face.. which he was unable to prevent seeing Gopi's innocent face.
Ahem: yeh sote huwe bohot kubsuraat lagti hai.
(she looks soo beautiful when shes sleeping)
Ahem couldnt resit bending over and kissing Gopi's forehead and as he was about to he realised what he was doing and stopped and backed away.
Ahem: oh god ! yeh ho kya raha hai!
(oh god..what is happening to me !!)
Ahem kept thinking over Gopi's words it was getting to him ..he had never felt this way about anyone-not even anita ! no ones words effected him before except his moms!
Ahem: kya maine Gopi ke saath bohot bura barthav kiya hai? (he remembers the time he slapped her because she is illiterate. and other times when he scolded her ) ..maine Gopi ke saath jo bhi kiya hai mujhe nahi karna chahiye tha ..mujhe gopi se maafi mang ni chahiye.
(have i mistreated gopi...whateva i have done to gopi..she didnt diserve it..i need to apologise to her)
The next morning.
Ahem: Ji mehta jii aap yeh meeting kaal dophaar keh liye fix kaar dijiyee
(yes mr mehta.. fix the meetign for tomorrow afternoon)
Gopi comes out of the bathroom with wet hair.
Gopi: aaj tho maaji bohot datengi.. bohot dere ho gayee.. pur kese? mujhe kaal se kuch yaad kyu nai haii...
(Mums really going to tell me of today,...im soo late... but how.. why dnt i remember what happen yesterday?)
Ahem notices her and he stands staring at her with her wet hair and water drops on her face... he goes walking towards her... and gopi then notcies him and is scared.. he might shout at her... and reaches for her pallu...
Ahem: gopi..tumhe yeh paalu pehne ki koi zaroorat nai hai aaj se..
(gopi yuh dnt need to cover your head from today on wards~)
Gopi: (smiling) Jii? ab ..voh..kyu..?
(huh..why...)
Ahem: Maine kaha isliye (walks of)
(because i sed so thats why)
Gopi is standing there staring as ahem walks off with a big smile on her face.
all downstairs for breakfast.
Kokila: Gopi vao.. tumhe aaj itni dere kyu huwi uthne mein?
(gopi..why are you so late today?)
Gopi: uh..vo..maaji..mein.. uh..
(um.. actually.. im.. uh..)
Ahem: voh mom..gopi jaldi he uth chuki thi.. pur mujhe uska koi kaam tha isliyee dere ho gayee ahne mein.
(actaully gopi had woken up early.. but i told her to do some work for me tahts why)
gopi is shocked that ahem took her side... with a lie
kokila: acha thik hai..gopi vao..nashta paroso.
( oh okay.. gopi..serve the breakfast)
Ahem: Gopi mujhe aur dhokle dho?
(gopi give me some more.. dhokle)
Gopi along with others are shocked at ahems dramatic change towards gopi
Ahem: Gopi?
Gopi: Haa ji...aur?
(yes... soem more)
Ahem: nai bus kafi hai.
(no thats enough)
All the gents go to the office and ladies get busy with their work.
at the office ..ahem is busy in his work and looks up for a minute and sees gopi by the door and smiles
Ahem: Gopi? hey bhagwan yeh ho kya raha hai kal raat se mere saath..ab tho gopi naa hokar bhi dekhne laagi hai...is tarah tho mein koi kaam nai kar paounga,,,,mein ghar chala jata hoon aur waha kaam kar lunga...
(oh god... what is happening to me since last night... im even imagining gopi when shes not even here !... i won't be able to do any work this way.. i think i'll go home and try and do some work there)
Ahem heads home...gopi is in the kitchen cooking and Ahem notices her and stands outside the door watching her and smiles..
Gopi: Ahemji..aap office se jaldi ah gayee? aapki tabiyet tho thik hai nai?
(ahem.. how cum yur back from the office so early.. are you feeling okay?)
Ahem: haaa..naaii...mera matlab ha mein thik hoon.
(yes..no... i mean yes.. im fine)
Gopi: aacha ap aram ki jiye mein apke liye green tea leh kar aati hoon
(okay..you rest and i'll bring tea for yuh)
Ahem: thik hai.
(okay)
in the bedroom ahem tries to concerntrate on hiz work... but fails to do so as he keeps remembering scenes from last night.. of gopi's innocent face and her words... gopi enters:
Gopi: aap ki chai..
(your tea)
Ahem: Thank you
Gopi starts to clean the room and ahem is left looking at her.
Ahem: (to himself) maine iske saath bohot bura barthav kiya hai mujhe koi haak nahi hai keh mein uske saath itna bura barthav karu...mujhe soory kehna chahiye pur kese?... mein ek kaan kar tha hoon.. gopi keh liye ek acha tofa laata hoon..aur uske saath sorry keh tha hoon.
(i have seriously mis treated her.. i ahve no right to treat her this way... i need to sey sorry but how?...i'll do one thing.. i'll go and buy a nice gift for her...)
Guys thats it for today... i hope you all enjoyed it... do leave comments and feel free to critisize/suggest đł
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