FF: Double role...dusra Ahamji (part 4 pg5) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sbp1971

One is bad enoughšŸ˜† Nafissa, you are a very brave soul to take on two. No matter I love it, its the best idea.


For the CVs: Future track may be...?


P. S. Are you going to continue?


Hi Shilpa,

My original idea was to have a fight between the two double role and the stranger to win the fight, killing the Aham we know (the stone hearted one) then the imposter could go and live Aham's life, come up with an old girlfriend trying to spoil things for him and have to act accordingly...but as you can see I've been discouraged by @ayesha and @shoaib...so I am thinking what to do now, where to take the story, but I will continue, as it's my first fan fic which will have a couple of chapters at least.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nafisa, i am encouraging you, go ahead and take it further and kill the stoned hearted one, i love your ff already
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2

Switzerland

Jignesh hears from Priya that the Aham, his mother, Aham's cousin Jigar and his wife were travelling to Switzerland very soon for 10 days, on a business trip. Jignesh thinks okay, good I know that I should not meet Priya for the duration of this trip, he cut short the meeting with her and left.

Aham, Kokila, Jigar, Rashi and Gopi all went to the airport as was planned, but no matter how much Kokila tried to get the two together, it had no effect on Aham, if she requested do anything he did it grudgingly and will little feeling and afterwards he complained to Kokila for having to do anything with Gopi, as he couldn't stand her face or bear the thought of his whole life stretching ahead with her suffocating him. Aham felt Gopi was a source of darkness for him and he was truly unhappy with his mother's forcing him to stay with her. All this was getting to Kokila, she had been trying everything for them to stay together but it seems her son and Gopi were just not made for each other as the punditji said (Ram ki Sita ka jodi) or perhaps the astrology had been wrong, the times of Aham's birth and Gopi's births and their suitability were not right???, Kokila had made a decision that on they return home she would start divorce proceedings for GoHam.

The Modi's were all ready to leave for home, when Aham received a phone call, it seems the client required him to delay his return home so he could change a few things on the plans for a construction Modi Industries were involved in. Aham so that everyone was packed and he knew the meeting and plans would take 2 or maximum 3 days to finalise, he spoke to his Mom and told her that they should go on ahead and he would follow once the work was done. His Mom agreed and Jigar, Rashi, Kokila and Gopi left for the airport, they boarded with no difficulties and 8 hours later they reached India safely. Aham finished his meetings 3 days later checked his flight booking and left for the airport, he took the flight as per arranged but midway from Switzerland and India the flight crashed and they were no survivors as it crashed in the mountains. The Modi's were informed by the travel company that Aham Modi was no more.


[I think I will leave you guys here, I don't want to jump to Jignesh, with everyone probably in mourning over Aham] Some are probably crying now, so it's best to stop here and leave you guys with sweet promise that Ram ki Sita ka Jodi is very much alive and not dead.
Edited by Nafisa_blossoms - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh no, aehem dies
Am sobbing now :( :'(
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayesha_78

Oh no, aehem dies
Am sobbing now :( :'(


šŸ˜† šŸ˜›
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am going to burn jignesh if I find out if it was him :( waiting for the next part. I loved the chapter but it was sad and made me cry :D gimme gimme gimme more :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayesha_78

I am going to burn jignesh if I find out if it was him :( waiting for the next part. I loved the chapter but it was sad and made me cry :D gimme gimme gimme more :D


how can it be him @ayesha, his not an aeroplane pilot is he, also planes crash because of that and weather, wear and tear end of useful economic life or not maintaining them properly, or terrorists, I wouldn't make Jignesh a terrorist...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Am just imagining things against jignesh. Lol that was sad news though but am eagerly wanting more. Lol. How do u think my ff pace is going? Do you want me to start the next chapter straight into the flight to switzerland or go slowly, slowly slowly. I want the reader to tell me just as the audience say the cv shud do this and that
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Ok Nafisa I am taking a stab in the dark, but did you just kill of Jignesh? I have a feeling Jignesh switched places somehow.

Very good, I love suspense, Update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Nafisa,
Hats off to u.One Ahem was not enough 🤣U had to bring in his twin Jignesh. šŸ˜†U are very brave to take on two of them. šŸ‘Enjoyed the Hatke story line.Waiting for more!! Curiosity is whetted.

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