Tanhayee, dard,bechain & ek dil ka rishta - 2nd FF - Page 3

Originally posted by: ayesha_78

omg aham ka bheja your soo funny
haladi ki tara is mein lala ho ga
(joke)
we should find him some ice and bucket but it wont help he a stoned hearted mahn
😡

heart ko hata dete hai, kamsekam logon se dhang se pesh to aayega if he has a balanced head on his shoulders

Originally posted by: upasana.diya

heart ko hata dete hai, kamsekam logon se dhang se pesh to aayega if he has a balanced head on his shoulders

yeh that would be an excellent idea.
am gnna mail u the next part edit it. am total confused with it.

Rashi spoke: mummyji, kaki, kaka,papaji, Yeh hai Kinshuk, Gopi ka Bhai. Bachpan mein meri ma nai is ko ghar se nikhaldiya aur aaj he is in a high reputation just like us.

Everyone greets him, and talks to him. they got to know him properly and he spoke: i heard about Gopi, she left the house just for Aehem happiness. if u want i can do something to bring them back. but first i have to find Gopi. Everyone heard of the plan and Aehem comes down and notices Kinshuk downstairs cracking Jokes with jigar. he gets angry again.

chapter 5

Aehem is Angry, he saw Kinshuk who is his worst enemy. the man who tried to compete with him. Kinshuk turns around and was shocked to see Aehem Modi the guy who chucked Gopi out. He whispered to everyone : Aehem is here now the game starts now

Aehem comes down and says: tu yahan kya kar raha hain, mana kya tha modi house main dhakal mat dehna warna main tujko chorunga nai

Kinshuk smirked and says: what made you think i will listen to you, you now kicked my sister out of here just because she isnt educated , damn your thinking, do you even have a heart.

Aehem shouts and says: how dare u, say one more word phir mujse bhura nahi hoga

Kinshuk shouts back: nahi Aehem,

he walks up to him and says: ab tum nai kuch bola to bohat boora ho ga

everyone was smirking behind and knew this was the only was Aehem to bring out his feeling and tell Gopi

Kinshuk: look am gopi brother, she is not poor, doesnt mean she not educated doesnt mean she is a poor.

Everyone was stunned by the argument in the house. Kinshuk Phone starts to ring. The Doctor says Gopi health has gone worse, her life is going back to the way it was.

Kinshuk: What? Gopi ki halat phirs say, that cant happen. Gopi life in danger again and in ICU.

kinshuk completly forgot, that he blurt the truth out in front of the family. He puts the Phone down and turns. He saw everyone shocked and says: Rashi that girl who ha an accident was Gopi?

Hetal: tell me ? was it

Rashi: ji, bechari zindagi aur maut kai beech main lar rahi hai

Aehem was shocked, he felt " due to him she was in this critical condition, why am i feeling her pain, why am i lonely, why can i hear gopi is calling me, why am i felling bechain". He was lonely, Anita left him for Money, Gopi came to his life, and i treated her like dirt and a naukar. he thought: ' whaat am i made of, what kind of clay am i, jo larki nai khushi sab ghar walai ko day hai, sab kaam khud karti hai, i have wronged her, instead of calling her a gavar, i could have educated her a little.

Aehem starts to cry and goes upstairs.

The modi house rushes to the hospital and sees Gopi in the ICU getting cured. Everyone had tears. What could they do. it was all fate.

Kinshuk is crying badly and rashi is trying to console him. There comes Urmila, Dhawal and Kinjal.

Kinjal; Maa bhabhi ko kya huwa, am feeling very weird today. i feel that gopi will not be saved

will continue from here tommorow

enjoy

Ayesha fantastic. Just caught up on all the parts. Great writing. Jaldi update karna mein intezaar kar rahi hoon!

super cool... Ahem crying... he deserves it...
lets see what Kinshuk does to Urmi... am waiting

Please continue

Originally posted by: Eesha2

Ayesha fantastic. Just caught up on all the parts. Great writing. Jaldi update karna mein intezaar kar rahi hoon!

hello eesha just updated chapter 4 and 5 today and will continue tommorow

just keep on guessing whats going to happen next :)

Originally posted by: upasana.diya

super cool... Ahem crying... he deserves it...
lets see what Kinshuk does to Urmi... am waiting

Please continue

kinshuk os kanjar ki halat theek kar dalai ga
:)
sorry for swearing but cant help it

Originally posted by: ayesha_78

kinshuk os kanjar ki halat theek kar dalai ga
:)
sorry for swearing but cant help it

i don't know what Kanjar means but i know its used a lot...

it is used alot and myself say that alot dont know what it means either

chapter 6 urmi ki sachai modi house say samnai

Kinjal starts to cry and sees Kinshuk and says who is this?

Dhawal sits down and pretends that he was upset. Kinshuk turns around and sees urmi.

Kinshuk gets mad and hyper and says : Rashi, tell your mother to go away, because of her Gopi is very critical, she has harmed my sister since childhood for little things. I will not bear her here one single minute.

Urmi: Dikra, who are u, and why are you crying for gopi, she is nothing to u.

Jigar: can u all be silent for a second. This is Kinshuk Mahajan. the most famous businessman like us. And he is.......

Everyone pauses and kinshuk says: kya huwa mami, why are u so quiet. dont you not remember me, am the same kinshuk whom u have kicked out of the house since childhood.

Urmi and dhawall: Kyaa....

Urmi: dikra ( sobbing) where have u been? ave been looking for u

Kinshuk: looking damn my foot, aap jaisi kakalakri aurat mainai aaj tak nahi dekha, kaisi aurat hai aap.
Urmi: ....
Kinshuk: speak why are u quiet, are u now afraid, what u wanted to happen has happened, u kicked me out, got ur daughter married to jigar but suppose to get married to Aehem, instead of rashi marrying ahem u got gopi married so he can taunt her for life not Rashi

Rashi: haan, kanaji ka laakh laakh sukar hai, he showed me ur evil side, what did u do.

Urmi: haihai, plan has flopped, ha mainai yeh sab kiya, gopi accident was caused by me too, what will u do. and why have u returned to our lives again kinshuk, sharam nahi aye tujko?

Kinshuk: aap ko sharam ani chahiye, ek ma ho kar, ek bacha ko ghar se door bhej diya, have u ever thought what will be going into that child heart, what will be going through him? all that time i have been saying dont send me , but still, nahi na - laik ho main is liye na laik, ma bap ke jaane sai, nai laik bangya, gopi ki tara, sharam aani chahye,

Urmi: tumhari himat kaisi hoye tumhari mahmi se aisi baath karni ki

she was going to slap him but Aehem stops her. He was in tears after what he had heard.

Aehem: how dared u play with my life? who gave u the right? ur gopi mahmi, only mahmi, not her mother, Gopi never gave u the right , i never so how dare u?

Everyone was shocked to see the new side of Aehem but they all stayed quiet.

the Doctor comes out and says : she is absoutely fine now, she is weak. You all can meet her but be aware not to give her tension. and please urmi and dhawal you are not allowed to enter the ward as it is commanded by the commissioner


to be continued.............