Tanhayee, dard,bechain & ek dil ka rishta - 2nd FF - Page 14

Created

Last reply

Replies

147

Views

44.2k

Users

14

Likes

313

Frequent Posters

-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

kinshuk locked the door of the office and left. He told kinshuk about Anita, and knew he will sort out everything. Kinshuk had never imagined how low she has stood, and made a kasam that he will not leave her if she harms anyone in this family. After all there is not 1 fighter in the modi house but 2 Aehem and Kinshuk.

They went home, sat down and had lunch. They dared not to tell anyone in the house after Kinjal gets married and Gopi was pregnant, and didn't want her to worry in the state she is in.

Chapter 26

They was sitting down, chatting and baa spoke from behind : aehem dikra help me sit down.

He quickly stood up and went up to her and helped her sit down.

Baa: where are you going, sit beside me.

Aehem turned around and spoke: jee

He sat beside her.

Baa again spoke: what happened to you, where did you anger go today, and how come your sitting with me today and that for the first time?

Aehem couldn't answer but Kinshuk spoke: baa, gopi has changed him totally, he has gone mad with her love. If I hadnt come on the right time then I wouldnt have taught him the right lesson, kyun Aehem?

Baa: acha, but I dnt recognise you

Gopi comes from the kitchen and says: baa, yeh mera chota bhai hai, LA say aya hai, aur kinjal say shaadi kar raha hai

Chirag: baa there is some good news, your grandson is becoming a father.

Baa greets him and is pleased.

The next day, it was the wedding, the bride goes to the palour and takes her lengha with her, while on the other hand, there is some romancing going on in the room with the door locked. Aehem had gopi picked up, and he put her on the bed. He spoke: dont u dare get of from the bed otherwise I wont leave you.

He gives her the sari and tells her : you better wear this otherwise am not talking to you, and have some rest.

After a while, gopi got up, had a shower, wore the sari aehem gave her, and got decked up. In the palour, Kinjal was pleased. She decked up, wore her lengha did her make up and sat down. She had to leave from there exact half 5 as at half 6 the baraat was to come.

There in the house Kinshuk, got ready, his guests came, baand bajaa came and they all left. Kinshuk sat on the horse with his sehra on.they all arrived at the modi mansion, Kinjal came inside from the back door and went to her room.

Koki welcomed the guests and did some rituals on Kinshuk and made him enter.

After a while, all the mens were downstairs, kinshuk on the alter, pandit tells them bring the bride down as the time is passing by.

Gopi, Rashi and a few of their friends bring kinjal down. Aehem stares at Gopi. She was exactly looking like a bride today. Everyone got smitten by her. Kinjal sat on the alter and the pandit began.

Gopi stood beside Aehem, he grabbed her hand.

Koki looked and smiled. She ignored them.

After a while Jalshuk exchanged garlands and did the phere and took vows for each phere they took. Then they sat down and Kinshuk put magulsutra and sindoor on her.

Pandit: now ur married, take the elders blessing, and its time for you to leave with the baraat.

They took blessings and they all went to the door. Kinjal crying, Aehem forced her to sit in the car and they went.

After Jalshuk went, the modi house went to the main hall and sat down. Gopi health got bad. Aehem took her to the room, made her change and he got changed. He locked the door and they went to sleep.

next chapter - the storm begins - revenge of anita, and umang tries to stop her

walquest2000 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
"Panna came in and said: why did you slap her, are you mad, why did she leave the house? Is it for your sake or the family"

Who is Panna? Tell us.
-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
Panna is a wee girl who used to work in gopI and rashi house before marriage she used to be treated badly so rashi gopi sent her to boarning school and they accept her as their wee sister
madhu_sridhar thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
so ahem wants a son huh...i bet the first toy he gets his son will be a blackberry...😆..

dat was a gr8 update ayesha....cant wait 2 see wat anita does...
-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
Hehehehe a blackberry
Omg that utterly funny madhi
Omg him and I have same blackberry phones
-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

They took blessings and they all went to the door. Kinjal crying, Aehem forced her to sit in the car and they went.

After Jalshuk went, the modi house went to the main hall and sat down. Gopi health got bad. Aehem took her to the room, made her change and he got changed. He locked the door and they went to sleep.

Chapter 27- after 6 years leap

6 YEARS LEAP ' same casts, but 3 new members Arhaan, RaJi son, Rouhan, GoHem son, Kamini JalSuk daughter will be introduced.

It was morning, a fresh day has begun, everything was getting done, someone was getting the pooja ready. But who was it?

Gopi comes down and sees all the house clean. She goes to the Temple and sees everything ready, even the thali. She was shocked, but how would have done it.

Rashi comes behind her and says: what the.... who has got the house all tidy and clean, gopi u never done it, neither me, mom kaaki or kinjal. In fact kinjal not even here shes away out, to Dehli with Kinshuk leaving Kamini here.

They knew who would have done it. They turned around and started searching the house, went to the main hall, and caught kamini there.

Gopi: badmaash, where have u been? And your awake early. Did you clean the temple?

Kamini: no I never

Arhaan: oh you do know

Kamini: no I dont know, you know

Rouhan: oh please kamini, say the truth, puri kinjal kaki ho tum, har waqt bak bak karti rehti ho

Kamini: kya? Gopi mami, yes I cleaned the temple and tell him will you.

Gopi: I am not saying anything you go after him, otherwise if I taunt him your mamoo wont leave me.

Kamini went after them as they irritated her.

Kamini was just like her mother Kinjal, naughty, intelligent, clever, non stop talker, lots of attitude, pampered, anad appear to be more mature than her age. She is not what she is to be seen. She is a girl with fair complexion.

Rouhan, a boy just like his father, brainy, intelligent, non stop talker, innocent, double attitude meaning double the attitude that kamini has. Just like his father Aehem Modi, a guy who is arrogant, but been pampered by his wife after he has changed.

Arhaan, the second joker in the Modi house after Jigar, his father, who is, utterly unbearable in the house, naughty and someone who always scored 60% in every test he had. Never like Kamini and Rouhan top scorers in school.He loves singing and aimed to be a singer when he grows up not a business man like his chacha Aehem who is always serious.

These 3 kids goes to the terrace and plays football( dont worry guys, the terrace has fences on them so that the kids don't fall)

One by one the member of the Family comes to the temple and stands there. They waited on Gopi and Rashi to come. They were late.

They came and held their ears and went to their mother in laws and spoke: sorry, with the kids mischievous we got involved.

They got escaped like always.

They started pooja and sung eh gopal krishna and finished. Gopi gives aarti to everyone and notices aehem is not there. Where could he be. Where.

For the 2st time he has not come down to the pooja. Today she had to sort him out.

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

They got escaped like always.

They started pooja and sung eh gopal krishna and finished. Gopi gives aarti to everyone and notices aehem is not there. Where could he be. Where. For the 2st time he has not come down to the pooja. Today she had to sort him out.

Chapter 28

Gopi was totally changed, all fit, educated just like a model, Plastic surgery done on her nose and chin. She so was angry today. Where was he?

She went to the kitchen. Rouhan went upstairs and saw his father sleeping. He did not disturbed him but infact he went quietly, took his shoes of and lied down beside him and hugged him. Aehem smiled, his son was beside him. He woke up and spoke: What happened now, did your mother scold you again.

He got up, wore his black suit, did his hair, picked up rouhan and took his keys. They went downstairs and He spoke: Lets go to the park today, and leave your mother here, she wont even leave the house for a minute.

Everyone turned around and looked at him. Gopi who is shocked, with a mouth opened, and looked at Koki.

Koki: now look these two wont even listen to us or u, every day they are getting spoilt like nuts. Like father, like son.

Aehem, all changed top to bottom. He has lost weight, with a beard, glasses, hair short with gel on, surely no one knew he is the Modi enterprise owner.

They chuckled and went to the dinning table and sat down. Rouhan sat on his lap, He gave him his breakfast and ate after him.

After a while, it was time for him to leave for office. Definitely he wasnt leaving Rouhan at home, as he will harass his mother so he took rouhan with him to office and made him learn basics algerbra and maths. Rouhan was absolute fond of this and loved it.

While they was about to leave, jigar spoke: can I come with you, Kinshuk is not here so am not going alone.

Rouhan: yeh kaun sa sawal hai chacha, chalo (speaking in his father voice- surely he mimics him really well)

They left.

A few hours later, Kinjal and Kinshuk arrived , they came inside the modi house with the Junejas, afterall they had to Kamini birthday was soon and they had to arrive for their naughty spoilt daughter.

madhu_sridhar thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww😍............i'm goin nuts over this ahem... he's so adorable as a dad....
loved ur update ayesha😊

-GayabCat- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

A few hours later, Kinjal and Kinshuk arrived , they came inside the modi house with the Junejas, afterall they had to Kamini birthday was soon and they had to arrive for their naughty spoilt daughter.

Chapter 29

JalShuk arrived and saw no one at home so they sat down in the main hall with Kinshuk chacha and family. They sat down and started to talk. Koki, Hetal and Rashi enters the house and saw them. They were happy to see them. What could they do. After 3 months they stayed in delhi and now there finally here in Rajkot. Koki shouted: gopi

Rashi: leave it kaki I'll go,

Rashi went and saw Gopi in the kitchen sitting down with her head in her hands.

Gopi: Rashi thank god your here, please take all this outside and call the Doctor am feeling really ill, and dizzy.

Rashi takes the food outside and gopi comes alone. She sees her chacha and her family sitting down. They never recognised her until she spoke: kinjal how are you?

Kinjal: Gopi bhabhi am fine.

Kinshuk: are you not going to meet your brother, ur blood brother

they met, and juneja were shocked.

The doctor came and did the check up on Gopi. And spoke: nothing to worry, she is weak, and need completely bed rest.

In the office

In the office, Rouhan was doing his work.

Some clients were over and having a meeting with Aehem. Rouhan did not speak. After the meeting was over, the deal got fixed. He was really angry, Aehem started to shout at his client. Rouhan got scared and ran to his father and hugged his legs. He was frightened and spoke: please papa, dont shout, rouhan is very scared.

Aehem saw him scared and remembered he was going back to his old self so he calmed down. He took his stuff and told rouhan to take his stuff and give it to him. They left.

When they both arrived at home they saw kinjal, kinshuk and the junejas and got happy. The meet each other and hugged. Rouhan stood behind his father and was shy as he didnt know the junejas. Kinshuk picked him up and spoke: how are you my son?

Rouhan looked around and saw his father, they looked and winked.

He spoke: son, am not your son, am aehem modi son, am your nephew, sisters son and wifes brother son, two relationship between us.

Everyone was shocked and laughed. Gopi came and gave him a slight hit and spoke: your getting spoilt, and immature,

After a while they went to sleep. Gopi came to the room, and suddenly fainted. Aehem got worried, and lifted her up and put her to bed. Rouhan sat beside her crying. He called the doctor.

HansaN thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
PLEASE UPDATE SOON AS I REALLY LIKE THIS FF. THANKS.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".