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Posted: 14 years ago

JalShuk 7 phere was finally fixed. It was in 2 months, meaning right now was march, and the wedding was in the end of may/starting of June. Everyone was excited.

After a while, there was a huge wind, all of the windows has opened because of the breeze. There was a absolute storm on the way.

But why has the storm came? Why has it come? Has Someone came to take revenge? Who was it? Who would it be? Will it be Umang or will it be Anita? . . . . . . . . . . . .

Do read on to find out what is the storm? And why has it came?


Chapter 21


There was a huge storm, all the windows were opening and closing, opening and closing. Koki knew there was going to be a toofan, Gopi got scared, and said: omg now what going to happen, what if something bad happens.


Everyone looks at her and is scared. They looked and figured out what is going to happen. After a while they forgot the storm. Later on, Gopi goes into the kitchen and started cooking while everyone sat down in the main hall, and started to write invitations. After all the invitations were done, Jigar went to send them while Aehem went to the room and saw Gopi all worried. He felt pain in him wondering what has not happened.

While all this was going on, on the other hand. The toofan has happened. Anita has come back to get all her rights back. Her revenge of why aehem dumped her. On the other hand Umang was with her trying to stop her as she was doing wrong. But they waited until kinjal gets married after she leaves that house then, they will enter.

Gopi was tired and saw Aehem at the door looking at her. She was frustrated. She didnt know why she felt that way but she had a strange feeling. She told him about it and he spoke: I kind of have the same feeling but why worry about it coz u fix everything. Gopi blushed and saw he was taking her side for the first time and went to iron his clothes while he went to have a shower.


sorry its short, didnt have enough to write for this chapter but surely the next one will be longer.

after anita-umang storm there is another storm, a family storm as chirag friend will come and take revenge of them

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
dear god....so everyone in the family is gonna hav a tough time...kisi ka nazar lag gaya ( hope my hindi is right)...hope the family survives all these calamities n stay united...

a short n sweet update ayesha😊 carry on.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
yup everyone gnna have a difficult time madhu but i try and change it asap and end this calamity soon before i end this ff
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While all this was going on, on the other hand. The toofan has happened. Anita has come back to get all her rights back. Her revenge of why aehem dumped her. On the other hand Umang was with her trying to stop her as she was doing wrong. But they waited until kinjal gets married after she leaves that house then, they will enter.

Gopi was tired and saw Aehem at the door looking at her. She was frustrated. She didnt know why she felt that way but she had a strange feeling. She told him about it and he spoke: I kind of have the same feeling but why worry about it coz u fix everything. Gopi blushed and saw he was taking her side for the first time and went to iron his clothes while he went to have a shower.

Chapter 22

He was having a shower, and he finished. He called Gopi : give me my clothes, hang them on the washroom handle and I will take them.

Gopi heard it and put them on the handle.( now he will surely not be please, black sherwani with gold which he hated wearing). He took them and wore them. He was pissed by the fact that Nani wasnt going to leave him. She hated black, hated it soo much as his mom's dad used to wear it and loved the colour. Nani was definitely not going to leave him, definitely. Now he had to bear the consequences, Nani dantna, ghar mein tamasha, and koki was definitely was going to shout at him. He thought: 'now what shall I do, what. He thought, Gopi must know, she clever even how uneducated she is'

He went outside and shut the door and sat on the bed. He didnt notice Panna was there looking at him and she spoke: jiju jiju, what are you doing here? Uh-ho your wearing black, ab aap ki khair nahi, nani wont leave you, but shall I say something, just come down, dont worry nothing wont happen.

He was surprised, how does this little girl know so much? She just came back from the hostel and staying here tonight. He was scared, scared for the first time. Him scared, Modi enterprise owner, why he thought, if he is brave he must fight against it today as well just like usual, he knew Anita is back to take revenge, but kept it to himself and not told anyone, but he had to, had to tell Gopi.

He went downstairs, and Nani was shouting at Rashi: kashi, what is this, where is my tea, I never asked for Green tea?

Rashi: nani, am rashi, rashi not kashi. But you asked for green tea so I made it, Ask Gopi?

Gopi: haan Nani, u asked for green tea.

Nani: Theek hai, but I don't remember anyway I just drink it.

Aehem came down, all gutted and now he was going to bear all the shouting, but he didnt care, he was used to it.

Everyone looked at him surprised and thought why he wearing black.

He thought to himself: what, why look at me, let me bear shouting, black? Not a horrible colour I like it.

Kinshuk was at office and wasn't allowed to come home as girl and boy shouldn't meet before marriage.

Back at home, Nani looked at him and was frustrated, and was angry. Aehem ignored her and went near the door with his keys in his hands. He was stopped by her and she spoke: stop, I told you before if I come to this house you will not, or everyone will not wear black, why are you wearing it?

Aehem: what is wrong with black, and why should I stop wearing it? Just because mom's dad used to love this colour and now he has passed away, doesnt mean we should stop wearing it, just for your sake.

Nani: kya, what are you saying? I told you before, I don't want to remember those times with your granddad which will make me sad and hurt and now you have hurt meby wearing it.

Aehem: if he used to love it, used to wear it all the time then we should remember those times he used to care and that, why forget those times when he has done so much for us.

Nani:so you have started to talk back to your elders now, how dare you. When an elder has forbidden something youngsters must listen to it and obey.

Aehem: I am not a 5 year old kid that will keep on listening to all of you. I have a life to live, am married, in future when have kids, what will they think? I have to live on the way the society wants us to not on the old generations. Damn the old generation.

Everyone was happy the way he spoke, as he was saying the truth, they were fed up not wearing black. Koki was pleased with him, for the first time he made the right decision.

Chapter 23

Nani was shocked to hear what he was saying

he spoke: well black is not a horrible colour, if u dont like it what can we do

Gopi came and moved him back. She nodded and he knew : she was telling him to stop

He was shocked, for the 1st time in his life, his wife told him to not to continue on.

Nani, was in a dilemma and had tears in her eyes. Jigar asked : why are u crying? Tell us about Aehem granddad,

Nani started to narrate the story to everyone, how she hated black since after his death and Aehem goes up to her and says sorry.

After a while, they started to decorate the house as a month has passed and it was time for the guests to come and put mehndhi on Kinjal as it was mehndhi ceremony.

After 3 hours the guest started to arrive and the whole house was decorated all in white and gold.

Kinjal came down and sat. There a few ladies started to put henna on and music started. There, Rashi started to dance on Bole chooriyan. After a while more dancers came and started.

After a while the henna ceremony finished, everyone left, an the modi house went to sleep.

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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After 3 hours the guest started to arrive and the whole house was decorated all in white and gold.

Kinjal came down and sat. There a few ladies started to put henna on and music started. There, Rashi started to dance on Bole chooriyan. After a while more dancers came and started.

After a while the henna ceremony finished, everyone left, an the modi house went to sleep.

Chapter 24

the next morning, Gopi was feeling dizzy, went down to the mandap and started cleaning. After cleaning she arranged everything for pooja and went to the kitchen. She was feeling weak but didn't know why. She cooked everything. Everyone came down and went towards the mandap and saw everything was all ready. Gopi came along and spoke: shall I start pooja?

She started the pooja and finished it in 10 minutes, and gave offering to everyone. Nani saw Gopi, and she even said: are u fine, you look weak?

Gopi: yes nani, am fine, am just weak, I will be fine after a while.

Later on, they all went to the dinning table and sat down. Gopi, Rashi and Mani served everyone. Aehem got a bit worried about her, as she was not well. When she came to him he stopped her and served himself so she doesn't need to do the hassle.

Later on, Nani spoke: Rashi, dont u cook? I have never have tasted ur food before. Do one thing make it today for dinner.?

Everyone was shocked and Jigar spoke: no no no, nani, nai not rashi, let bhabhi cook.am I right Kinshuk?

Kinshuk: ji nani, please dont make rashi cook. He mumbled: pura khana karab kar dalai gi. Aehem burst out laughing and spoke: why are u mumbling tell everyone what you said?

Rashi: what are you saying, my boring brother, tell me I know u are mumbling saying I cant cook, tell me huh

Kinshuk: nai nia, when did I say this, right aehem?

After a while Rashi started cooking while all the men had a day off from office today, as tomorrow will be the wedding of JalShuk. Gopi helped her. It was 4pm and nearly time for putting dinner for everyone. Gopi fainted. Rashi sprinkled water on her but still she never woke. She told mani to watch the food. Rashi ran outside and spoke: Jiju, Gopi behosh par gaye, I dont know what has happened to her. Everyone got shocked and ran to the kitchen following Aehem. Aehem picked her up and took her his room. He made her lie down and called the doctor. After the Doctor came he told everyone to go outside as he had to do the check up.

After 30 minutes, everyone, downstairs were worried, achanak os ko kya hogya.

The Doctor came down, rashi sat beside her and looked at her happily, infact she was excited. The doctor spoke.: she is fine, nothing to worry about, she is weak, and need rest but. . . .

Chirag: but what Doctor what has happened, anything serious?

Doctor : nahi nahi nothing serious, there is some good news for you. Who is her husband?

Aehem spoke: me

The doctor turned to him and shhok hands: congrats, you going to be a father, Gopi is 4 weeks pregnant. Only 8 months to go, you have to take care of her.

Everyone burst out of joy, and hugged each other. Aehem, Kinshuk and rashi was soo happy. After all there the dearest to Gopi.

Gopi woke up and sat down. She noticed, why was she in bed and where is everyone.

She put her foot on the ground and nearly stood up and Nani spoke: sit down, you need rest. From now on you wont do any work in the house, eat whatever you want, no one going to stop you.

Gopi never understood and chirag spoke: ur becoming a mother, you are 4 weeks pregnant. You are not allowed in the Kitchen.

Gopi was happy and looked at Aehem. She saw him really happy and pleased for the first time in her life.

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh ayesha...u made my day😊....ahem is a dad...woooooooowww....its my long time sapna....
gr8 update😊....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: madhu_sridhar

oh ayesha...u made my day😊....ahem is a dad...woooooooowww....its my long time sapna....

gr8 update😊....



lol
was it your long time sapna ?
thats for liking it
am thinking of ending it, dont u think its going on forever ??
😉 do lemme know if i shud continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
well i was kinda hoping you'll show ahem as this lovely adorable dad..how he manages his kids n all dat...but u are the queen of this ff...so its ur decision ultimately...and i definitely want it to continue😊
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Originally posted by: madhu_sridhar

well i was kinda hoping you'll show ahem as this lovely adorable dad..how he manages his kids n all dat...but u are the queen of this ff...so its ur decision ultimately...and i definitely want it to continue😊



hey again,
yeh i was thinking of showing him as a dad,
oh pleasure me a queen of this ff LOL

anyway
surely continue on
xxx
😆😉

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Gopi woke up and sat down. She noticed, why was she in bed and where is everyone.

She put her foot on the ground and nearly stood up and Nani spoke: sit down, you need rest. From now on you wont do any work in the house, eat whatever you want, no one going to stop you.

Gopi never understood and chirag spoke: ur becoming a mother, you are 4 weeks pregnant. You are not allowed in the Kitchen.

Gopi was happy and looked at Aehem. She saw him really happy and pleased for the first time in her life.

Chapter 25

They were smiling, Aehem left for office due to some problem occurred there. Kinshuk left with him. Everyone was happy. The good news has came to the house after a long time. Everyone was cleaning etc except Nani, who was sitting downstairs in the main hall with Gopi, narrating the stories in her childhood days and telling her about Koki. Jigar was sitting there as well. He was laughing and mucking about as he never knew Koki was mischievous just like him in childhood before she got married.

Koki saw him laughing about with Nani, calledhim and pulled his ears : jigar ur married, when will u leave ur childish behaviour

Jigar: kaki, app bhi na, let me do it, even you was like that in childhood.

Koki was shocked and told nani: ma, can you stop telling everyone about me in childhood.

Everyone was laughing

In office everyone welcomed hi inside, while Kinshuk had gone to get dilicious methai(sweets). He went to his cabin and sat down. He was worried, who must have put the factory on fire. But he thanked god as it didn't burn totally.

He didn't want to ruin his mood today, afterall he is becoming a father. He wanted a son, someone who will be brave like him, someone who will be innocent and clever like Gopi, someone who will be taller than him and go to a greater height in business, more than his. He was happy thinking about this. He heard a knock on the door, and asked to come in. It was the assistant manager, who helps them in business, been there for 20 years, Mr Raj. He told him who has burnt the factory down, he was shocked to hear who it was. Anita how can she do this, how, and why she back to my life. Is it that she taking revenge of me just the sake I never married her. He never knew she will step this low and show her disgusting act she had done. Surely he wont leave her, but hehad to wait and cool down his anger, for gopi sake as he promised her.

Kinshuk came to office and gathered everyone around and gave mithai. They asked why giving this, something special or good news.

Kinshuk spoke: yes my friends there is something good, our boss Mr Aehem Modi the owner of this Modi enterprise is becoming a father.

Everyone was happy.

After Aehem came outside, saw kinshuk standing there with a box of rasgulai in his hands, his mouth started to get watery. Everyone congratulated him. After a while they all left, aehem and kinshuk locked the door of the office and left. He told kinshuk about Anita, and knew he will sort out everything. Kinshuk had never imagined how low she has stood, and made a kasam that he will not leave her if she harms anyone in this family. After all there is not 1 fighter in the modi house but 2 Aehem and Kinshuk.

They went home, sat down and had lunch. They dared not to tell anyone in the house after Kinjal gets married and Gopi was pregnant, and didn't want her to worry in the state she is in.


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Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago

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