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Posted: 14 years ago

Gopi goes and sleeps and nani goes to her room and sits down on her rocky chair and thinks what to do, and that minute Koki comes and says: Ma, now u know what is going on between them, I have tried so much to bring them together but it all failed and my son has stopped listening to me about Gopi now you do something?

Nani: don't you worry I have planned something and fix him tomorrow, how dare he? But listen no one should know what happened between them today.

Koki: theek hai

chapter 17

Nani had tears in her eyes, she didn't expect him to turn out like this, her naughty kid she loved to a stoned heart, surely something is behind this.

The next morning, Gopi woke up and picked up her bedsheets and pillow and put is on top of the wardrobe. She notices Aehem was still asleep and didnt dared to wake him up so she went to have a shower. She came out, got ready, straightened her hair, and opened the blinds. The sun was shinning and it sparkled. It caught on Aehems eyes and gopi went outside. She was extremely upset by the fact that she did the natak in front of everyone by romancing and now she knew it will be out infront of the family. She thought: what if Kinshuk finds out, he will kill him.

And goes up to Nani and says: are u going to sort him today, if u are please send Kinshuk and jigar to office I dont want them to know anything otherwise kinshuk will kill him.

Nani : dont worry daughter, leave it to my hands.

Everyone goes to the dinning table and sits down, Aehem was there ready to leave for office while Gopi, Kinjal and Rashi was cooking. They served everyone and they began to eat. After a while The men stood up and was to leave for office

Nani: Stop, No ' one will go office today especially you Aehem.....

Aehem: but why?

Nani: when I said you will not, then you will not, dont argue with me.

Chirag: theek hai we will stop

Nani: Kinshuk and Jigar, you two go to office and take care of everything, everything and cancel all the meetings Aehem has today. Barabar.

Kinshuk and Jigar left, and Chirag spoke: why have u stopped us, me Aehem and Parag and let Kinshuk and Jigar go?

Nani: I dont want Kinshuk to lose his temper and go mad and jigar aswell so I sent him, dont worry I will reveal everything.

Nani was definitely in a bad mood today. After all the ladies ate, Gopi came out from the kitchen an picked up all the plates, she was in sorrow, and quiet. Aehem notices and felt pain in his heart but he didnt care just like usual. So he ignored her and looked down. Nani was observing this just like Koki.

Everyone went to the hall and stood.

Nani comes along as says in a fit of rage: Aehem

Aehem looks behind and says: Ji

Nani: last night, where u sleeping on the bed and Gopi on the floor?

Aehem was stunned to hear and was sure Gopi must have revealed

Nani: speak, am asking u something?

Aehem: Ha we were

Everyone was shocked to hear, and rashi was so angry that mirch was coming out.

Nani: kya tumharai Aur gopi kai beach kuch bhi huwa is ghar mein, for the past couple of days, was a pretence?

Aehem was boiling with anger: yes

Nani: Whatever happened between you two, you still dont love her?

Aehem: why should I love her, I loved only one girl Anita, but my mother has abandoned me and made me marry this unpar, pyar ek bar hota hai, not twice nani.

After Aehems fit rage of reply Nani lifts up her hands and smacks him really hardly.

Nani: how dare you, kis miti kai banai hoye ho? Insan hai gopi, koi janwar nahi, unpar, insan unpar nahi hota, sanskari hai yeh larki,tum achai tara sai jantai ho. Os anita ki baat kar rahi ho, jo tumse pyaar ka natak kiya, tumharai busines sai kabza karnai ki liye

Everyone is still shocked to hear and Gopi runs out as she hears someone slapped ahem.

Nani: dekho,gopi kaisai bhag kar yaha aye, kyunkai maini tujsai tapar mara, kab tak us bechari ko samaj paiengai, kab tak, os bechari itni depression me ho gaye hai, tumhari dantna ki waja sai, ab tak tumhar dil patar raha, when would it melt.?

Aehem was in tears and doesnt know what to do.

Nani: kya huwa, speak, himat nahi hai.

Aehem: my heart is already melted, I understand everything, what can I do, losing your first love is difficult to forget and gopi, whenever I see her, there's pins and needles in my heart wanting to burst out and I cant stand her. I will change, when time comes. I just cant stand her. I brought her here because you wanted her to come back you, not me. Ab you all know the truth, she will go back, she will.

Gopi goes upstairs and starts to pack her clothes.

On the other hand, Aehem, tells everyone what is in his heart, what going on with him?

Nani spoke: bewaqoof, now u are telling us whats in your heart, if this is not love for Gopi then what is it?

Aehem actually admits the fact that he was in love, for the second time, while upstairs Kinjal and mani sees Gopi packing her clothes. They both runs down and says: Gopi....

Koki: gopi what?

Kinjal:voh, bhabhi leaving the house, she doesnt want to hurt herself anymore and she says I have a lot of tension and depression, she doesnt have the guts to live here anymore, she will go back as she was before, simple and innocent.

Aehem was shocked to hear this and Nani suddenly starts to feel pain in her heart and has a heart attack while Kinshuk and Jigar was behind hearing all thi, ran to Nani and took her to the hospital. There the doctors spoke, nani was critical, and might not be saved. While on the other hand Gopi and Aehem was there too, standing infront of each other.


Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hurrah!!!!.......naani ki jai....if only they show this scene in the serial..i'd be the happiest person on earth......way to go ayesha....😊....dat was a brilliant and fast update😊
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Originally posted by: madhu_sridhar

hurrah!!!!.......naani ki jai....if only they show this scene in the serial..i'd be the happiest person on earth......way to go ayesha....😊....dat was a brilliant and fast update😊



i hope the cv sees this scene and read it and put it in the show
but they wont

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the updates, looking forward to next,
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Aehem actually admits the fact that he was in love, for the second time, while upstairs Kinjal and mani sees Gopi packing her clothes. They both runs down and says: Gopi....

Koki: gopi what?

Kinjal:voh, bhabhi leaving the house, she doesnt want to hurt herself anymore and she says I have a lot of tension and depression, she doesnt have the guts to live here anymore, she will go back as she was before, simple and innocent.

Aehem was shocked to hear this and Nani suddenly starts to feel pain in her heart and has a heart attack while Kinshuk and Jigar was behind hearing all thi, ran to Nani and took her to the hospital. There the doctors spoke, nani was critical, and might not be saved. While on the other hand Gopi and Aehem was there too, standing infront of each other.

Chapter 18

nani was in the ICU while everyone was worried what will happen. Koki spoke: Aehem, agar meri ma ko kuch bhi huwa to mai tujko maaf nahi karoongi

Aehem: par ma

the doctor comes out of the ICU and says she is perfectly fine. She is stressed out and hope that she doesnt get any more tension as its not safe for her age.

They all went in except from gopi and aehem. Gopi turned and leaves the hospital and stopped by Aehem.

Aehem: tum kahan ja rahi ho, voh bhi muj ko chor kar, phir se.

Gopi stood shocked and turned around and spoke: ji..

Aehem: ha where are u going leaving me. U know I wont be able to stand the whole house without u, especially the food made by rashi doesnt even taste that good.

Gopi: what is left, after all the pain I have got. Neither I have got anyone love and wont be able to get one. I relied on u but got unhappiness. Maybe I dont deserve anything. U can go back to Anita.

Anita who is better than me, well educated, fits ur standard and more but me I have done my studies and dont even have a degree and knowledge.

Aehem: but I dont love Anita, and why go back to her when she is after my money. Cant you give me a chance. I promise that I wont hurt you ever again, damn what everyone says about u uneducated, I will get u educated.

Gopi was relieved and goes and hugs him and takes all her pain out. They forgave each other and went inside the ICU to see Nani. Everyone sees them holding hands and nani asks: why are you two together, when u dont want to be.

Aehem: we decided to do the 7 phere again and start our lives afresh. Kinjal goes and hugs her brother while kinshuk hugs Gopi.

Kinshuk: I told you huh that he will realise your worth.

Gopi was happy and Nani was pleased to see her.

After a few days they have settled down. Gopi has started to get educated again from where she has left while Nani was back from home. She was still in pain and said : I only want Gopi to stay with me and take care you all do the house work, and plan for jalshuk mehndhi and 7 phere.

Nani was tired. She went to her bedroom. Aehem was upstairs calling out mani for his green tea. Mani was downstairs, and koki stops her. She calls gopi: come here

Koki: take this tea upstairs to Aehem, he has changed, now u do the work for him

Gopi goes upstairs with the green tea and aehem spots her and says: why did u have to do it, mani is there?

Gopi: maaji took it of her and told me to take it.

They stood there looking in eye to eye

Aehem understood what she said and took the tea of her and said: u go to Nani, she calling you.




Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏 lovely...
so finally Gohem are together... superb...
waiting for the nextt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ayesha! very nice update! Lets see what they do next. Post fast!
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Posted: 14 years ago
ill update the next ch later on
just came back from college just now
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally..ahem's heart melts...gohem 2gether....waitin eagerly 4 their lovey dovey scenes😛......a gr8 update as usual ayesha......😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: madhu_sridhar

finally..ahem's heart melts...gohem 2gether....waitin eagerly 4 their lovey dovey scenes😛......a gr8 update as usual ayesha......😊



no worries,
feel that this storyline is going forever, i should plan to finish this in the next two chapters but do u all want me to finish it or keep on going and going on and on


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