Poems # 17 'Phir Saamne Mere Aa Jao' p.21 - Page 10

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Posted: 19 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: ria12345

Oh that was so sweet and sad.Im looking forward to reading more poems written by you. 👏 👏 👏

thanks Ria will let you know when I write another one

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Posted: 19 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: *Anju*

that was such a sad one but soooooo sweet i just lovvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeee all your poems but that one is really very very touchin as i really love sad poems

Thanks for the comment. and also keeping the nick yeh hamara dil hai janab koi shisha ya pathar nahi................

what else I can ask but that someone loves the poem so much that keeps lines as nick

Love you dear

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Posted: 19 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: ruby89

omg di... that was a sad poem.. truly a tale of broken heart. but it was really good 👏 so touchy 😔.. di next one a happy poem rt? 😃
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Ruby

Ruby next one will be happy poem for you for sure. Thanks dear.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: desi chic

Hi Rakshaji,

to be honest... I have no words.

😭 😭

👏 👏 👏

I feel for such woman as well. Perhaps one day, women will truly be able to stand next to a man without being shot off saying, "you're merely a woman".

dc

thanks Nitu

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Poem #10

Prem Kahani By Raksha Shah

Ek sham hai aisi ayi
Jab unse najar milayi
Mai to ho gayi parayi
Yeh soch ke mai sharmai
Phir raat ko neend na ayi

kyon dil mera jor se dhadka
Kyon hota hai ek dard sa
Kyon chain gaya mere manka
Kyon ankhose sawan barsa
Kyon dil ka chaman yun maheka

Koi neend meri lautado
Koi chain mera ab lado
Koi dard se yeh chhudwado
Koi iski dava karvado
Kya pyar yeh hai samaja do

Ankhe apke daras ko tarse
Dil baar bar yun chahe
Hum aapke paas aa jaye
Ab sharm hume hai roke
Kaash aap hi aa jaye

Phir ghadi ye aisi ayi
Phir aapne aankh milayi
Phir aapne neend churayi
Phir aapne chain churaya
Jab aapne pyar jataya

Hume apni dulhan banaya
Jab aapne ghunghat uthaya
Phir Dil joro se dhadka
Jab aappne bahonme samaya
Jab aapne hothose lagaya

Tab sharm hume hai ayi
Tab Dil ka chaman hai maheka
Tab chain hume hai aya
Tab neend hume hai ayi
Ek raat hai aisi ayi


I have written this poem because Ruby Wanted me to write happy poem for a change. So Ruby here is the happy poem. I hope reading this poem makes you happy.
Your Di

Edited by ramas - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#96
aww Di that was such an amazing poem. It was sooo cute I LOVED IT.. like alwys but more because you wrote it because i asked you to 😳 Thanks.. 👏 👏
"Ek sham hai aisi ayi
Jab unse najar milayi
Mai to ho gayi paryi
Yeh soch ke mai sharmai
Phir raat ko neend na ayi "
awwww thats so cutee! Thanks again di 😊
-Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago
#97
wow di thats just wow my lil bro sayed you have posted a very romantic poem and wow just 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#98
awww that was such a sweet poem!!... that was really good!! great job.. that was so cute!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Oh that was such a lovely poem 👏 keep posting lovely poems like these 👏 Thats so sweet!I look forward to reading more poems made by you 👏

Sonya
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwww di it's soooooooooooo sweet!!! 👏 👏 👏

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