Poems # 17 'Phir Saamne Mere Aa Jao' p.21 - Page 9

Originally posted by: *Anju*

ohhhhhhh how touching that was 😳

thanks anju

Originally posted by: ria12345

alllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll your poems are so sweet,a load of claps for you 👏

Thanks for all the claps ria12345. And wonderful comment.

Poem #9

Tale of a Broken Heart By: Raksha Shah

Yeh hamara dil hai Janab
Jo har pal aapke liye dhadakata hai
Koi shisha ya pathar nahi
Ise yun nahi todte

Yeh hamari Ankhe hai janab
Jisne aapki duniya haseen or rangeen banayi hai
Koi kapada ya hari gans nahi
Ise yun nahi bhigote

Yeh hamare haath hai janab
Jisne aapki zindgi sawari hai
Koi nadi ya talab ka pani nahi
Ise yun nahi modte

Yeh hamare gaal hai janab
Jise aap hamesha chuma karte the
Koi tennis ya cricket ball nahi
Ise yun nahi pitate

Yeh hamare baal hai janab
Jise aap pyar se sawara karte the
Koi patang ki dor nahi
Ise yun nahi khinchate

Yeh hamara badan hai janab
Jisne aapko hamesha pyar diya hai
Koi chinti ya machachr nahi
Ise yun nahi kachodte

This is a very sad and satire kind of poem dedicated to all the battered and physically abused women in the world. My heart really weeps for them.

omg..wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwww...such a beutifull poem....i loved it rakhsha di...relly nice

Oh that was so sweet and sad.Im looking forward to reading more poems written by you. 👏 👏 👏

that was such a sad one but soooooo sweet i just lovvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeee all your poems but that one is really very very touchin as i really love sad poems

omg di... that was a sad poem.. truly a tale of broken heart. but it was really good 👏 so touchy 😔.. di next one a happy poem rt? 😃
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Ruby

Hi Rakshaji,

to be honest... I have no words.

😭 😭

👏 👏 👏

I feel for such woman as well. Perhaps one day, women will truly be able to stand next to a man without being shot off saying, "you're merely a woman".

dc

Originally posted by: Lima

omg..wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwww...such a beutifull poem....i loved it rakhsha di...relly nice

thanks LIma for a wonderful comment.

Di it's BEAUTIFUL!! I love it!! please please please post this as a blog on DMS!! PLEASE!!