Poems # 17 'Phir Saamne Mere Aa Jao' p.21 - Page 11

Originally posted by: ruby89

aww Di that was such an amazing poem. It was sooo cute I LOVED IT.. like alwys but more because you wrote it because i asked you to 😳 Thanks.. 👏 👏
"Ek sham hai aisi ayi
Jab unse najar milayi
Mai to ho gayi paryi
Yeh soch ke mai sharmai
Phir raat ko neend na ayi "
awwww thats so cutee! Thanks again di 😊
-Ruby

thanks Ruby for amazing comment.

Originally posted by: *Anju*

wow di thats just wow my lil bro sayed you have posted a very romantic poem and wow just 👏

thanks anju

Originally posted by: DeepaliC

awww that was such a sweet poem!!... that was really good!! great job.. that was so cute!

Thanks deepa for the wonderful comment and yes will try to post more romantic poems.

whaoooooo......

that was so lovely......making me smile the hole time I read it.........just wonderfull.......

big hug
shali

DI I have a request can you plzz write something about deep eys and blossoming smile??? I MEAN A LOVE POEM 😉

Originally posted by: ria12345

Oh that was such a lovely poem 👏 keep posting lovely poems like these 👏 Thats so sweet!I look forward to reading more poems made by you 👏

Sonya

Thanks Sonya

Originally posted by: PiyaBawri

awwwwwwwww di it's soooooooooooo sweet!!! 👏 👏 👏

thanks piya for the wonderful comment.

wow that was very beautiful rakshaji 👏

Hi Raksha. 🤗
i just found this in the SP MANSION and omg!!! your poems are so touching and lovely. why did you stop? i read through all these 16 pages just for your poems. really wonderful poems. can you please post some more? 😊 ....im just so speechless. You have inspired me to write some poems. After reading yours i think i might just write some of my own. please continue these amazing poems. really nice. 👏

Originally posted by: punjabi_kuri36

Hi Raksha. 🤗
i just found this in the SP MANSION and omg!!! your poems are so touching and lovely. why did you stop? i read through all these 16 pages just for your poems. really wonderful poems. can you please post some more? 😊 ....im just so speechless. You have inspired me to write some poems. After reading yours i think i might just write some of my own. please continue these amazing poems. really nice. 👏

thank you ashima I will definately come up with something.