Poems # 17 'Phir Saamne Mere Aa Jao' p.21 - Page 15

ok this is somethign i cam up with hope you all will like it

AARZU by "Beena"

jivan main humaare kitni hi aarzu

moti banke chhip main samaane ki aarzu,
phool banu aise aasaar kahaa,
phirbhi har ek jivan ko hain mahekaane ki aarzu.

jeevan jyoti banane ki hain aarzu,
prakaash kisi ko de shaku aise gun kahaa,
phir bhi hain baati banke jalne ki aarzu.

indradhanush banke har jeevan main rang bharne ki aarzu,
aadarsh banu aise karma kahaa,
phir bhi ees jeevan mainhai ek manav banane ki aarzu.

kapur(camphore)banke akhand rahene ki hain aarzu,
aapki daashi banu aise nasib kahaa,
phir bhi ees jeevan main hai sirf aapki aarzu.


i hope you all will like it
this is my you can say first attempt towards propar poetry 😳

Originally posted by: jaanlover

Great poems Di...
I really love them 😊

Great work 👏 👏
Keep it up with your great post 😊

You have really talent

Wish you all the best and luck in life
Hamesha khush rehna aur apna khayal rakhna

Reena

Thanks Reena for the complement. will post some more as I get time.

di, you should be a poet, these are great

Poem # 17 Phir Saamne Mere Aa Jao

ahesaas jaga hai dil me
jabse tum samne aaye ho
kuch yaade purani aayee hai
kuch soye armaaan jaage hai
sapno me mere phir tum aane lage
aa aake mujhe tadpane lage

phir saamne mere aa jao
phir aake mujhe sata jao
meri bikhari late suljha jao
mai ruthi hun mujhe mana jao
bhataki hun raah dikha jao

phir saamne mere aa jao
ankho ki pyaas buza jao
dil ki dhadkano me sur jaga jao
chhuke mere tanman me aag laga jao
phir saamne mere aa jao

wow another master piece by you very well done 👏 👏

Originally posted by: bsingapury

ok this is somethign i cam up with hope you all will like it

AARZU by "Beena"

jivan main humaare kitni hi aarzu

moti banke chhip main samaane ki aarzu,
phool banu aise aasaar kahaa,
phirbhi har ek jivan ko hain mahekaane ki aarzu.

jeevan jyoti banane ki hain aarzu,
prakaash kisi ko de shaku aise gun kahaa,
phir bhi hain baati banke jalne ki aarzu.

indradhanush banke har jeevan main rang bharne ki aarzu,
aadarsh banu aise karma kahaa,
phir bhi ees jeevan mainhai ek manav banane ki aarzu.

kapur(camphore)banke akhand rahene ki hain aarzu,
aapki daashi banu aise nasib kahaa,
phir bhi ees jeevan main hai sirf aapki aarzu.


i hope you all will like it
this is my you can say first attempt towards propar poetry 😳

great work👏 keep writing do not worry. it gets better

Raksha your poem is so nice.
You are just creative mind... 😃
Why you are thinking that it's not great.
It's brilliant.. 👏
Even i also think to write some lines..
Keep it up
----Karan----