Poems # 17 'Phir Saamne Mere Aa Jao' p.21

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I would like to start this new section. any one can write. It will be fun. I will start with the one I just wrote

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Tinke ki Kahani Tinke ki Jubani By Raksha Shah

Main Hoon chhota sa ek tinka (grass clipping)

Jameen pe mujhe giraya hai

Hawaone mujhe udaya hai

kisiki ankho ne mujhe samaya hai

Isi ankho ko maine rulaya hai

Phunk phunk ke mujhe nikala hai

Main hoon chhota sa ek tinka

Jameen pe mujhe phir giraya hai

Pairo ne mujhe kuchala hai

Pani ne mujhe phir ugaya hai

Mali (gardner) ne mujhe phir kata hai

Main hoon chhota sa ek tinka

Hawaone phir mujhe udaya hai

This is my first try at writing poetry. I hope it is not silly Though It has a deep meaning. It is about a woman's life from infant to death.

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DeepaliC thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was soo good ramas!! 😊 .. it think writing poetry is a great idea! 👏 👍🏼
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My God, Ramas, you rock!! Very well done!! 👏 👏
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Thanks for the encouragment Deepa and capricorn girl
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lol np.. it was such a cute little poem.. like a day in a life of a tinka..
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thanks Deepa that was a nice title.
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👏 👏 👏 oh my god wonderful poetry i kept think abt saloni and the tinka that fell in her eyes while reading this. 😃

That is a wonderful title Deepa, Life of a tinka.

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any volunteers for next poem. Please participate. just give a try. You might surprise yourself.
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I will be posting 2nd poem shortly.
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cant wait post soon and i will try to find the deeper meaning in it this time

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