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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
That was awesome!! Can't wait until someone continues!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
That was really good Ramas 😛 i loved the part where Saloni dances 😆 😆.

Who is next??? 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
ok guys i m going to continue next since desi chic is unable to 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳Ok guys this is a pre warning don't read this if u are 12 years or younger this is way too much info for ur innocent minds

Recap: Saloni drops her odhni and dances like aishwarya and Nahar is totally behaving like a drunk and staring at her. She stops dancing and shuts cd player. Nahar still behaving like drunk sitting still. with his mouth open. eyes wide. Saloni puts back her odhni and goes close to him

Nahar : Saloni Kya mei Indralok mai hoo. Mere Samne Urvashi Apsara nach rahi hai. Ye sapna hai ya sach. Agar Sapna hai to kabhi jagna nahi chahta. Pinch me. saloni pinches him very hard.
Nahar screams. He grabs her and carries her in his arms.

Episode 12?? Right??

Saloni is still in Nahar's arms they both are lost in each others eyes they don't know what is going on around them. Nahar carries Saloni to the bed, lays her down gently. He sits beside her holds her hand he brings his face close to hers.

Nahar: Mein ap se kuch pooch sakta hoon?

Saloni: (her heart is beating hard)haan… pochiye

Nahar: Wo tum e is tarha nach te hu we dekh kar mere hosh hi ur gaye, lekin tum e ye sab karne ki kaya zaroorat hai?

Saloni: Mein to srif ye sabit karna chati thi ke mein nilima se acha nach sakti hoon.

Nahar: mein jaanta hoon ke tum ne ye kun kiya, isi liye na kyun ke tum mujhe se pyar karti ho, aur mujhe kisi aur ke sath dekh na tum e acha nahi lagta.

Saloni: nahi wo… (Nahar puts his hand over her lips)

Nahar: Koi bahana nahi aj tumhe mujh se kehna hi ho ga ke tum bhi mujhse itna hi pyar karti ho ke jitna me tumse karta hoon… (waits for a while) thik hai Salooni agar tum aj bhi chup rehna chati ho to thik hai (he get's up to go away from her) lekin mein tumhara intezar karo ga jab tak tum khud mujhse nahi kehti ke tum mujhe se kitna pyar karti ho. (He turns around to go)

Saloni: (sits up and grabs his hand) Ap apna jawab nahi suna chate?

Nahar: (looks at Saloni in surprise and sits back down on the bed.)

Saloni: comes closer to him and kisses him on the lips…(imagine that) their kiss lasts for almost a minute.

Then Nahar lays Saloni on the bed and is now on top of her, Saloni has her arms around him. Nahar has his hands on her waist. He kisses her face, then he starts kissing her neck getting more more desprate (He is soo piasa Saloni shouldn't have kept him waiting that long). He then moves his hand away from Saloni's waists and moves it up her back (Saloni's choli is backless). Saloni is enjoying herself immensely and is wishing to kiss him once more. Nahar wishing the same thing moves his face closer to hers but then decides to tease her like she did to him all these days. Saloni and Nahar are still lost in each other's eyes. Nahar places his free hand on Saloni's face and brings it down slowly stopping at her lips; Saloni kisses his hand getting more and more desperate. Nahar brings his face closer looking at her with passion in his eyes. (Background music sanson ko sanson me dhal ne do zaara) Both their hot breath meet. Saloni is getting desperate. Nahar brings his face closer they are abt to kiss when…

Nahar: Man this is boring lets do something else. Goes to get up

Saloni: (who was expecting a kiss opens her eyes in surprise) kya?

Nahar unable to resist then seizes Saloni and kisses her hard!!

Saloni is totally shocked, and then gets mad at him for making her wait so long she decides to take revenge. As soon as Nahar is done smooching her she yawns and just closes her eyes 😕 (i guess she is sleepy 😆 )then says with a sleepy voice ur right this is boring lets go to sleep 😆 😆 😆…

Nahar's face is in total shock: Am I that bad of a kisser??

Nahar: Saloni utho naa

Saloni pretends to be asleep

Saloni: Nahar ur the best kisser in the world I wish I could wake up lekin

tumhe sabaq sikhana zaroo ri hai.

Nahar gets all grumpy and goes on the other side of the bed and goes to sleep

Saloni after making sure he is asleep gets up and looks at him sleeping satisfying herself by looking at him. Then she touches his head and removes the hair on his face to get a better look.

Nahar wakes up in the morning very grumpy with Saloni for going to sleep.

Salooni ab Nahar ko kaise manae gi that is what the next writer is going to tell u...

sorry if i got too carried away with myself it was kinda hard not to😳

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Sorry guys i made a mistake while posting refresh the page again and u will get the edited version. 😛 plzz comment on weather u guys like it or not😳
Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
Hi muni very good continuation. great update . good job.keep it up.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
wooh this is turning in a romanche novel 👏
but don't stop. it's so cute... 😳
thanks
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
here's the next Episode..hope you like it enjoy!
Episode 13
Recap:
Nahar wakes up in the morning very grumpy with Saloni for going to sleep.


Nahar gets up and takes a shower. When he comes out of the bathroom saloni is already awake.

Saloni: aap na mujha uttah kyun nah?
Nahar: (still grumpy) uhh.. kyun ka tum bahut dher lagati ho toh maina socha kay main pyala nahalu…
Saloni: oh I see…
Saloni knew why nahar was still grumpy..but she also wanted to get him back so she didn't say much either.
When saloni came out of the shower nahar was not there. He came back after afew minutes with their breakfas.t
Saloni: aaj hum kaha jaiga?
Nahar: maina kuch plan nai kiya tha..
Saloni: o.. uhh hum aaj shopping jaa sucta hai?
Nahar: ok sure.. (still kinda upset)
When they got to the mall, saloni looked around for stuff and Nahar just walked around.
Something caught saloni' s eye and she thougth this would be the perfect thing to surprise nahar with.
So she bought it. They did alittle more shopping for everyone back home. Nahar didn't even bother to ask saloni what she had bought earlier.
Back to the hotel room.
When they got back, saloni looked throught the stuff once again. Nahar just sat on the couch watching her.
Nahar: ( in his mind).. I shouldn't be mad at saloni anymore she really didn't do anything. Plus were over here on our honey moon and we should make the most out of it.
Just as he was going to get up the phone rang
Receptionist: hello, you have a call from India would you like to accept it?
Nahar said yea and it was Bhabo
Bhabo: hello Nahar kaisa hai tu batta?
Nahar: main teek ho Bhabo aap kaisi hai?
Bhabo: main teek wo. Sub teek hai. Saloni batti kaisi hai? Ussa mere baath karo
Nahar gave the phone to saloni. When he gave the phone to her there hands brushed together.
Saloni started walking to the other side with the phone when nahar grabbed her hand.
Saloni; cama gani
Bhabo: gani cama.. kaisi hai saloni baati?
Saloni: main teek ho
Bhabo: sub tumai bahot yaad krtha hai.. toh tumah Switzerland kaia laga?
Saloni: mujha bhi sub ki yaad atti hai.. switzerland bahut acha hai
Saloni trying to pull her hand away from nahar. She was trying to tell him to let go.
Bhabo: kya whoa saloni kuch bolthi kyun nai?
Saloni: voh.. mai.. tara bhabi kaisi hai?
Tara: saloni, kaisi hai tu?.. honeymoon kaisa chale raha hai?
Saloni: bahut accha hai..
Tara: humari yaad nahi aai saloni?.. or are u busy with something else
Tara laughing
Meanwhile nahar grabbed saloni's wrist even harder that he r chudia that she was wearing broke (they were glass churdia)
Saloni: ouch!
Tara: kya woha saloni?
Saloni: kuch nai ..voh maina.. I accidentally poked my eye
Tara: mhmm…
Tara: ok saloni main rik thi hoon.. nahar aur app ka kaiah rak na
Saloni: ji..
When saloni got of the phone and looked at her wrist there was a little cut..
Nahar took saloni's hand and…
Sorry guys I had to stop there and let the next writer continue… so what could have saloni bought when she went shopping.. the next writer will tell you.,


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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
Wow deepa that was soo sweet and cute i wonder how Nahar is going to react to him hurting Saloni. Plzz continue soon... 😃

Ramas ur turn next 😃 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
great job, can't wait to read the next part 😊

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