FanFic SAATHPHERE - Page 9

WOW! U GUYS ARE DOING GREAT 😉 😆 LOVE THis! It would b sooo Great if they actually made this into lik the movie... series... WOw... imagne... newayz i just wanted to say THIS IS GOING REALLY WELL....!!!! 👏

Thanks loranlee4u. This kinda complement make us do even better writing. Please let it keep coming.

u guys doing such a great job its so much fun reading it keep it up Great job 😃 👏

OMG!!! continue soon I really want to know who the other girl is........

Hey this is simply gr8 and so romantic 😛 ...and dontkeep us waiting..post the next part soon...

thanks guys for all the comment it keeps the writers going. I think that i have finally cracked the mystery to who the girl is,pretty sure i know who it is, but wont tell u yet dont want to ruin it for u guys. 😃 Keep guessing.

That's too much, don't keep us in the dark. 😃
tell, tell us please!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

oke, let my gues....

It's the nextdoor neigboure or 😕 ......

But please " were the next epi.."

Actually I am having fun. This has turn out to be a guessing game. keep guessing. But I promise you will have answer by this evening. Deepa is writing next one. I am also awaiting for the next episode. Sorry I know the answer but cannot disclose . The next writer reveals it.

By the way we love this big response and like to thank all the readers. Please do give us a line or two weather you like it or not . Your comments help us. I promise you this story is going to be a big roller coaster ride from now on.

Sorry for taking such a long time guys.. thanks for all the comments.. you'll find out the girl is in this epi..

Episode 15
Recap: The girl says in deep voice Hello Nahar darling Aren't you going to ask me in?

Nahar has 100 questions in his mind. who is this beautiful girl? What is she doing by my room? How does she know I am Nahar? If Saloni comes now what will she think? I don't even know her . or Do I know her? From her features she look like Indian. where is saloni? Why is she taking so long to come back? What should I do now?



Girl: Aren't you going to let me in nahar?
Nahar snapping out of it..umm uhh..uhh,..(couldn't say anything since he was lost in her beauty)
The girl just opened the door and let herslef in..
Nahar: (in his mind).. oh god where is Saloni???.. who is this girl I don't know her then how does she know me???..
The girl started coming closer to Nahar. But he started backing away slowy..right until he hit a wall..
Nahar: umm excuse me.. trying to turn around in a different direction ..
The girl came right in front of him until, they were just inches apart
Nahar; sweating… (what if saloni sees all this..)
The girl: whats wrong.. why are u sweating??? (in her deep voice)
Nahar: almost about to die).. oh god she's soo beautiful.. no but where could saloni be??..
Nahar pushed the girl away from him..
Nahar: Who are u?.. how do u know me?
The girl: Nahar you were the one who choose me.. and you say u don't know me? ( the girl is surprised)
Nahar: (confused) chose you?..
The girl came up to nahar.. and gave him a kiss on the cheek..
Nahar; backing away.. I'm really sorry I do not no who you are.. if I meet you along time ago I don't remember .. but now I'm married
The girl trying to make a move at nahar once again… but Nahar I never thought you would forget who I was.. ( looking a bit sad)
Nahar: ( oh god where could saloni be).. you know what you have to leave.. I have to go look for my wife..
The girl (surprised).. you can't get rid of me that fast.. humara tho jaanam jaanam ka rishta hai…( do u guys know who it is now????)
Nahar oh god, this girl thinks I'm married to her!.. she must be obsessed with me..bachari.. well it's not her fault I am so hot..
Nahar: you speak hindi?.. I'm sorry you have to leave.. my wifes been gone for a while she must be coming back..
The girl: she's gone.. she's not back yet right…then why don't we.. coming closer to nahar..
Nahar; OMG.. yeh kaisi musebth mai phas gaya ho?!?!?.. no she's not back yet.. and I have to go look for her sorry u have to leave NOW!
The girl: maybe she is back..
Nahar: (confused).. what?
The girl: coming closer to him.. maybe she is back and his right in front of you!!
Nahar: saloni?..tum?.. yeh sub kiya hai?
Saloni; smiling.. do u like?
Nahar: is this really you saloni.. (still shocked)
Saloni: hai babba yeh main heho
Nahar; thank god it's you saloni!.. you look sooo beautiful but..
Saloni: but how did I change so much?
Nahar: yea..
Saloni: well when we went shopping that day, I saw this ad and it was for a free make over..so I signed up and got it…I wanted to surprise you.. and get you back for yesterday… kyon ho gaya nah!.. ( haah sorry I had to say that line)
Nahar: oh I see..... . before you go away another time just let me know.. I was soo worried about you!
Saloni, blushing
Nahar took saloni into his arms..Nahar,I love you saloni!
saloni, I love you too!

Sorry for taking such a long time to post guys.. hope you liked it.. sorry if it wasn't that good…

Deepa that was amazing. Loved it. I like the way you revealed the suspense .