FanFic SAATHPHERE - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
Great Job!!! U all have such a great story going!!! Can't wait for the next part!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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shall i post next if no one else wants to??
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Episode 9

Nahar: (coming closer and closer) waise ap breakfast pe kya kahe rahi thi. (Saloni is now all the way to the wall and Nahar is barely 2 inches away from her)

Saloni: wo mein wo…(getting more strength) Mein ne to srif wo hi kaha jo sach hai(with a little bit of attitude). Aur haan next time apne mujhe moti kaha to Switzerland to door ki baat hai ( that is where they are going on their honeymoon) ap ko room me bhi raat guzarni mushkil ho gi.

Nahar: Now getting playful… acha

Saloni: Ji haan (pushes him away and starts running just when she feels a tug on her sari)


Saloni: (to herself) ab to phass gai. She turns around and Nahar is not holding her sari but it is stuck in his chain.

(Both Nahar and Saloni are looking at each other passion burning in both their eyes)

Just then there is a knock on the door.

Nahar: (to himself) is ghar me in thori bhi privacy nahi mil sakti.

Saloni: (is now panicking) She is struggling to get the sarree out but it is totally stuck. Nahar meri madat karo koi darwaze pe hai hame aise dekhen ge to pata nahi kya soche ga.

Nahar: Mein kya karo (the knocking is growing harder). (get's an idea) Mere sath aoo

Saloni: Kya aise pointing to her pallu.

Nahar: Aoo to sahi (he drags her to the door) (pallu and necklace still stuck.) Ab kholo

Saloni: opens the door slightly so only part of her body is visible. (Nahar with the pallu stuck to his necklace is hidding behind the partially open door.)

Tara: Saloni kya darwaza kholne mein itni der lagti hai. Nahar kahan hai .

Saloni: Wo nahane gaye hai.

Tara: tum dono se hume honeymoon ke bare mein koi baat karni hai jaldi niche aoo.

Saloni: Ji bhabhisa ( closes the door and takes a deep breath)

Nahar: (has finally managed to release the sari)Niche chle sab hamara intezar kar rahe ho ge. Hamare honeymoon ke plans bhi banane hai.

Saloni: Blushes

Nahar: (to himself) (still mad at Tara for ruining the romantic momment)hopefully there will be no distractions there.

Sorry pr3tz I had to ruin the romance but I thought it would be better if we wait till they both actually declare their love officially to each other before u know…. 😳 😳 Hope u didnt mind.

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
Muni that was short and sweet. really enjoyed it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
aw that was cute muni.. i'll cont with my part soon..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
that was great, can't wait to read your deepaliC 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys, sorry I've been missing for the suhaag raat fanfic but I will post very very soon! there should be the next post by tomorrow. and about this fanfin...well, its SUPER!! you guys are super amazing. one question, can anyone write? I mean kya mein bhi post kar sakti hoon? if yes, I would love to! anyways, keep it up all, don'in an excellent job!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48

desi chic you are most welcome to write . the more writers we have the better. but please let munizaa know before you post bcos we are doing continuation of the episodes. You have to read previous episode and write what happens afterward.

Ha Desi chic tum bhi zarror post kar sakti ho. Hame to yaha likhne me khub maza aa raha hai.

I think everyone else is enjoying too.

Thanks for the nice comments.

Edited by ramas - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
ya desi chic ofcourse u can write the more writers the more fun 😛
it€™s amazing how well the story is flowing even with soo many writers oh my god u guys are just unbelievable. 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
you guys are very very great....

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