The Ballad of Prince Baz & The Lady of the Sky

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Note to moderators: For Prince Baz, I implore you to leave this topic as is. This is his love story. To meet the forum rules, I promise to include a few songs and music.

Friends, when the TRP contest concluded we had a spate of marriages on the forum. However, our very own Prince Baz was waiting for his dream girl to come by and have his own special love story. I promised him that he would have his own story. Unfortunately, I have not come true to my promise, yet.

It's been too long and our prince should not wait any longer. However, it has been years since I have written short fiction. I'm also pressed for time, so I cannot write at length as once before. Worst, I feel that I'm lacking inspiration as my own lovely beloved muse seems to have no time for all of us these days. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for my muse to return.

But why should our gallant Prince Baz suffer. A dashing handsome young knight like him surely deserves to sweep his lady love of her feet. So I'm jumping the gun and starting the base of his story. Our story takes us to medieval Scotland, the age of brave lords and chivalry. Our hero Prince Baz is lord of the land, heir to an estate and the beloved darling of all the people. After all there is not a single mortal who would not have their heart warmed and charmed by the noble Prince Baz. He is divinely gifted with cheerful demeanor that lights up everyone. However, deep within our heart our prince is sad and lonely. So much pure love fills his heart, with no one to share it with. But Prince Baz and lonely, how can that be. Fear not my friends, for unbeknownst to him a magical destiny awaits him. For very soon a very special lady love is to walk into his life, and Prince Baz will experience the joy of a lifetime. A heartwarming love story that will charm everyone, the love story of a lifetime.

I'll be posting the beginning this weekend and slowly proceed the story as the days go by, making an attempt to be as diligent as possible. Perhaps the chance of a new twist in his tale and seeing what happens next might keep Prince Baz from going completely MIA during school. Of course folks please remember to cheer our Prince Baz all the time and keep wishing him the best of luck. This story is not completely pre-written, so throw in your input and feedback, and play your part in helping Prince Baz sweep his lady love off her feet (maybe even some hurdles for the brave knight to overcome).

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wah wah!!!! AWESOME!
The way you write is soo well, RTH! Hats off to you!!! No one here can even come close to the way you write!!!
Great opening of the story and intro of the Prince Charming Baz!
Amazing so far!

Can't wait for the rest of the parts!


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: return_to_hades

Note to moderators: For Prince Baz, I implore you to leave this topic as is. This is his love story. To meet the forum rules, I promise to include a few songs and music.

Friends, when the TRP contest concluded we had a spate of marriages on the forum. However, our very own Prince Baz was waiting for his dream girl to come by and have his own special love story. I promised him that he would have his own story. Unfortunately, I have not come true to my promise, yet.

It's been too long and our prince should not wait any longer. However, it has been years since I have written short fiction. I'm also pressed for time, so I cannot write at length as once before. Worst, I feel that I'm lacking inspiration as my own lovely beloved muse seems to have no time for all of us these days. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for my muse to return.

But why should our gallant Prince Baz suffer. A dashing handsome young knight like him surely deserves to sweep his lady love of her feet. So I'm jumping the gun and starting the base of his story. Our story takes us to medieval Scotland, the age of brave lords and chivalry. Our hero Prince Baz is lord of the land, heir to an estate and the beloved darling of all the people. After all there is not a single mortal who would not have their heart warmed and charmed by the noble Prince Baz. He is divinely gifted with cheerful demeanor that lights up everyone. However, deep within our heart our prince is sad and lonely. So much pure love fills his heart, with no one to share it with. But Prince Baz and lonely, how can that be. Fear not my friends, for unbeknownst to him a magical destiny awaits him. For very soon a very special lady love is to walk into his life, and Prince Baz will experience the joy of a lifetime. A heartwarming love story that will charm everyone, the love story of a lifetime.

I'll be posting the beginning this weekend and slowly proceed the story as the days go by, making an attempt to be as diligent as possible. Perhaps the chance of a new twist in his tale and seeing what happens next might keep Prince Baz from going completely MIA during school. Of course folks please remember to cheer our Prince Baz all the time and keep wishing him the best of luck. This story is not completely pre-written, so throw in your input and feedback, and play your part in helping Prince Baz sweep his lady love off her feet (maybe even some hurdles for the brave knight to overcome).



Oh RTH

i don't know what to say im speechless 😲 😆

What an awesome intro can't wait to see how the story unfolds 👏 🤗

ur write amazingly well u haven't lost ur creative touch 👍🏼

i wish i cud hit Like button a gazillion times sigh ah its not to be

ur a real star u know that ⭐️

EDIT to add most important thing ur rating

well as himmy bhai says RTH ur writing is simply Superb, Fantastic Mindblowing, History not forgetting the little magic touch arabic from Asma 😆 Mumtaz 😃


Edited by baz786 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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RTH.. your writing deserves a pultizer.. 👏👏👏... i am addicted to your writing..👍🏼..i read everything on your blog..😛..you amaze me... remind me of my one of my high school english teacher.. she could make the simplest thing into a intriguing piece of literature.. 😛

I love thiss. cant wait to find to find out what happens next.. 😳



Edited by Meena1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh yeah...like Meena said, I've checked your blog too! Man, the way you write is just soooooooo awesome! I haven't read through all of the stuffs in your blog but your knee injury, fokken americans (or sth like that 😆), Desi parathas, SRK's detention, Rain, and so on...they're soo good and well-written! You express yourself in an incredible manner!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yes so have i checked her blog MS as i said to Meena RTH is very creative n writes well that she cud become a published author one day i tell you something i'd definately buy her books 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Haha, count me in too!
I'd surely buy RTH's books!
Have you considered that, RTH? If not, you should!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome Writing RTH...I have checked out your blog way back when I first saw-read u in DM...
I can't wait to read rest of Prince Baz's love story...Hope his dream girl love of his life shows up....Who is she? ❤️
Keep it up RTH....👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bazzy Boy transforms into Prince Charming. I can't wait to see who his Cinderella will be!

Originally posted by: return_to_hades

Worst, I feel that I'm lacking inspiration as my own lovely beloved muse seems to have no time for all of us these days. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for my muse to return.

Oh my. Did you miss me? 😳



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Posted: 16 years ago
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RTH!!!!👏 excellent job done and who say your inspiration is gone girl???? it's there and we can see it 😃

you created a sense of suspense which would develop not only with your writing but our participation which is a brilliant idea!😃

Prince do not worry now we all are with you to find your dream girl 😉

who knows maybe this thread would become your love thread huh 😛

good luck !⭐️

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